The Ratings War III: Republic of Heaven (Second Round Finals)

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Act 2: Rise

Chapter 4:
Judgement

-Do you want to dig deep, do you want to dive beneath the surface?-


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Alpha sprung through the roaring wormhole first, the filth of the industrial complex still on his loafers. Never looking back, he wandered out onto the green grass of God's waiting room. A perfect example of quiet, unmoving contemplation, with a quiet and contemplating being in its centre. He breathed deep, letting the gentle breeze fill his lungs as he looked out over the tranquility. "I have to admit, heaven would have to be something pretty classy to top this" He said, removing his glasses. "Pity, I feel a bit like Pandora"

And then the way he had opened, his Pandoras box, let Evil into the world. The difference between Alpha and Pandora, however, was that Alpha knew exactly what he had dragged into this faultless prison. The dark engine of profanity burst through the portal, rolling onto his feet as he exited. Alpha's blissful expression faltered slightly, there was just something about a six foot soup-can scraping loam off his ass that ruined the atmosphere of the place. It was like dragging a Klansman into a mosque, the two just seemed impossibly opposed, it almost hurt the eyes.

Alpha gestured at the Knight "Come and See" he said, beckoning towards Evil, and he turned to gesture at the wide plateu and it's splendour. "Here, the best of heaven and hell meet to create a place condusive the human mind and it's self-discovery. A paradise, but a prison, both punishment and pampering for those unsure of their fate: which is you"

Evil scraped the filth off his hands and looked around appraisingly. He turned, slowly, to look all around himself. What could be seen of the darkness inside his head seemed to be searching for something, and when he had finally turned the whole way around, he began to traipse down the side of the hill, his feet ruining the pristine grass beneath his heavy tread. Alpha watched, confused, as his companion marched off towards a distant wooded pond. "May I ask we're you're going?" He demanded, pulling his hands from his pockets and jogging down the slope.

"To get a drink" Said Evil, striding towards the copse of trees.

Alpha stopped dead, an eyebrow raised. It suddenly occured to him that he had no idea how Evil went to the toilet... and that he did not want to find out. The Terrorclad couldn't take off his armor, it was practically his skin! Unless... Alpha glanced at the rigid ass of Evil as it strode away from him, there was no visible sign of a failsafe. Perhaps he was joking and being unhelpful, it certainly fit his personality at times. No, that wasn't it, there was nothing he did without a cause, there wasn't such a thing as waste where he was concerned. Ugh, terrible pun.

He pulled out his glasses again and slipped them on (one day he was going to go an hour without needing to touch the things) and took off after the six-foot laxative mascot. Perhaps he would ask when the black bastard was in a better mood...

There was no air, that was what Alpha remembered, as he and Evil reached the pool, and the silent sociopath walked right into and under the water. There was no air from within his armor, no cascade of bubbles as it seeped through the cracks, no air as he exhaled. Not that Alpha expected any breathing from the bastard; he had managed to get his face within inches of that mask back in the living realm. And while the Terrorclad had thought he was trying to intimidate him, he had felt no breath from within the visor.

Now he hung in the water, spread out, kicking lazily to stay off the bottom in the centre of the pond. The water was crystal clear, and while he could see exactly what was happening, Alpha still had a profound and important question running rings inside his mind: What the fuck was the idiot doing?

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Dear sweet me was I filthy. I could hear the bits of grit between my plates just grinding away. It was like a constant, grating nagging every time I moved, it was like having Alfie in my fucking head. Oil stains, grease marks, paint and rust scraped from when I was wedged up between iron walls, all fall away into the water. They might call me a dirty bastard but they'll never be able to call me a filthy son of a *****. There's more blood caked in between the skin on my knuckles than there could have been in the bits of the people i was hitting. The water just washes it all away... It's cool, cold enough for me to feel it through the embrace of my body, and clear enough for me to see Alfonse up on the edge staring down at me. Pervert, i'm going to stand in the shower while he's trying to scrub himself, see how he likes it.

But even I can't go without air indefinately, refreshingly banal as swimming here might be. So as quick as the slowing liquid will let me, I walk out of the pond and shake like a dog to spray Alladin with as much water as I can muster off myself. Now, I think, i'm ready to meet the kids at the playground. "I'm off to try and get an eyeful of these blasphemers" I call to him, and my eyes turn south as my mind turns dark again.

Who do they think they are? The very fact that they aspire to be god proves they should never be granted the chance, not because of their lust for power but because of their blindness. If they are fools enough to see this world and wish to rule it, then they have no fucking right to breed let alone rule the place. What are the duties of the worlds tormentor, what are his debts? They don't ask questions, they don't care, but they think they might be the man to rule the universe... Disgusting. Justice and love might both be blind but I've yet to see any good come from either of them, being blind just means to smack your face into things, Whahahaha. I'm that thing.

This, this system is the problem. The source is corrupted, the highest power polluted, and until it's clean the entire heirarchy is doomed. I used to work for someone, before I died, his name was... was... something. How did I forget that? He used to say 'Shit runs downhill', as he made me pick up the shit from the bottom. Something happened to him, I think. Well, this is the top of the hill, and these people want to sit themselves, knowing what they are, on top of it. Knowing, complicit, guilty... monsters. I wonde- Jed! That was his name!

You have to laugh, you really have to laugh.

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The pair climbed another hill, Evil slowed by his heavy frame and Alpha by the fact that he had never been good at hills. But soon enough they stared from the top of the rise at the tiny shapes milling in the distance. "Going to go meet them?" Alpha asked, blinking in the sunlight as it appeared from behind a cloud. Evil ignored him, he had moved past anger at the sight of the pretenders, and was now once again suspended in the cool calm waters.

He ignored Alpha's question, giving one of his own; "Where do you find them?" He said camly, sitting down, resting on his arms as he reclined. At Alpha's look of incomprehension he waved a hand lazily at the people in the distance "Them, i mean, the people supposed to be worthy of godhood. Where do you dredge them from?" Evil asked as he motioned for Aplha to sit, it the first sign of concern for his comfort since they had met.

"Me?" Alpha replied as he lowered himself "I don't, I have no idea why they were picked or by who they were picked. I suppose it's to do wi- *Urk*"

Finger like speartips gripped his throat as Evil pinned him to the ground. The layers of jokes and curiotisty pulled aside in favor of fury. Eyes that Alpha couldn't see stabbed into his own more intensely than the fingers at his throat, and the Knightmare hissed his next question with glacial purpose, slow and unstoppable. "And why did you pick me?" came the words, straight into Alphas face "Do you think i'm so fucking far gone to see that you never do anything for a love of your fellow... whatever!?"

Alpha clawed at the grip around his throat, trying to draw air that wouldn't come. Evil kept staring into his eyes, leaning ever closer as his voice only deepened "I won't let a god rise, and that includes you. Don't give me whatever excuse you've cooked up in advance, I don't care why you wanted me". Alpha was released, and he gasped for breath as Evil began to leave "But here, it seems, I can touch you. And when you betray me, i'll cut you down like the squealing dog you are."

He was gone, heading back towards his grove by the pond, when Alpha stopped breathing again. He sat up, the bruises vanishing from his neck as fast as the grin appeared on his face. The unharmed enigma pulled out his glasses, flicking them open as he went to follow Evil. "Wanna bet?"

A post writtn on impulse and then edited on the fly. I may yet delete and scratch it from the record, so don't become attatched
 

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I will happily answer your challenge. I even feel privileged at being called out.
Jyill gazed around her in wonder, Jayck in turn in mute appreciation. The sheer vastness of the world around them was, well; vast.
?Wow.? Jayck finally whispered. Jyill merely nodded. They had arrived in purgatory, although they didn?t know that was the name of this place, nor did they yet understand the true nature of the task that lay before them. However all was about to be revealed, don?t believe me? Watch and see.

Having appreciated the world that they now inhabited the siblings turned their attention to this world inhabitants. And they thought they knew some strange people. All around them stood a collaboration of, well, things; for lack of a better word. There where men; there where women; there was even a monstrous creature with a bat like snout and wings, set on a humanoid form. And, was that a scarecrow that appeared to be talking to its self? If you aren?t sure about it, then I can clarify here that yes it was.

?So, what now?? Said Jyill, unconsciously she had found her self standing close to her brother; there hands subconsciously linking at the fingers in the softest of touches.
?Dano.? Replied Jayck, his detached eyes taking in everything and everyone around them as quickly as he could. All of them where threats. Even the outrageous looking clown, and the guy with pink hair. Both of them where threats. He couldn?t explain why he thought they were threats, only that he knew they were; the squeeze passing from Jyill?s hand to his confirmed that she held similar suspicions.

Jyill relaxed a little as she saw a man ascend a podium in the middle of the plateau that they appeared to be atop of. Jyill assumed it was a plateau of sorts, although she was as of yet to see an end to it. But it defiantly looked plateau-ish. The figure mounting the podium radiated love; everything about him was selfless, caring, and compassionate. Jyill was sure that even from where she stood she could taste the undying gratification he held for everyone and everything assembled before him.
?Pussy.? Whispered Jayck, Jyill laughed even though she knew she probably shouldn?t have. Something about mocking this man felt wrong, even to her.

The man began to speak. As selfless as he was public speaking apparently wasn?t his forte.
?Incapacitate?? mused Jayck, his words echoing those of the man on the podium. Jyill really wished the guy had introduced himself instead of stammering and stuttering selflessly.
?It means disable; you know, win without killing.? Replied Jyill as she watched the man wind up his speech, then retreat back into a shimmering nexus behind him.
?Oh.? Jayck could just has easily have said boring, but apparently he decided the extra syllable wasn?t worth the effort. Oh sufficed, Jyill understood what he had meant after all.

Despite Jayck?s indifference to the tournament Jyill herself wasn?t feeling so confident. She let her eyes wander across the crowd before them, drinking in the faces, drinking in the armour, drinking in the weapons, even drinking in some of the costumes. Every single person here was here for a reason ? although she wasn?t so sure about the guy fidgeting with his watch, he seemed like he was kind of lost. ? They all had a purpose; but herself and Jayck, for them this was just another leg of their journey back to normality. Well at least that was how she viewed it, she noticed that Jayck seemed to have lost himself in thought as he too studied the warriors gathered around them.
?Think we can win?? said Jayck softly. Jyill looked at him and smiled.
?Do we need to?? She replied, her fingers gripping his a little tighter.
?It?d be nice.? Jyill nodded in agreement, her hair jingling with the motion of her head. ?But I don?t know..? started Jayck softly, he turned his eyes back to Jyill and for the first time in years Jyill saw something in them she had thought all but gone; he was apprehensive. Even as she examined the concern etched on his face the first set of combatants was called out, along with the arena they would be fighting in. A well dressed gentlemen who cut a most dashing figure rose to answer one of the calls, while the demonic bat like creature answered the second. It looked like the tournament had begun in earnest.

?What?s wrong?? Asked Jyill tenderly, her heart reaching out to the only person she cared for in the world like she cared for her self.
?Well look Jyill, look at them all. They have swords, and guns, and some even taste like they have powers we can?t see.? Jyill often forgot that her brother could read people similarly to herself; he was just more introverted about it. ?I mean; what have we got against that Jyill??
?Why Jayck, I?m surprised at you.? Jyill chided her brother as softly as she could. ?We?ve got each other.? Jayck simply smiled in reply, as he knew his sister was right. The two of them where inseparable, and as long as they remained a pair no force; be it heaven or hell, would stop them. Don?t believe me? You soon will. Trust me on this, I?m telling a story.
 

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Zemalac: Emanuel Cazinto
Bling Cat: Drane

Rogueshadows: Mort & The Fae (Awesome band name, by the way)
RagnarokTres: Corbett Amadeus

Dastardos: Malcolm Lynch
Mookie_Magnus: Micah Miller

Ultrajoe: Evil
Lord Krunk: Axle and Lady Athena

Qayin: The Conduit
The_Logician

Higurashi: Rose
vid20: Jayck & Jyill

Ninjablu: Harlequin
Vanguard1219: Nathan Lancaster

Newclassic: Stan
Labyrinth: Janet Pyke

Flying-Emu: Rahk-Tahl
Crowghast: Oliver

Meatspace: Farfig Alhazarid & The Mark
Khedive Rex: Lex

Wesdabigman: Elsewise Ipswitch
SargentToughie: Garian

Mshcherbatskaya: The DJ
Armitage Shanks: Henry

Until sorrow approves it, it's changeable. Ask if ye desire, it may be possible.

Also: To level it out for 2-match pods, we'll need to send Shadows/Tres into the ring alone. Otherwise it's just... wrong.
 

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Crap, crap, crap...My computer at home is offline indefinitely. I can still post from my parents' computer, but I've lost all the work I had done on "Corbett in Purgatory." I know that this is optional, but I had some really good character development going on and I wanted to get it up later this afternoon. Stupid flimsy wireless antenna...I'll order a new one this afternoon and, if all goes well and the USPS doesn't become the USPoS, I should have it by the end of the week, two at the outside. I am the luckiest SoB on the face of the planet; there was a spare antenna in the box I got the wireless card in, so I'm back online, at least for now. I will post "Corbett in Purgatory" sometime tonight or tomorrow afternoon.

Also, I like that Ultrajoe set the two with scythes against each other in the first match. Hooray for unwieldy weapons!
 

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Ultrajoe said:
Zemalac: Emanuel Cazinto
Bling Cat: Drane

Rogueshadows: Mort & The Fae (Awesome band name, by the way)
RagnarokTres: Corbett Amadeus

Dastardos: Malcolm Lynch
Mookie_Magnus: Micah Miller

Ultrajoe: Evil
Lord Krunk: Axle and Lady Athena

Qayin: The Conduit
The_Logician

Higurashi: Rose
vid20: Jayck & Jyill

Ninjablu: Harlequin
Vanguard1219: Nathan Lancaster

Newclassic: Stan
Labyrinth: Janet Pyke

Flying-Emu: Rahk-Tahl
Crowghast: Oliver

Meatspace: Farfig Alhazarid & The Mark
Khedive Rex: Lex

Wesdabigman: Elsewise Ipswitch
SargentToughie: Garian

Mshcherbatskaya: The DJ
Armitage Shanks: Henry

Until sorrow approves it, it's changeable. Ask if ye desire, it may be possible.

Also: To level it out for 2-match pods, we'll need to send Shadows/Tres into the ring alone. Otherwise it's just... wrong.
This bracket now bears the official Sorrowful Seal of Approval:
 

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The Sorrow said:
Ultrajoe said:
Zemalac: Emanuel Cazinto
Bling Cat: Drane

Rogueshadows: Mort & The Fae (Awesome band name, by the way)
RagnarokTres: Corbett Amadeus

Dastardos: Malcolm Lynch
Mookie_Magnus: Micah Miller

Ultrajoe: Evil
Lord Krunk: Axle and Lady Athena

Qayin: The Conduit
The_Logician

Higurashi: Rose
vid20: Jayck & Jyill

Ninjablu: Harlequin
Vanguard1219: Nathan Lancaster

Newclassic: Stan
Labyrinth: Janet Pyke

Flying-Emu: Rahk-Tahl
Crowghast: Oliver

Meatspace: Farfig Alhazarid & The Mark
Khedive Rex: Lex

Wesdabigman: Elsewise Ipswitch
SargentToughie: Garian

Mshcherbatskaya: The DJ
Armitage Shanks: Henry

Until sorrow approves it, it's changeable. Ask if ye desire, it may be possible.

Also: To level it out for 2-match pods, we'll need to send Shadows/Tres into the ring alone. Otherwise it's just... wrong.
This bracket now bears the official Sorrowful Seal of Approval:
So have the results of Zemalac/Bling Cat been decided yet?
I'd imagine Zemalac won

Also so is the next match going to be Shadows/Tres alone and then, after that match, we go down the bracket having two battles go at a time?
 

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<spoiler=Killing Time or, Corbett in Purgatory>Necare Aetas
Corbett's hands tightened their grip on his scythe. That man...bat...thing...there was not a single glimmer of kindness or mercy in his soul...only blind faith that has been focused into rage at those who do not share his beliefs. Reminds me of the Crusades. And there are so many like him here, to a greater or lesser degree. he thought as he walked through the woods. I wonder who I will be called upon to fight...

Corbett's thoughts were interrupted as a young woman and someone who appeared to be her bodyguard walked past him. The wave of malice that he sensed, not focused on any one person or thing, but rather at everything not under it's complete dominion, set his senses to reeling. He leaned heavily on his scythe for balance. Such...such evil I have not felt since...since Lithuania and the homonculi... He shuddered as the pair moved out of his sphere of sensitivity, mercifully small in this common ground. I hope I am not one of those to face them. That experience is not one I care to repeat.

He sat under a tree near a stream. He reminisced, though perhaps it would be more appropriate to say he remembered as his memories were not exactly pleasant ones.

Russian-occupied Lithuania, 1876
"Fiend! I will not let you leave this place alive!" Corbett yelled over the roar of the rushing river as he faced the one who controlled the homonculi he had been fighting throughout Europe and Western Asia for the last 15 years.

<color=F08080>"Oh won't I? Why do you protect the humans? A misplaced sense of loyalty? Honor?"

"I protect them because they cannot protect themselves from the likes of you!"

<color=F08080>"Faugh! What am I except a better version of them? What are you?"

"I...I don't know...I only know that I am bound by a vow to protect them to the day of my death. And you threaten them by your very existence! I cannot allow you to live!"

<color=F08080>"Idealistic fool! Do you believe they would be pleased to know you fight for them? No! They would shun you as they have shunned me! They made me what I am!"

"...That may be so...but as a "superior being" you should have let it go...as I did..." SCHRACK! Corbett barely dodged the evil one's lightning spell. He threw a fireball back at him...

"Hmmm?" Corbett was drawn out of his reverie by his name being called across the mesa, along with the name "Mort."

"That must be my battle." he muttered to himself as he picked himself and his scythe up and went across the field of Purgatory towards the entrance to their arena.
<spoiler=OOC>So I have two weeks to do the battle sequence, right?
 

Ultrajoe

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Dastardos said:
Also so is the next match going to be Shadows/Tres alone and then, after that match, we go down the bracket having two battles go at a time?
Correct. As the first round, they have two weeks to complete their post.

After that, there will be only a week bewteen deadlines. You know your matches, you can start writing now. I highly suggest we send a message to all players informing them of the fact, or else we'll have late entries and i'll be forced to rip off limbs.

I'm willing to count genitals as a limb.

The moment Sorrow gives us arenas or approves my suggestion of letting people write the setting how they please (The only word describing it is either 'Heaven', 'Hell' or 'Purgatory', interpreted how you wish). If we use this, the next three matches are in purgatory, the next four in hell and the final four in heaven.

We await approval.
 

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Ultrajoe said:
Dastardos said:
Also so is the next match going to be Shadows/Tres alone and then, after that match, we go down the bracket having two battles go at a time?
Correct. As the first round, they have two weeks to complete their post.

After that, there will be only a week bewteen deadlines. You know your matches, you can start writing now. I highly suggest we send a message to all players informing them of the fact, or else we'll have late entries and i'll be forced to rip off limbs.

I'm willing to count genitals as a limb.

The moment Sorrow gives us arenas or approves my suggestion of letting people write the setting how they please (The only word describing it is either 'Heaven', 'Hell' or 'Purgatory', interpreted how you wish). If we use this, the next three matches are in purgatory, the next four in hell and the final four in heaven.

We await approval.
Let us know when our arenas are picked. I don't want to start writing and find out I'm in the wrong arena or something
 

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It's official: Zemalac has emerged victorious.

Now for the next two matches, which will occur simultaneously. You each have five days.
Joe, your suggestion on arenas is not approved. I will continue with original settings for each battle.

Match II: Mort and the Fae vs. Corbett Amadeus

Location: Hellish: KOME?S NARROWS

One of the many, MANY hells is that of the self-proclaimed Lord of Slaughter, Kome. His realm is distinguished by the endless combat between demons, devils, and everything in between. In a twisted version of Norse mythology?s Valhalla, damned souls are sent to the front lines on both sides. They can never achieve rest, for they are reincorporated and sent to fight once more, their pain eternally stacking the more and more they are slain.
The Narrows consists of a long, barren, cracked plain of brimstone, the ground sharp and merciless to unshod feet. It is bordered on both sides by rivers of lava, with just enough space in between for ten score mortal men to pass through standing shoulder-to-shoulder.
Combatants will have to find each other amidst the melee and survive the onslaught.

Match III: Malcom Lynch vs. Micah Miller

Location: Divine: NIRVANA

Nirvana is as chaotic as can be. Spastic winds, some cold, some hot, rake the uneven landscape. Deserts can become tundras can become forests; nothing about this place is consistent. Even the inconsistency is inconsistent; times between changes can vary from minutes to years.
Only those truly enlightened can survive amidst the chaos for any significant period of time.
 

Ultrajoe

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Sorrow, the point of only letting RagnorakTres and Shadows go alone was to prevent me and Krunk knowing who our next match will be. It splits up the rounds and mushes things into a pulp, the reason for the bracket system is to break things up... *twitch* you're merging brackets! *Collapses into a jerking, twitching, frothing pile*

Me and Krunk will join in on this round if you want, to even things out. It's a two-weeker, so the extra two stories shouldn't slow it down or overfill it with story. Krunk won't mind I'm sure.

Also, could we have the open-interpretation arenas for Round 3? That's where the ability to seriously have some fun with imagination/character comes into play. I have some Ideas for the last-chance round and Semi Final/Final as well, but i'll PM those to you. You really need my MSN, you know, i'll give it to you.

The facts of this post, because I can be hard to understand: Me and krunk joining this round evens things out, I really like the idea of player-written arenas, and when I overload I spin around on the floor with froth bubbling out of my helmet along with spanish profanity.

Edit:

Spikeworld level? Really? It breeds some great action sequences, Sorrow, but arenas like that really restrict the options of certain players... all of them in fact. While the challenge of writing should certainly include writing to constraints, good constraints breed opportunity rather than reduce it. Nirvana is static, infinite and unchanging, fall and die, leap from pole to pole, a one trick toothpick holder. What if your character has no arms, or is heavier than some light recreational canoes? Bending the character and integrity thereof because the setting can't shift is a sign that it's not an opportunity-breeder.

In short: People would be writing the setting, not the characters. They should be a backdrop, not the independant variable. The role of independant variable should always go to character, not character abilities and landscape. With all due respect, this level does not do that.

Added to that is the seemingly random allocation of Divine/Hellish/Middleground arenas. Is there a system used to select these classifications? The whole point of the bracket system is to be up front with all of the rules involved, so people can plan and be reassured. If you are assigning them at random then you need to assign one to every match and future match now so they can begin writing.
 

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Elsewise stood staring at the man so famous among the mortals back on Earth, and continued to gaze, even after he had finished speaking.

Azrael smiled and started, "I realize that you never had belief in God, so Jesus talking in front of you may be blowing your closed and simple brain. So, any questions regarding the man bleeding from both hands I'd be more than willing to..."

Elsewise stood in silence, turning away from the sight of him.

"Back on Earth, I couldn't shut you up and now, you're as silent as the air... Good." Azrael said, indicating that Elsewise follow him out of sight.

A mile or so away from the arena, and a mile of silence later, Azrael stopped walking and Elsewise followed suit.

"All right, I'm going to examine your reflexes and strength... We need to know how to go up against who we're going up against... You ever see Rocky?"

Elsewise smiled, "So you're Mick?"

Azrael sighed, muttering to himself, "Typical. Human never touches the bible or goes to church, but he's seen Sylvester Stallone try to act. Just can't wait 'til I can my hands on him, we'll see who has the eye of the tiger..."

Azrael slapped on a pair of gloves and brought his hands forward, but Elsewise stepped back out of fear... He hadn't felt another being touch him for a long time, and the look on their faces of disgust when they felt the face behind the shadow or the build underneath the cloak, was disgusting to him.

"Dammit, I can't look at you, if you keep cowering away. Just try and think of something else... tell me about where you came from or something..."

"Shouldn't you know that already, Mr. Angel of Death?"

"We're doing this for YOUR good, not mine...?"

Elsewise began to think back and walk down his memories...

It had been a long time since I had seen the laboratories? I didn?t even know why I was made. Well? that wasn?t true; I knew exactly why he was made. To kill. Hunt and kill. Hunt, torture, and kill, in that order. ?The ?grotesque? design and build of the creature? was unintentional according to the files I found on myself, but they were unaltered as the ?mental images would haunt? whomever I hunted.

It was almost funny remembering back to my first moments of consciousness. A nurse screaming, doctors desperately trying to contain her hysteria as I blinked my eyes in my first waking moments. I remember very little about my early days. My only vivid memories came from moments with her.

She wasn?t like the others, no, not at all. When she touched me, she did not find my face repulsive but extraordinary. My build was not arabesque, but scientifically efficient. My mind was not romantic or impaired. She was merely a child glancing down into an ant farm, or walking through a museum, taking fascination in a scientific breakthrough. But then again, an ant farm wasn?t considered a sleight against God.

She didn?t understand what I could do, what they were making me do, what I wasn?t preventing myself from doing. When she discovered what the organization was making him do? She hatched a plan to help me escape, and it worked perfectly. Before then, they only let me out when they wanted something killed or were going to tell they wanted me to kill something. I was out of my cage and free for the first time. I did only what came naturally to me. I killed her.

I never understood the concept of death then. It was all a game to me. I was let out, I hunted, Target died, I was picked up, and I was put back into the cage. Wash, rinse, repeat. I never stayed afterwards to the limbs twitch, the eyes shift, the mouth shake. But even in death, she cared for me. She knew that I was doing what came naturally and I only took orders from those working in the organization. So, she gave me one last order. She told me to run. She told me to run until I was out of the laboratory, then run until I was out of the cover of the building. Then run until I couldn?t see buildings anymore. Then run farther. And she told me once I was safe and had lived a real life, to do as I wished, whatever I wished. She said all this, while looking into my eyes. She didn?t hurl, she didn?t cry, she didn?t avert eye contact. Her voice didn?t even change pitch from the sword stroke to her final breath. She looked into my eyes like an equal person. Like a ?real? person?


?So then, I??

?By Jehovah himself, I finished 3 minutes ago, you can stop whining about your lot in life.?

If Elsewise could blush, he would have. Instead, he only stared straight ahead, unresponsive and lifeless, like a machine.

?All right, I?ve got a good idea, what we?re working with?I?d say we have a 1 in 150,000 chance of actually winning this thing??

?Glad you?re so confident....?

Azrael smiled, hooking his still gloved hand around Elsewise?s shoulder. ?Hey, don?t let your malformed head worry about a thing. You?ve got a trick or two up your sleeve? Don?t worry about a thing? Just win so I can start shining my crown.?

Elsewise only nodded as Azrael began walking back to the arena. He hadn?t thought about her in such a long time. As he walked back, he wondered if he was following what she wanted?



And now for the usual demands, commentary! Critique! Criticism!

Seriously, this isn't my best work so a swift kick in the right direction would be greatly appreciated from anyone.
 

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Names in bold are who I predict to win that match.
Zemalac: Emanuel Cazinto
Bling Cat: Drane

Rogueshadows: Mort & The Fae (Awesome band name, by the way)
RagnarokTres: Corbett Amadeus

Dastardos: Malcolm Lynch
Mookie_Magnus: Micah Miller

Ultrajoe: Evil
Lord Krunk: Axle and Lady Athena

Qayin: The Conduit
The_Logician

Higurashi: Rose
vid20: Jayck & Jyill

Ninjablu: Harlequin
Vanguard1219: Nathan Lancaster

Newclassic: Stan
Labyrinth: Janet Pyke

Flying-Emu: Rahk-Tahl
Crowghast: Oliver

Meatspace: Farfig Alhazarid & The Mark
Khedive Rex: Lex

Wesdabigman: Elsewise Ipswitch
SargentToughie: Garian

Mshcherbatskaya: The DJ
Armitage Shanks: Henry

Zemalac: Emanuel Cazinto
RagnarokTres: Corbett Amadeus

Dastardos: Malcolm Lynch
Ultrajoe: Evil

Qayin: The Conduit
Higurashi: Rose

Vanguard1219: Nathan Lancaster
Newclassic: Stan

Crowghast: Oliver
Khedive Rex: Lex

SargentToughie: Garian
Mshcherbatskaya: The DJ

Zemalac: Emanuel Cazinto
Dastardos: Malcolm Lynch

Higurashi: Rose
Newclassic: Stan

Khedive Rex: Lex
SargentToughie: Garian

Zemalac: Emanuel Cazinto
Newclassic: Stan
SargentToughie: Garian

Dastardos: Malcolm Lynch
SargentToughie: Garian

Higurashi: Rose
Khedive Rex: Lex

Dastardos: Malcolm Lynch
Khedive Rex: Lex

This is based off the logic in this post. [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/jump/362.107952.1945035]

And yes I'm that cocky. My original bracket had Joe vs Khedive in Round 5, but I decided to have some confidence and by a cocky son of a ***** and put myself there.

Oh and goody its my turn to fight.
Now to put on my thinking cap and think how the hell to fight in this Nirvana Arena.

Also I'm confused how long I have to write my fight. Sorrow please clarify since your plans differ from Joe's.

EDIT: Bracket fixed.
 

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Dastardos, I'm truly flattered that you have a delusion that I stand a snowball's chance in hell at beating Misc.

Other than that, this gives me an idea...

[HEADING=1] Place yer bets nah!!![/HEADING]

the Sargent Toughie RW3 betting arena is now open! place bets on who you want to see victorious in each round for glory, pride... and [sup]uh........[/sup]more glory
 

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SargentToughie said:
Dastardos, I'm truly flattered that you have a delusion that I stand a snowball's chance in hell at beating Misc.

Other than that, this gives me an idea...

[HEADING=1] Place yer bets nah!!![/HEADING]

the Sargent Toughie RW3 betting arena is now open! place bets on who you want to see victorious in each round for glory, pride... and [sup]uh........[/cup]more glory
I put you above her because of a few reasons, main one being I like your character a lot more than hers, and I think Ivan could kick The DJ's ass. I like how I got cocky and put me over Joe ;)
 

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SargentToughie said:
Dastardos, I'm truly flattered that you have a delusion that I stand a snowball's chance in hell at beating Misc.

Other than that, this gives me an idea...

[HEADING=1] Place yer bets nah!!![/HEADING]

the Sargent Toughie RW3 betting arena is now open! place bets on who you want to see victorious in each round for glory, pride... and [sup]uh........[/sup]more glory
Please don't, keep this thread clean. If you want to do something like this, I may make a support thread for RW3, for random challenges and betting. For now, hold tight.

My post above is edited, also, please read it.

Dastardos said:
I like how I got cocky and put me over Joe ;)
You wouldn't be in that 'pod' if you didn't stand a decent chance. Note: To stand that chance you'll need to edit your posts better and tighten your style. Whether you like my stories or not, I'm set to stomp all over you by the sheer fact that my stories read much cleaner, no matter the character or plot (apart from the spelling error I always miss while editing but notice the moment I post... Damnit). Fix that up, and we have ourselves a party.
 

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Ultrajoe said:
SargentToughie said:
Dastardos, I'm truly flattered that you have a delusion that I stand a snowball's chance in hell at beating Misc.

Other than that, this gives me an idea...

[HEADING=1] Place yer bets nah!!![/HEADING]

the Sargent Toughie RW3 betting arena is now open! place bets on who you want to see victorious in each round for glory, pride... and [sup]uh........[/sup]more glory
Please don't, keep this thread clean. If you want to do something like this, I may make a support thread for RW3, for random challenges and betting. For now, hold tight.

My post above is edited, also, please read it.
I was so fond of that idea... oh well, I guess you have a point. Adding a gambling area to this thread would make an already cluttered thread absolutely unreadable
 

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Joe like I told you last night I'd love a support thread for practice, and random challenges.

Also, yes I don't know how a zombie will be able to fight on Nirvana. He is an undead corpse he won't be able to jump around the place.
 

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Zemalac: Emanuel Cazinto
Bling Cat: Drane

Rogueshadows: Mort & The Fae (Awesome band name, by the way)
RagnarokTres: Corbett Amadeus

Dastardos: Malcolm Lynch
Mookie_Magnus: Micah Miller

Ultrajoe: Evil
Lord Krunk: Axle and Lady Athena

Qayin: The Conduit
The_Logician

<b.Higurashi: Rose[/B]
vid20: Jayck & Jyill

Ninjablu: Harlequin
Vanguard1219: Nathan Lancaster

Newclassic: Stan
Labyrinth: Janet Pyke

Flying-Emu: Rahk-Tahl
Crowghast: Oliver

Meatspace: Farfig Alhazarid & The Mark
Khedive Rex: Lex

Wesdabigman: Elsewise Ipswitch
SargentToughie: Garian

Mshcherbatskaya: The DJ
Armitage Shanks: Henry

I bet 10,000 glory and 500 pride on each of the bolded names.