The Ratings War V: Original Sin - Finals (Winner Announced)

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Lord Krunk

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@Nukey: @sky14kemea: @wesdabigman:

I've decided to take back my idea of myself being the decider because you guys have expressed a large interest. If Nukey or the other judges are unable to judge, temporarily or permanently, or miss the deadline, then I will take their place as judge. That sound good by you?

Here's the cast now:

Judges:

1) Nukey
2) wesdabigman
3) sky14kemea

Contestants:

Fallen-Angel-Risen-Demon: Digaina (Pride)
RagnorakTres: That Which Bleeds (Wrath)
NewClassic: Harold (Sloth)
HSIAMetalKing: Eurania (Gluttony)
Jarsteen: Leviathan (Envy)
Sam G: The Gold King (Greed)
The_Logician19: Dragon (Wrath)
Zemelac: Pending
Labyrinth: Pending
Fraught: Pending
Lost In The Void: Pending
pigeon_of_doom: Pending
Shapsters: Pending
revolverwolf: Pending
Soothsayer: Pending
 

Crowghast

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A friend demanded me to return and enter myself as contestant. I am willing and able, so long as I have Krunk's permission.

(This Space reserved for character sheet.)
 

Lord Krunk

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Crowghast said:
I am willing and able, so long as I have Krunk's permission.
Definitely.

So there's been a bit of mucking around with the cast recently: Ultrajoe's dropped out unless a certain condition is met, which I shall not reveal just to see if it is. Trust me on this one. Logician's changed his intro and vice somewhat, perfectly legal with 9 days to go, and @RagnorakTres: I'm getting right to reading over your entry as soon as I type this.

Here's the cast now:

Judges:

1) Nukey
2) wesdabigman
3) sky14kemea

Contestants:

Fallen-Angel-Risen-Demon: Digaina (Pride)
RagnorakTres: That Which Bleeds (Wrath)
NewClassic: Harold (Sloth)
HSIAMetalKing: Eurania (Gluttony)
Jarsteen: Leviathan (Envy)
Sam G: The Gold King (Greed)
The_Logician19: Dragon (???)
Zemelac: Pending
Labyrinth: Pending
Fraught: Pending
Lost In The Void: Pending
pigeon_of_doom: Pending
Shapsters: Pending
revolverwolf: Pending
Soothsayer: Pending
Crowghast: Pending

16 Contestants. The greatest number. So divisible by 2...
 

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God darn it, I finally did it. I really wanted to join this thing (even though I feel inadequate compared to some of the other competitors, you know who you are) and even though I got off to a decent start, as soon as I reached "weapons", the first sign of creative drought started lurching up to me, poking its soft, wet, snotty nose against my toes, eagerly burrowing into them like a bad, fictional infection that just won't go away, sliding its way under my skin closer and closer to my face, and covering everything as it neared. The second I reached for further pastures, particularly "powers", I felt that no matter what, I just can't seem to even shuffle through this, no matter how hard I try.

Well, now I got my shit together, and I decided "eh, fuck it if it sucks, I'll just try to come up with something. I can't let someone down with an RP, especially as I've stopped participating in RPs because other people have done it to me, and to the creators of awesome RPs I've participated in that I've wanted to live on prosperously until the story reaches a satisfying ending, but I've been disappointed before. I can't be such a hypocritic, I've got to do it."

...And here I am. I hope it's satisfactory.

Name: Chance Connie.

Nickname: Chunchy.

Age: 35.

Appearance: There has always been varying opinions of Chance. Even though he was fit, both physically and mentally, excelling in physical tasks and having a good sense of humour, along with sufficient efficiency dealing with tasks that strained the mind greatly, he had never put much attention into looking presentable or bothering himself with social conventions or well-known hygienic guidelines. He didn't consider himself weird, but the impression he left to other people subconsciously pushed him to mold himself to fit them. At least to some extent. Is unshaven, though forces himself to trim his beard sometimes. Has medium-length, curly dark brown hair (think The Dude).

Clothing: Chance is still in his teenage years with one foot. Wears colourful t-shirts and slimmer jeans. In the winter, he prefers to wear a regular, long, buttoned coat, cotton pants and a wide bowler, trying to be similar to the front man of one of his favourite bands.

Weapons: Always wears bodyguards under his clothes, as he likes to dabble in street fighting, and is generally addicted to fighting, even outside of usual "street fighting" events. Has an old rifle that has survived for an unexpectedly long time, though one that's untrustful, and a decently-sized collection of knives, many of which he uses daily, though the majority of which he keeps as defence tools.

Powers: The saying "Follow your heart" has been near and dear to Chance's heart ever since he found it to be majorly beneficial to him, after having, up to that point, ignored it and gone through too stormy a life than he had wanted to. Sometime after his teenage years, he has often felt certain places pulling him towards them like magnet. Certain things that always invade his mind, steal any cohesive concentration abilities from his conscious mind, and won't let go before they've been fulfilled, though he's tried to ignore any of them, as every time that happened, he could easily think of reasons why following it would've brought about disastrous events. Many of them have later proven to lead him onto paths that have helped him out of everything bad, and nudged him towards good.
Since a day long ago that he struggles to remember even a speck of, he has had magically powerful throwing abilities. He can throw items at incredible speed, and with incredible force. Has a very strong grasp, too.

Strengths: Has been turned by others' influence into an oddity. Finds many usually horrifying, weird and/or sickening things fascinating, and behaves erratically, switching between a calm and smooth demeanour to an unconstrained maniacal nutcake'ish one, and thus is extremely hard to reason or manipulate with through any kind of emotions. Is very self-conscious about all of it, when he doesn't currently experience it.

Weaknesses: Is absent-minded and generally very shoddy at noticing anything if there's many things to keep his eye on. Has deteriorated eyesight (short-sighted), but hasn't started using glasses as he's always thought he doesn't need to, thus isn't able to read anything, or clearly see details of something far away.

Personality: Finds many usually horrifying, weird and/or sickening things fascinating, and behaves erratically, switching between a calm and smooth demeanour to an unconstrained maniacal nutcake'ish one, and thus is extremely hard to reason or manipulate with through any kind of emotions. Is very self-conscious about all of it, when he doesn't currently experience it (pasted from an earlier segment). Likes to think he is better than others, but often when experiencing someone else's creations or achievements feels petty and untalented compared to them. Is very determined when doing something that will lead to an outcome that he deeply wants. Is prone to take regular breaks whenever a chance approaches.

Fear: Has an unnatural fear of being in rooms with no visible and usable exit. The smaller the space, the worse. Is scared of balloons and keeps away from them, in fear of popping. Is afraid of eating anything alive, and of anything sharp coming near to his face.

Vice: Wrath.

Bio: Born to a single mother, Chance was showered with attention, adoration and material entertainment when he was a wee boy. He always had the newest technological dongle, or other thingamajig that was desirable by many of his peers. But through the years, that certain kind of display of "love" led to a variety of problems; ranging from disapproval from other children of Chance's occasional display of condescension, and from their relatives, directed at his mother, to financial problems.
The attitude of people near to them made their options limited when money was tight, and one day, Chance woke up with a pillow tightly pressed on his face. His own mother was trying to smother him, take away from him what she had created herself, out of a desire to give something to the world, to have something to care for and to be prideful over what a creation of herself could achieve in the world, something that she surely wanted to contribute to. Yet here she was, Chance thought, mashing together trains of thought in his head, thinking about what to do, what to think, and of the implications. Through an arduous and traumatic trial for him, he managed to prolong it enough for their uncle to come visiting, as he had planned.
Not getting a response after calling multiple times, knowing that they were both home, he recruited the help of the police, and he was pulled away from her at the nick of time.

After becoming the newest member of his uncle's family, a few weeks later, he was sent to a reformatory, for reasons he didn't know, couldn't figure out, and after getting mixed responses from everyone he asked, decided to give up pursuing the reasoning behind it. Finding a foster family, he was once again a member of a real family, though things got sour, and he moved a few times from family to family, even living with his grandmother for some time, leaving after experiencing domestic abuse from her husband (not his grandfather).

Years later managing to meet his mother face-to-face again after she was released from prison, he masked himself with a veil of forgiveness, and managed to move into his own apartment thanks to financial support from his mother, who had managed to get a financial foothold in the years before Chance achieved adulthood.

He spent the next few years like any normal adult: woke up in the morning, went to work, came back home, and did whatever came into his mind, or went with someone somewhere when the chance came up. He worked as a receptionist at an expensive, big-shot hotel, every day wondering how he got the job, attributing it to whatever his appearance deceivingly showed everyone, carefully constructed from completely separate blocks than what was stirring inside. The pay was good, and he was seemingly satisfied with life enough; he had money, he had a place to live, and nothing particularly bad had happened in a long time. One day, though, everything started going downhill. His workplace was attacked, once by a bunch of num nut lunatics, once by robbers who he figured weren't thinking quite clearly, as he wasn't sure why someone would steal something as finely-secured as a hotel like this, followed by everything, ranging from further assaults and robberies to cars crashing into the building, sometimes due to a chase, sometimes due to the desire to rob and gain money with the added bonus of having to look behind one's back for the rest of one's life, to what happened the day his life took a sharp turn into complete oblivion and ruin.

The day a plane crashed into the hotel was the day the most visible and recognizable permanent fixture in the hotel who had been there on all days of all the accidents in the last few years, called the Hoteluckless Chance by the media, was finally relieved of his occupation, followed by hundreds of the workers at the hotel, many falling to the collapse of the building, crushed under boulders of rock and glass, and others left unemployed by their workplace now having been destroyed, demolished, turned into metaphorical dust.

The following months spent trying to get over the shock and the physical wounds that that event has inflicted upon him, he leeched off his mother, turning to fighting as a pastime, hobby and stress reliever. Right after his first win against his first real opponent, he got an adrenaline injection that seemed to fill him to the brim and devour his life of any other desires he might have had. Hastily finding himself a shit job as a worker in a warehouse, menially carrying items in and out all day, he kept it, earning just enough to support himself, waiting every day eagerly for the evening.

And thus has his life proceeded routinely for some time.

[sub][sub][sub]You may've noticed I didn't address how or when he got his "powers" and many other points talked about in other segments, but I did that on purpose; first, it would've gotten waaay too long (and it got long enough as it is, phew), and because I want some mystery to remain elevated over him. Also, I intentionally left the "bio" broken at a point that was some time before the current time (the time Ratings War takes place).[/sub][/sub][/sub]

"Phew," Chance spurted out, clutching his knees, breathing heavily and shaking in the cold wind. He looked back at the outwardly run-down building behind him, catching brief glimpses of shadows flying by the windows, some more subdued in their movements than others. He wiped the cold tip of his nose, rubbing the backside of his hand into his pants.
"The fuck am I waiting here for?" he asked himself. "This is just like all of those stupid movies. I sit here like a fucking retard, looking over my shoulder back at where I came from, foreshadowing a chase as everything inside is stirring of a riot, or at the very least some unexpected happening."

He turned around to face the cold, late-autumn street. The holes in the road were moist and thus darker, standing out from the rest of the road, which was covered by the darker spots occupying it. In the blink of an eye, he realized it had started to drizzle, and it was probably going to start raining.
"Well, shit," he said, remembering how far his home was, and how he hadn't bothered to bring nearly enough money to get accommodation somewhere. "What will I do now?" he asked himself, already sprinting down the street, under the protruding roof of a grocery shop.
Though the longer he waited, the stronger the rainfall got, the wetter everything around him got, and more precipitation hit him, now falling down in an angle, the shop providing little protection. He didn't want to go inside; he had bruises and wounds, and his clothes were bloody from some places. Had he not been against the idea of loitering in a grocery shop in the first place, he wouldn't have entered because of those things.

And just as the first thunder struck, it lit the proverbial bulb hovering above his head.
"I know," he said, once again exercising his habit of talking to himself. "I'll go to Ronnie's place," he continued, planning to go and bother one of his better friends with letting him come over for the night. Just as he reached into his pocket, he sighed and slammed the ground with his foot.
"And now I left my phone behind. Great, fucking great. First I leave a building and stand there slack-jawed like I was a stupid film character, and now I'm here, about to visit one of my best friends in stormy weather. What's next, someone attacks me and I--"

There was nothing further for him. He felt something hit him, devouring away all physical sensations, including any physical feeling when he hit the ground. His eyes fell shut and he felt nothing no more.

Also, Nuke, I noticed my character has one particular thing that is pretty similar to yours, but I ensure you, I didn't read any character sheets before writing this, and it is just a coincidence. Besides, I didn't have any other ideas for "powers" for a regular, every day, average Joe that my character was...supposed to...be. Even though he maybe turned into something a bit different.
 

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Name: My name? Psh- the mere thought of you not knowing of I, Beuxhart, the Blade of Shadows- The Wanderer of the Void- The Silent Darkness, astounds me.

Nickname: ... I believe I probably just mentioned a few. Stop asking stupid questions, or I'll probably have to do some ventilating of that head of yours. Ugh... the expense of ventilating an entire head though... Perhaps I'll just threaten... Yeaaaahhhh.

Age: Older than a look and younger than I seem. Or somewhere inbetween? Why is this of any relevance?

Appearance: Well, let's see here... I've got black hair, pretty golden eyes that make lots of people scream in terror, a nice little scar that fits so nicely beneath my right eye (did I mention they were gold?). I also seem to be perpetually wearing a black, hooded cloak, black boots and black gloves. So... in other words... I'm a goth? Ugh, can't you just look, you imbecile?!

Clothing: Why do these questions seem to intertwine with each other? In the name of the Void itself... Recall what I just said.

Weapons: Finally, something I ENJOY talking about.

You see, I made this little beauty myself. It appears as nothing but a hilt at first, correct? Well, with a mere snap of my fingers, WHAZAM, instant sword. And, with a flick of my wrist, PLAKOO, now it's a scythe. Also, it can change into a gun and a spear... but I see little use for either of those settings.

Powers: Well, let's see here... Due to my massive amount of titles, you'd have to assume I had some sort of connection to Darkness... Which both is and is not true at the same time. You see, while it appears that my abilities are completely rooted in Shadow, most people would be surprised to discover that I've actually got to manifest my own "darkness" before it can be used. It's more of anti-matter or negative energy than shadow and darkness... after all, you can't manipulate nothing.

Among other things, I can bind, slash, maim, explode, destroy, explode, kill, explode and horrifically torture people with my abilities, not to mention create semi-illusions and open portals. I'm also quite talented with any one of the weapons I carry. I am, without a doubt, pretty freaking awesome.

Strengths: Well, aside from my dashing good looks and my way with the ladies, I'm quite talented in swordplay, gunplay, scytheplay and spearplay... not to mention I can kill things with manifested darkness. Uhm... I'm dedicated when something is put into my head, nothing can stop me from completing a task set before me, aside from probably death. Thinking outside the box and reading other people like open books are other useful "abilities" I have.

I'm also incredibly resilient, due to the fact that most of my organic body has been replaced by anti-matter-slash-darkness-slash-that-stuff-I-use-to-kill-people. Sure, if I sustain enough damage I'll dissipate into nothing and/or die... but not bleeding and not having anything other than a physical shape to injure is quite useful.

Weaknesses: Insult me and you're as good as dead. I can't stand belittlement of any nature and will go out of my way to end whoever has the balls to make fun of me. I tend to resort to violence before talking things out... and dragging out the kill is much more fun than ending a worthy foe immediately. Even if I'm losing I'll never run from a fight, as there is always, ALWAYS a way to defeat an opponent. Even an immortal can be buried hundreds of feet beneath the Earth and thus defeated. While I may have the ability to port in and out of places at will, I'd rather stand and fight a losing battle than run like a pussy in the other direction. Did I mention that I wasn't a people person?

Personality: Cold, manipulative, and a complete and total douchebag are a few choice words people have used to describe me. Personally, I find myself rather narcissistic and sarcastic, not to mention cocky beyond all measure. I'd also argue that I'm batshit insane and that I've got more curse words in my vocabulary than real words. Because real words are for sissies.

Fear: Fears? Feh, I fear nothing. Not the cold embrace of death, nor the fact that I will never experience life to the fullest... If you can call what I live a "life". I don't fear that my pursuit of a soul to call my own will, most likely, end in failure and that I'll just be another villain, forgotten to the ages while the "hero" who will eventually kill me rises to fame and glory.

No... I fear nothing, for I can fear nothing. I do, however, think on these things often.

Vice: Greed, Envy and Wrath all fit me rather well. Greed for a soul, as I am envious of the ability to feel and care as the others I have met do. Sure... I can simulate emotion, and I do it on a regular basis, but it does nothing in comparison to the real thing.
Wrath for the hatred against those who left me without the ability to feel and act on my urges, my primal desires. If I ever came face to face with this "God" that you people blather about, I'd kill him myself.

Bio: Hrm... Where to begin? I woke up one day, and from there-on I've been searching for a purpose to the sort of "half-life" I live. I've had my abilities as far back as I can remember and have used them almost since my appearance into the world.

There were others, you know, others just like me. However, those who would call themselves heroes and legends destroyed all of them... all but me.

You see, I was cunning, unlike the rest of them. They felt that we needed to fight these heroes to show that we wanted nothing more than the ability to feel as they did. However, that tactic doesn't usually work against people who scream and run at you and cut you in half before asking questions... Which is why I hid. Sure, at first I fought... but there was very little I could do at that time, and my powers weren't fully realized. It wasn't until I made a trip to The Mouth of the Void that I learned the true extent of my abilities and returned to end the descendants of the "heroes" that ended those like me. Unfortunately, my journey to the Void had some... undesirable side-effects. You see, nothing returns from a place such as the Void with the entirety of themselves intact. Some people lose limbs... others, like myself, lose their minds. And boy oh boy did I lose mine... THough, I'm working on finding it again, but that's another story to tell and has not too much to do with my history.

-Ahem- Eventually, word of my existence spread and those who wanted glory, those who were "undefeated" in battle sought me out. Each new challenge fell before my blade almost as soon as they presented themselves, believing their "light" could defeat my "darkness" due to the simple fact that "light cancels out darkness". Oh how wrong they were...

Among other things, I've wiped out entire planets in my search for a "soul". Granted, there wasn't very much in the terms of "technology" on these worlds, however, that's still an absolute shit ton of people when you think about it. Although I suppose not all of them were people as you and I know them and more people as... You know, they thought. It's kind of funny the edge "magical" powers give you and the ability to hop from world to world at will via portal gives you.

Until I got pulled into this mess, whatever the hell this is, I was in the process of making a machine that could remove the "soul" from a living person and place it inside of an object. It was, by no means, a successful venture before I was pulled away from my work, resulting in more bloody explosions of human bodies than anything else. What little data I pulled from the program showed only that the soul cannot be removed from the body without first somehow severing an invisible tie between the two (not that souls are visible, but you catch my drift).

Now... can we get started? I'm sick and tired of all of this nostalgia.

"Gahhhh... Would someone please remind me as to why exactly I'm standing here?" The mound of corpses a few feet away from the indignant, cloaked individual did not respond to the question, instead choosing to remain silent. "Wise guys, I see... Well, we'll see just how wise you are after I've torn you all new ones! ... Again..."

In a simple wave of his hand, a black smudge flashed across the ground, underneath the pile of bodies. A gigantic maw erupted from the inky blackness, huge, sharp fangs sinking into the already rotting flesh of several of the corpses as it dragged them into oblivion. An instant later, the figure was alone on the bloodstained wasteland, contemplating on his next course of action.

"Well... Killing a shit ton of people did very little to help my cause... So, I can either A) slaughter even more, or B) use logical means to seek my goal out... But "B" requires book work and writing... and I believe that I will, eventually, have a strong disdain for that sort of thing." He sighed and ran a hand through his shaggy, black hair, frowning. "Looks like killing hundreds of innocents is the only answer at the moment. Either time to go to a new world or time to find a new town."

Bah.. I hope this is good. I finally got around to writing this around 3 AM and finished around 5... So I apologize for any grammatical, spelling or just plain stupid errors throughout the text. Thanks for allowing me to join though.

Also, I realize I use a lot of ellipsi... ellipsies... ellipsises... Whatever the plural form of using the three dots at the end of sentences. Apologies if that gets annoying from time to time.

Now, I'm going to go pass out for multiple hours and hope that I get a "COOL STORY BRAH" from you people. Also, I fear several profiles already and agree with the raccoon person above me about feeling inadequate.

Also, Logician, effing love Soren. And your character. But more Soren. Cuz sages rule. Also, infuriatingly short sentences. Haven't taken the time to read or look at any one else's characters other than skimming, to be honest... so hopefully I do that before this starts and I get horribly maimed by someone I didn't realize had "Derp, killz yew" powers.
 

Shapsters

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Name: Ryan Taylor

Nickname: Run of the Mill

Age: 17

Appearance: Ryan is average by every account. Standing at about 5'8 he isn't particularly tall nor is he particularly muscular weighing in at about 140 pounds. His shaggy brown hair gives off the just got out of bed' look because usually that's exactly what he did, not caring enough to put effort into making his hair look presentable.

Clothing: Clothes. Whatever Ryan can get his hands on he will wear. He doesn't have a 'look' by any means nor does he attempt to express his personality or creativity via his clothes. With his options ranging from 'whatever is clean' to 'whatever is available' Ryan is usually seen wearing t-shirts and jeans or maybe shorts on a warmer day. As long as it's clean Ryan will wear it, mind you clean isn't exactly a strict rule he follows.

Weapons: No actual weapons come to mind when thinking of Ryan, perhaps whatever the average teenager might have on them such as a cellphone, some school supplies maybe a backpack. Ryan is quite resourceful however and would have an easy time finding or ever crafting his own weapons.

Powers: Ryan has the ability to pull out random and seemingly useless items out of his school bag.

Strengths: If you were to ask Ryan, he would tell you he has no strengths and... well he isn't too far off. One thing he has always excelled in is finding random unrelated items and being able to combine them into something useful. I suppose you could call that resourcefulness. Ryan can also get quite lucky at times but it's not as though he has control over the luck.

Weaknesses: Ryan has severe self confidence issues, he feels there are few things, if any at all that he can do right. There also doesn't seem to be any actual fighting skills that he possess', having no history or practice with that sort of thing Ryan has no idea what to do in a fight. In grade 4 he got in a fight with a bully, it ended with him on the ground crying, sporting two black eyes.

Personality: Ryan is content with life, he is by no means happy but in the same light he isn't unhappy enough to change anything. He has little confidence and this is made clear because he is constantly making fun of himself and vocally doubting his abilities. He isn't very sociable preferring to listen to his iPod and play on his computer rather than hang with friends or go to parties.

Fear: Ryan is constantly afraid that he will fail at the things he does and embarrass himself, it gets to the point where he will refuse to do something he wants to do just out of fear he will fail at it. Being a rather lonely person Ryan also fears that he will never find anyone who loves him and will die alone. Also dogs, Ryan is terrified of even small dogs.

Vice: Envy

Bio: There isn't too much to say about Ryan's past, his parents have moderate paying jobs and live in a large suburb in California. Having a fairly large family at 5 children, Ryan was lucky enough to be born the fourth child, the next child being only a year younger than him. This means that Ryan's childhood was spent being not played attention to, with a younger brother being coddled over, older brothers being great at sports and a sister who had moved to LA for a modeling contract Ryan was always 'the brother of' or the 'Little Taylor dude'. Naturally this worsened when Ryan entered High School, his sister went through school as the hottest girl in school as well as a cheerleader and general school figure and his brothers were sports legends. Ryan was expected to do great things just like his siblings, yet one month later he had become that guy who just kind of exists. Everyone forgot about who he was supposed to be and realized who he was, Ryan Taylor, nothing special.

Ryan was happy, something life changing had happened that day and Ryan was more than ready to seize this fresh opportunity and live a new exciting life. Alright who was he kidding what happened that day wasn't exactly life changing but it sure made him happy, the new girl in school was among the hottest females he had ever seen and she was sitting right in front of him in Biology. To say he wasn't following today's lesson would be an understatement, his eyes had been on one thing throughout that whole hour and that was the underwear that was slightly sticking out of the girls skinny jeans. What better of a day could a guy like Ryan ask for? Hell if that was her permanent seat for the year what better year could he ask for?

Then Ryan's day got even better, the loud ring of the bell snapped Ryan out of his trance and his eyes darted away from the girl in front of him. Fumbling around in his backpack Ryan suddenly looked up to see the girl standing in front of him, his nosed pressed against her tanned, slim stomach and his face immediately turned a dark shade of red. He mumbled something incompressible and stared at the ground when suddenly a piece of paper slipped into his ear, his eyes widened as he heard the girl walk away.

The end of the school day had come and Ryan quickly walked toward the back of the school. He read the note over and over in his head as he walked. Why would this extremely hot girl want to... do something with him? He didn't know what she had in mind but it involved him and her behind the tool shed so who was he to say no? Hell for all he knew she wouldn't even be there but at least he would take a shot at it.

"Uh... hello?" he sheepishly called as he wondered back behind the shed. It was almost unnaturally dark and Ryan could barely see, despite the fact it was only 3 O'clock the darkness was confusing to say the-

Suddenly Ryan felt a harsh pain on his face and his whole world got a lot more black.

I'm hoping to rely not on an awesome character winning battles but rather a lame character getting lucky and not being killed. Hopefully I can be creative enough to get past the first round ^^
 

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Sorry for not responding to your PM for so long, Krunk, but I haven't been able to think up a character until now.

I'll write up the character sheet and intro either later today or in the last few days of my Summer Holidays. I can't do it now since I'm off to visit my grandparents for the day in half an hour.
 

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Soothsayer said:
Now, I'm going to go pass out for multiple hours and hope that I get a "COOL STORY BRAH" from you people. Also, I fear several profiles already and agree with the raccoon person above me about feeling inadequate.
I don't know if I should be happy that you at least read my post, or if I should feel grudgeful towards you for referring to me as "the raccoon person". I think I'll go do something that fits both: I'll just kill you. That makes me very happy, but at the same time, might seem as me having a deadly grudge against you for..."you know what".

I suggest locking all your doors and windows and chimney(s) tight. Just to make things harder for me (but only harder!). I'll get in anyway, but y'know. Resistance is never futile.

Also, I don't feel inadequate! I am totally the most bestest person to ever enter this competishun, in every shense of da word. Word, yo. Gimme a low-five, yo. Have fun, yo. Fun with me kiking yo' arsshe, yo.

ALSO, man, your character is one cocky dude.
 

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Fraught said:
I don't know if I should be happy that you at least read my post, or if I should feel grudgeful towards you for referring to me as "the raccoon person". I think I'll go do something that fits both: I'll just kill you. That makes me very happy, but at the same time, might seem as me having a deadly grudge against you for..."you know what".

I suggest locking all your doors and windows and chimney(s) tight. Just to make things harder for me (but only harder!). I'll get in anyway, but y'know. Resistance is never futile.

Also, I don't feel inadequate! I am totally the most bestest person to ever enter this competishun, in every shense of da word. Word, yo. Gimme a low-five, yo. Have fun, yo. Fun with me kiking yo' arsshe, yo.

ALSO, man, your character is one cocky dude.
Killing is always the way to answer all of your problems. Just be sure to torture said person until they put you into his/her will beforehand so you can get lots of free stuff. Granted, weaseling your way into my will would simply involve you getting a small, dirty piece of paper and about thirty-five cents.

I have no doors and windows (and thus, no chimney), just a small, very damp and termite-infested box on the side of the street. In fact, it's not even a box and more a piece of paper I wrote "BOX" on a while back so I wouldn't feel so bad about my living conditions.

I have no idea why you'd hate me for referring to you as a raccoon, for that is your avatar. Perhaps if I changed it from "raccoon" to "badass raccoon with a lightsaber that kills a fly" it would make all of the hurt I caused go away? Either that or I could call you by your name... That may work as well.

I also see you've got an absolute poo-ton of posts under you belt and feel like I probably deserve to get shot by you and the other vets since I'm going to die horribly regardless. I'm going to go buy a bullet proof vest with three weeks of my income and hope to god you guys don't have teflon coated bullets. Or swords. Or rocket launchers. Or control over bees. Or anything that isn't a very small gun.

And thanks...? I was attempting to make him that way and actually thought that Pride would have been a good choice for his Vice, but then decided against it because he's more insane than cocky... though I don't think I do the whole insanity-bit very well.
 

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I have no idea why you'd hate me for referring to you as a raccoon, for that is your avatar. Perhaps if I changed it from "raccoon" to "badass raccoon with a lightsaber that kills a fly" it would make all of the hurt I caused go away? Either that or I could call you by your name... That may work as well.

I also see you've got an absolute poo-ton of posts under you belt and feel like I probably deserve to get shot by you and the other vets since I'm going to die horribly regardless. I'm going to go buy a bullet proof vest with three weeks of my income and hope to god you guys don't have teflon coated bullets. Or swords. Or rocket launchers. Or control over bees. Or anything that isn't a very small gun.

And thanks...? I was attempting to make him that way and actually thought that Pride would have been a good choice for his Vice, but then decided against it because he's more insane than cocky... though I don't think I do the whole insanity-bit very well.
I demand more individuality than just being associated with a type of mammal. You could call me by my username, yes. Do.

Also, since you live in a box, where did you get that..."income", anyway? Also, is a lightsaber accepted as a sword? Because you're bullet-proof vest sure won't do much against it.

And yeah, thank me. THANK ME HARDER! Ahem...
...anyway, I actually liked it. And you should definitely try to make him more insane. I love insane characters. I actually act pretty insane in other...places...too, not just in RPs (but don't tell them, I pull it off so well they have no clue it's a show).
 

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Sheet is finally done

Name: Fredrick O?Connell

Nickname: Fidgit

Age: 21

Appearance: A 2nd Generation Irishman, Fredrick retains the red hair of his father and temper of his mother. He stands at a height of 5? 11? and weighs roughly 145 lbs soaking wet. His complexion is very pale, due to his habits and his tendency to hang out only at night, spending the day in hibernation. His clothes are barely in better shape than he is. He wears a pair of tattered jeans that smell almost as bad as he does. His shirt, at one point, would have had a Band name on it, however now it?s just a faded grey shirt stained with filth and vomit.

Clothing: His aforementioned tattered jeans that have long since faded. Living on the streets has not improved the look or the smell of the jeans and it is more than likely you?ll smell Fredrick coming before you see him. His t-shirt once proclaimed his love to a certain band, but the shirt is now so dirty and faded that he can?t even see, nor remember what that band was. It?s not something he usually dwells on anyway.

Weapons: Fredrick doesn?t have many possessions, but he has managed to hold onto a simple butterfly knife as well as an aluminum baseball bat that he carries around as a deterrent to anyone who wanted to mess with him for the sake of fucking with him.

Powers: Fredrick has no real powers per sec, but he does maintain that he has somewhat of a special ability, even if he only claims it the validity of it when he?s strung out on coke. He claims that the ?Luck of the Irish,? though more ironic in his case than most, still exists, for despite his trials and problems, he still remains to this day alive, still receiving money, though most don?t know from where. When pressed; Fredrick simply calls it his ?Luck of the Irish.?

Strengths: Besides the aforementioned luck, Fredrick has a few things up his sleeve that help him survive on the street. He has an immense tolerance for pain, mostly since his body usually has some sorta drug injected into it. He?s also wiry, quick and can throw a punch despite his frame shape. He can run, but only sprint, in the long distance he?s done.

Weakness: He can?t run for long distances at all, if he?s forced to run, he?s gotta ditch fast or he?s screwed. He?s also got a crippling addiction to coke and as such loses a lot of his sanity if he?s off the stuff. His weaker frame makes him an obvious target for torment and if you can get a couple shots on him, he?s gonna break. Make sure ya cripple his limbs though or he?ll keep coming anyway. He?s also prone to paranoia, is scared of losing everything and is so close to insanity it only takes a small push to send him over the edge.

Personality: If there was a word to describe Fredrick, it would be the word ?broken.? Fredrick has been through hell and back in his life and his less than stable personality lends itself to that. He?s paranoid of losing it all, self destructive in his lifestyle so he can forget about the pains he had to endure in his childhood and he?s aggressive when it comes to defending what he believes is his. As such he doesn?t make a very good first impression, usually revealing horrible information about himself, the horrible stench of death and sickness that is permanently stained into his clothing and an anti-social domineer that makes the most reclusive World of Warcraft player seem like a huggable warm fellow. Fredrick hates the world around him and the likes the people even less. You won?t see him smile unless he?s in a drug induced stupor and even then he?s as likely to slit your throat for pocket change, than he is to simply say hello. Broken, unstable, angry and depressed; they are all words that lend themselves to the mental state of Fredrick O?Connell.

Fears: Fredrick?s fears mostly stem from his family time. He?s scared and paranoid of being betrayed, is scared to trust as a result. He?s scared of losing his possessions. Though he comes off as someone with nothing to lose, he is afraid, above all other things, to die. His sense of self preservation and self defence are all that have kept him alive all these years. Most of all, he is scared of that he can?t control and unfortunately that stops him from many jobs and careers.

Vices: Wrath, Envy

Bio: Fredrick was a second generation Irishman, moving to North America when he was about 4 years old, settling in Toronto for the next stage of his life. His father got a low paying job, just to get by and get his drinking money, while Mum was forced to sell herself on the street to make sure the family could eat. Only thing that kept Fredrick moving was his woman that he met when he was about 13. They stayed together until his parents split when he was 16. Mum just up and disappeared and Dad found himself a woman real fast. Unfortunately, it was also Fredrick?s woman. He found out about this turn of events when he came home from his first coke dust to find his Dad?s head between his girlfriend?s legs. Needless to say he didn?t stick around.
He moved around Southern Ontario, before getting a pass into the States from a guy he knew. Soon he found himself in the Big Apple, running shit jobs for the dealers in order to score his next fix. He was arrested once, in jail for a year. Jail wasn?t so hot for Fredrick, his rage boiled over when some fat fuck tried to get him in the shower. It didn?t take long for the guards to show up when it came to bashing the fucker?s head into the concrete floor.

After his two years in the cell, he got out and immediately went back to dealing. His contacts had moved on though, for the most part. He was starting again. Life was tough, he didn?t have a home, he barely got by. For now he simply existed.

It was just another day on the streets, just another deal and just another self medication. Fredrick knew the best places to dust up. You could do it in plain sight, as long as you made it look like you was doing something else instead. In Fredrick?s case, he usually did it in a phone booth, made it look like a phone call, snort a little and move on with his day. This time though something that would change his life forever happened.

He always picked up the receiver while doing his line. That way it looked more believable. This time though, the line clicked and a voice answered, despite him not dialling out, ?Mr O?Connell,? it said, in a strangely mechanical voice, ?Mr. Fredrick O?Connell.?

?Yes,? he answered, despite being terrified of what the voice would say.

Code:
?You have been selected,?
was all the voice would say,
Code:
?Do you accept??
Fredrick immediately hung up and left the booth. He was immensely creeped out and was going back to his slum alley before anything else happened. Another booth beside him began to ring. As he avoided that one and kept moving, the payphones continued to ring as he passed them until he finally flipped out and screamed, ?What do you want!??

Code:
?Mr. Fredrick O?Connell, you have been selected, do you accept??
?Yes I fucking accept, if that?ll make ya leave me alone!?

Code:
?Thank you, you will be retrieved shortly.?
?What the fuck does that mean??

As if on cue, the windows on the payphone tinted and a strange gas poured out of the coin slot, rendering the man unconscious. A sign was placed on the booth, marking it ?Out of Order,? and the door locked itself.

Edit: Added my intro
 

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Sorry for a lack of character yet, but whenever I make one I look at it for five seconds, shake my head at the failure and then have to scrap it because I hate the character or they just don't make sense to me. I just really don't want to have a 'oh wow, isn't this contestant hilariously insane?' character that will blur into the background. I think I've been through at least 3 ideas like this already... 5 days left...

Look, I will have it done. Even if I have to delve into the deepest recesses of my mind to unearth relics that must remain asleep to secure my sanity, I will make a character. I swear by it.
 

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Judges:

1) Nukey
2) wesdabigman
3) sky14kemea

Contestants:

Fallen-Angel-Risen-Demon: Digaina (Pride)
RagnorakTres: That Which Bleeds (Wrath)
NewClassic: Harold (Sloth)
HSIAMetalKing: Eurania (Gluttony)
Jarsteen: Leviathan (Envy)
Sam G: The Gold King (Greed)
The_Logician19: Dragon (???)
Soothsayer: Beauxhart (Greed, Envy, Wrath)
Fraught: Chance Connie (Wrath)
Lost In The Void: Frederic (Wrath, Envy)
Shapsters: Ryan (Envy)
Zemalac: Pending
Labyrinth: Pending
pigeon_of_doom: Pending
revolverwolf: Pending
Crowghast: Pending
Zombie_Fish: Pending

So that's 17 entrants with 11 definites. That's pretty well rounded for a Ratings War.

Crowghast, Zombie and revolverwolf have replied thus far confirming their entry, so that's great as well. @Labyrinth: @pigeon_of_doom: @Zemalac: could I get some confirmation from you guys too?
 

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Crowghast, Zombie and revolverwolf have replied thus far confirming their entry, so that's great as well. @Labyrinth: @pigeon_of_doom: @Zemalac: could I get some confirmation from you guys too?
Ah, right. Yes, I am writing up a character. Not entirely sure how I'll get time to write my rounds, but I think I can manage.
 

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Zemalac said:
Lord Krunk said:
Crowghast, Zombie and revolverwolf have replied thus far confirming their entry, so that's great as well. @Labyrinth: @pigeon_of_doom: @Zemalac: could I get some confirmation from you guys too?
Ah, right. Yes, I am writing up a character. Not entirely sure how I'll get time to write my rounds, but I think I can manage.
Just let me know if you need an extension in advance.
 

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Lord Krunk said:
Crowghast, Zombie and revolverwolf have replied thus far confirming their entry, so that's great as well. @Labyrinth: @pigeon_of_doom: @Zemalac: could I get some confirmation from you guys too?

Eeeeee, sorry, didn't know you wanted a reply to the PM reminder, Krunk. I've been having problems coming up with a character, so it's taken much longer than I expected. However, I'm confident it'll be finished today, and certainly before the deadline.

Edit: Godfuckingdammit, ok, character sheet is done, just needs tidying up and I WILL post it tomorrow, Bio will take a little longer but will be done before the deadline.

I really shouldn't publicly reveal my expected timeframe on here, it's just embarrassing if I fail to meet it :(

I probably seem quite unreliable now, so I'd just like to try and reassure the contestants/judges and say that while my time management skills are non-existent, I do get things done if other people are relying on it.
 

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It's hardly a relic, but I'm posting this so that I can't change my mind, scrap it and end up with nothing to use once the deadline rolls around. At the very least it's going to be interesting to find out how the other competitors react to these characters.

Name: Amelia Rhodes
Age: 8
Appearance: Amelia's eyes glow a gentle cyan and her pale features remain vaguely visible in the shade of her hat. Her hair is cherry blond and is cut fairly short though a few loose strands hang down in front of her face. She is a little tall for her age, but is still overshadowed by adult humans, and maintains a scrawny figure.

Clothing: She wears a dark cloak tied at the neck with a golden lace, a wide-brimmed, pointed hat with a bite mark in the brim, a long brown skirt and cream shirt decorated with beige flowers. The entire ensemble is full of little scuffs and scratches from years of use, but it's enough to keep her warm.

Weapons: There are two weapons in Amelia's arsenal. The first is an ornately carved metal staff, mainly used for hitting things, and the second is a little stuffed doll that she has affectionately named Henry. It looks a little like a lupine creature carrying a gun but, despite appearances, he is far more potent and dangerous than the staff.

Powers: Amelia is naturally gifted in the art of magic, though her magic is far from perfected.

Strengths: The magic is strong, unpredictable and, most importantly, reacts to the little ripples in Amelia's emotions. The more angry or scared she becomes, the more violently the magic resonates and reacts. Regardless of magic, Amelia is agile and sneaky.

Weaknesses: All the weaknesses that come along with being an 8 year old girl in a tournament for giant insane men clad from head to toe in impenetrable armour, of course. By comparison she is frail, weak, small, vulnerable and squishy. And pretty much unarmed.

Personality: Amelia is a strange girl. She'll smile at the most outrageous of times and is incredibly ignorant of how life is outside of her own little world of things she likes. She is generally optimistic, a little air-headed and interprets things how she wants to interpret them. She'll be terribly ignorant of just how much danger she is in between moments.

Of course, if she knows that she is undeniably in a lot of danger, she will act to remove herself from it.

Fear: For an 8 year old, Amelia is comparably fearless. Not quite understanding danger helps in that respect. But that one thing that she is deeply afraid of is that one day her magic will leave her.

Vice: Greed.

Bio: Amelia Rhodes has little in her life that she cares to broadcast. She was born into a family that didn't want her, nor her weird magical abilities, and she was quickly disposed of. Orphaned and alone, Amelia grew up by surviving off the kindness of others or, less happily, whatever she stole from the less kind. She learned how to control her magic, to a degree, and refuses to let it control her life.

For her 5th birthday (or thereabouts, since she doesn't have a calender to check what day it is) she found herself a little stuffed toy that she managed to enchant with life. He's ragged and torn and the enchantment is full of little holes, but he lives just as fully as she does. She has kept him as her sole companion since then.
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Name: Henry Rhodes
Age: 4
Appearance: Henry is Amelia's long-time companion/cuddly toy and, as such, is lovably small and fuzzy. He's missing an ear and one of his eyes has had to be replaced with a button, but he maintains the agility and ferocity of his animal counterpart, the wolf. Unlike a wolf, Henry is bipedal. His fur is a bright orange but his right shoulder is blue-green tartan check.

Weapons: Henry has a relatively large gun-like shape sewn onto his right paw. It is made of cotton and thus entirely useless as a real weapon. But it is pretty intimidating to see a fireball shoot out of a cotton gun.

Powers: It is hardly a power but Henry does not feel pain. He doesn't bleed either. But being a cotton-nylon blend does that for you. Henry is pretty fast and agile, and surprisingly durable as well.

Bio: Amelia enchanted Henry to life about a year after his creation in a toy factory and since then he has been a focal point for Amelia's powers and a decent enough companion/cuddly toy. What more has to be said about Henry Rhodes?

[HEADING=3]Amelia vs Damien[/HEADING]

A pointed hat would be seen bobbing up and down in the field, with the grasses being pushed aside by a staff wielded in little arms. The campsite wasn't far from here. The rustling of foliage grew quieter and the pointed hat sank into the sea of weeds and wild-grasses. If there wasn't such a need for secrecy, a giggle might have been heard.

With tentative breaths and scuffled knees, the witch was shuffling ever further through the long grass. She had spied him a short time ago, celebrating something. Something big... As if he'd won a lottery. Her little eyes would sparkle at the prospect of so many golden coins and shiny gemstones for the taking. So here she was, crawling through grass to get closer to the guy's campsite.

From the undergrowth she burst, and so too did the wolf-like doll, finger raised toward her prey.

"Hands up, meanie! This gold is mine!" Her finger was pointed accusingly at her target, a rather well built man with a large sword, with the lupine figure at her feet copying her actions with the gun in it's hand. For a moment she slacked her arm and looked around, noticing the lack of wealth of any sort. No gold, jewels or objects signifying wealth lay in sight. In fact, the entirety of the camp seemed to be a tent, a campfire and a spit. "Hey, what gives, mister?"

The man seemed to stare for a second, most probably at the utter strangeness of his being attacked by a little girl, before reaching for his sword. "Not so fast!" A spark hit the sword away from his grip and the doll raised its gun as threateningly as it could. "Now where've you hidden it all?"

"Hidden what? All I have is my sword and armour."

"Come on, I know you've got money somewhere. So stop lying and hand it over." From her cloak she produced her metal staff, pointing it at the swordsman. She stared vigilantly, not allowing her gaze to wander.

She jolted backwards as a knife embedded itself in a barrier just a few centimeters in front of her face. The doll reacted, blasting a bolt of fire at the swordsman from the tip of its pistol. He careened into his tent before tumbling backwards a short distance. The knife was drawn earthwards as the barrier dissipated. Amelia was further disappointed when she saw that the tent was not filled with anything close to gold.

"What the hell was that, Damien!?" A wind started to whip the edges of the tent, lifting the swordsman to his feet, before a tall, old man, garbed in a suit more at home in a funeral than a campsite, started to form in the swirling currents. Without another uttered word the half-tangible man slapped the swordsman once around the head. "You're meant to be the strongest man alive and you're losing to a stuffed doll and an uppity 12 year old? How the hell am I-"

"Hey!" Amelia put her arms on her hips defiantly, with her staff still in her grip, "I'm 8!"

The old man, who by this point had become fully tangible and visible, looked from the swordsman to the little girl and then back to the swordsman, the disbelief apparent upon his aged face. "An 8 year old, Damien. An 8 year old was wiping the floor with you. It's dismal. It's a sham. It's disappointing to the point of embarrassment."

"Well if it's so disappointing, why don't you get that little girl to fight for you then? Because she stands such a good chance against all the monsters you've described." The swordsman was piling on the sarcasm. He regretted it a moment later as the old man chuckled.

"That's the only good idea you have had today, Damien. She stands a better chance than you do anyway." The old man turned with a flourish and plodded over to Amelia, who was still standing with her arms crossed. "What is your name, little madame?"

"Who's asking?" Henry jumped up on Amelia's shoulder and leveled its gun with the old man's head.

From his jacket pocket he produced a bag of coins, easily large and heavy enough to convince Amelia of its authenticity, before holding it out to her, "A man who would be willing to make you very, very rich for just a small favour..."

I hope that is acceptable. Criticism via PM would be nice.
 

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Name: Carl Grob

Nickname: n/a

Age: 33

Appearance: Due to his thieving lifestyle, Carl has developed a habit of only going out at night, even when not on a job. As he can't cook, he buys his meals from the only kind of outlets open during his waking hours; while his active lifestyle mostly offsets the calories, his diet of kebabs and chips combined with his nocturnal schedule has caused him to have quite pale, blotchy skin. However, Carl has never really bothered with his looks: his broad, muscular frame and, thick, heavyset features meant anything trying to draw attention from his imposing stature was fighting a losing battle. His black hair is cropped neatly, his face clean shaven, both an unwelcome effort towards a tidy appearance, necessary in order for him to delay rousing suspicion until he has relieved his victim of their more valuable possessions..

Clothing: Carl's choice of career has come to dominate all other aspects of his life. As a result,
his rather plain wardrobe is focused on the practical aim of its owner appear somewhat innocuous. Carl has amassed a selection of entirely interchangeable, dull, nondescript clothes which do a reasonable job of concealing his frame in the dark, while still allowing him the chance to at least try and blend into a crowd. His favoured attire is a thick, dark grey, long sleeved v-necked shirt, black jeans and a pair of scuffed, unpolished black leather shoes. A little touch he's quite proud of is that all these items are from fashionable designers. While the main reason is for his clothing to look less suspiciously plain if he is forced to walk amongst as sea of labels and logos, he is grateful to have a pair of jeans that don't chafe, and a shirt that doesn't itch. Many a thief has revealed their presence with a prolonged scratch.

Weapons: Weapons just aren't Carl's thing. He prefers to think of himself as inhabiting one of the higher areas of the criminal underworld, so he doesn't carry a weapon. In situations where violence is unfortunately necessary to incapacitate any would-be domestic heroes or inquisitive security guards, his gigantic fists do fine. Every adversary he's faced has been dropped with one punch. However, as these adversaries tend to be golf-club wielding middle aged businessmen, or disinterested security at small firms he is yet to be seriously tested. He's a peculiarly moral person, but he would certainly consider using whatever he can find in a tight situation, but would struggle to use it. He doesn't carry much, except a utility belt with a small selection of thieving tools and climbing equipment.

Powers: Carl has always possessed a remarkable ability for evading detection. The way in which he can prevent his cumbersome body from being seen, or even casting a giveaway shadow, has been called almost supernatural by some. It's not, it's an innate trait that until now has been underutilised in petty thefts and games of hide and seek, but it's certainly impressive. In the VR this ability extends to an immunity to any means by which he can be directly located.

Strengths: As Carl's physique suggests, he's very strong and tough. Despite his unwieldy size and heavyset build, he has a peculiar type of agility: not particularly nimble, but he is capable of some surprisingly acrobatic feats. His rather unorthodox style relies on his upper body strength, and is more evocative of an orangutan rather than the more graceful movements of a gymnast. He's developed excellent spatial awareness and is generally very quick witted when it comes to exploiting his environment.

Weaknesses: Other people have always been a mystery to Carl. Autonomous life forms with wildly different logical processes to himself, he struggles to really understand them and never quite cared enough to make the effort to do so. As a result, he has little developed understanding of other people's psychology. He reacts to the overt action, rather than attempting to develop an intuitive understanding of the other being's mindset. He's also easily aggrieved by those he perceives to be vastly "superior" to him in terms of education (of which he only received a sporadic amount), social standing (of which he has none), or wealth (of which he has amassed a modest amount).

Personality: Carl has a very practical mindset, although other people's unpredictable behaviour often undermines his deductions. After a lifetime of struggling to relate to others, he's especially distrustful now after being stitched up by some erstwhile thieving companions. Despite the nature of his profession, he doesn't really want to hurt anyone, and does it with extreme reluctance when absolutely necessary. His rather detached relationship to society has lead him to develop a kind of inferiority complex so can become bitter, despite being an almost excessively regular person despite his line of work.

Fear: Opens spaces with no hiding places, incarceration, any sophisticated conversation, rich people.

Vice: Envy.


There's a couple of things I'd just like to check are alright too. I suppose this is directed at Krunk in particular, but as I'm an RP noobie worried I might make a character that's horrible for other people to play with, I'd appreciate any thoughts on this.

My power: This is quite a mundane skill really, so I'd like to extend that in the VR battles to an immunity to any kind of extrasensory power that could directly locate my character. He already seems disadvantaged against anyone with magic abilities, so that seems a workable way to prevent my power being instantly negated against a certain character type.

Weaknesses: Mine appear to be mostly pyschological traits to be exploited rather than real weaknesses. Personally, I think his character build overall has a lot of obvious inherent weaknesses, but I'm happy to add a more prominent weakness if required.

Bio to follow.
 

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Damn. I'm almost done writing the intro story, but I've started to hate the character I came up with. I did not think this guy through enough. May scrap the entire concept and go with a different one.
 

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Damn. I'm almost done writing the intro story, but I've started to hate the character I came up with. I did not think this guy through enough. May scrap the entire concept and go with a different one.
Well, just keep in mind that you only have two days.