The Ratings War VI: Aces High - Round 1 (Closed - Judging)

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Viking Incognito

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I will preemptively agree with everyone who reads this that this is an odd character and seemingly will be difficult to work with, but I have actually been working on the concept for a character like this for a month and besides, trying to work with it is half the fun.

Name: He doesn?t know for sure

Nickname: Shift

Age: He isn?t sure about this either

Appearance: His causal appearance is a young Caucasian man of about 28 years old with a brown mop-top head of hair. He is of average height with relatively pale skin, and he is also noticeably skinnier than usual. Not emaciated, but skinny enough that it is plainly noticeable. He almost always looks like he is just moments away from spacing out (that is to say, drifting into a trance-like state of un-focus). He is most easily described as a very forgettable looking person.

Clothing: Shift wears a pale grey jump suit with the sleeves rolled up and generic white and black sneakers, again, very neutral and forgettable looking. The one distinguishing thing about him is a wrist watch with a black leather strap, and the actual watch is stainless steel with a white numberless, handless, face. These are just the things he wears casually, but no-matter what he looks like, he always has the watch on him somewhere.

Weapons: He doesn?t regularly carry any weapons, but he will acquire and use them if necessary.

Powers: Shift has the power to shift people?s perceptions. What they see, what they hear, what they smell, their sense of time, pretty much anything.

Strengths: Shift?s powers can be used for extended periods of time, to affect civil matters, or to gain the upper hand in battle, and he is extraordinarily smart in his adaptive and clever uses of it.

Weaknesses: His powers have had cumulative adverse effects on him. He doesn?t trust his own perception and generally has twisted his own mind that he no longer knows who he is, why he has his powers, or why he is meant to do with them. This causes big problems when he is using them to large degrees because his own mind and perceptions can shift causing his control of his powers or the way they work to shift, sometimes going so far as to make him his own victim when he occasionally forgets what he is doing. Finally, he is not remarkably capable in any physical aspect. He is functional, but in no way above average.

Personality: When he is ?in control? of himself and his awareness he is somewhat reserved and docile. He doesn?t like to interact with people generally because he is afraid something they say will incite a shift in his perceptions. He also hates it when people ask him about himself, because he doesn?t know.
Fear: He is always scared that he might eventually be driven insane by his own powers or have what remains of his identity swallowed by one of his illusions.

Suit: Diamonds (maybe with a touch of hearts)

Bio: One day, a skinny young man found himself laying naked on the ground in a meadow with a pleasant sunny sky above him. He laid there for what might have been more than a week, or as little as 30 seconds until he lifted his hands towards the sky and saw a watch on his wrist. He thought he saw something on the face, while hearing it tick very loudly. Then he blinked and he was sitting on a chair in a deserted library, dressed in a jumpsuit and sneakers. He still had the watch on, but it was blank and made no noise. He stood up and a book fell off of his lap. He picked it up and stared at it for some amount of time that he couldn?t measure, just thinking. When that period of time had ended, he was leaving the library, into the outside world knowing only a few things for sure about himself: He could change people?s perceptions, he had somehow, for some reason, affected his own mind with this power, and the new name he had picked for himself was going to be the only discernable word from the cover of the book, Shift.

Shift found himself standing in a room that resembled a throne room, in front a man wearing a suit of armor covered in diamond shapes. Even considering what he normally had to deal with this was an out of the ordinary shift of perception. For what he roughly estimated was somewhere between 3 hours or 1 minute, he argued with himself on what was going on. Was he having a shift? Had he finally gone mad? Was he dead, or maybe dreaming? it ended when the man clasped a large hand on Shift's shoulder and said,

"Stay with us Shift. We need you to focus." Then the man hummed in a very deep tone that seemed to resonate in Shift's ears like his head was a tuning fork.

Then, all at once, the noise stopped and Shift was aware that he was not under his own power, he was in fact in an unfamiliar room with a man that somehow helped him align his perceptions.

"Say my name again." Shift demanded.

"You are Shift. You are not-" the strange man's words were drowned out by the sound of Shift's unconscious body hitting the floor.

He awoke lying on his back in a pleasant meadow, and something about it seemed familiar. He laid on the grass for some amount of time before he got the strange felling that he should look at his watch. So he lifted his hand above his head and looked at it. It was blank, as if it were not finished being built, but it ticked once, twice, three times before he blinked. He found himself laying on a bed with three men watching over him saying words he didn't recognize. One of them noticed that he was awake and motioned for the others to be silent. Shift knew where he was, he was in a castle, and he was likely brought here by a man wearing armor with diamond shapes on it. This was the first time in what he guessed was a long amount of time that he was so sure of something. Then the hammer fell: Who ever these people were, they knew his name. He couldn't remember the last time someone other than himself knew his name. For now, he was determined to hold onto the idea that this was all real. It had been a measure of time since he last felt hope, now he was glad to feel it again. The man from before came and talked to him, explained what was going on. And Shift heard him. As long as he could, he would do what this man and his friends wanted, just so that he could keep this feeling. Something inside him told him the feeling wouldn't last, and he knew it was true, but he also had the hope that it would come back. For now, he learned what was required of him and was happy to oblige.

"...so we have 21 days." finished the man of the Diamond Suit. "Any questions?"

"Just one," replied Shift. "is that a lot of time?"
 

Lord Krunk

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Okay, so here's the cast thus far:

[HEADING=2]Judges[/HEADING]
revolverwolf
sky14kemea
NeoAC

[HEADING=2]Contestants[/HEADING]
staika - Spades
CounterAttack - Diamonds
Nukey - Pending (Sheet Done)
Segadroid - Clubs
Hafrael - Hearts
Viking Incognito - Diamonds (Hearts if necessary)
JoJoDeathunter - Pending
Lost In The Void - Pending
Fragrance of Mtn Dew - Pending
RBMidknight - Pending
Zombie_Fish - Pending
elementsoul - Pending
Sam G - Pending
Khedive Rex - Pending
Armitage Shanks - Pending
Tips_of_Fingers - Pending
ThreeWords - Pending
darthobri - Pending

So that's all 3 judges set up, along with 18 entrants thus far. It's looking to be a good one, keep those sheets coming!

Remember, if you have any questions just ask me here, via PM or on the group and I'll get back to you ASAP.

JoJoDeathunter said:
Out of interest will there be a limit on the number of players who are eventually accepted?
There will be no limit. The easiest number for me to work with is 16 (as every time I halve the number it is divisible by 2). It's not impossible to do an odd number though - I did it last time in RW5 and it seems to have been a hit.

I don't think I'll take more than 32 though, because I intend for this one to consist of 5 rounds and 32 is perfect - and also because the judges will start forming suicide pacts. Not that we've ever had that many people in an RW before though.
 

NeoAC

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@Sky/Revolver: So it's agreed then. Krunk brings in more than 32 people, it's death by chocolate.
 

CounterAttack

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32 players is a bit much, I think... we don't normally get more than 24 people in the average Serial Killer round, and I figure that requires much less participation than this does.
 

Lord Krunk

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NeoAC said:
@Sky/Revolver: So it's agreed then. Krunk brings in more than 32 people, it's death by chocolate.
Can... can I join?
CounterAttack said:
32 players is a bit much, I think... we don't normally get more than 24 people in the average Serial Killer round, and I figure that requires much less participation than this does.
I'm not saying there will be 32 players; just that if I ever need a limit, that would be it.

It would certainly be fun for me to work with such diversity, but the judges? Not so much. I've divided the contestants into blocks of 3 or 4 matches that compete in succession and that worked last time.
 

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Viking Incognito said:
I will preemptively agree with everyone who reads this that this is an odd character and seemingly will be difficult to work with, but I have actually been working on the concept for a character like this for a month and besides, trying to work with it is half the fun.
The only way I can think of that working is through lots of passages written from the (altered) perspective of your opponents...interesting idea but good luck with that.

Not that mine is that much easier to work with.

Name: Michael Faustus ( this is not his true surname but since losing both his parents, he has never acknowledged the real one).

Nickname: Faustus.

Age: 23.

Appearance: Faustus stands at 5?11 and has a lean, athletic build. With thick brown hair that just covers his ears, sharp green eyes and a mouth that always hints at a smile Faustus is quite an attractive young man. As long as you look past the filth covering it.

Clothing: Faustus wears close-fitting, brown breeches tucked into his high, black boots with a worn leather belt wrapped around his waist. His waist length, dark brown coat once belonged to a nobleman but since coming into Faustus? possession much of the silver embroidery has fallen out - leaving the shoulders with ugly patches of silver thread hanging off of them - and it?s cleanliness hasn?t been upheld. Underneath the open coat is a grimy, grey linen shirt with drawstrings at the neck.

Weapons: Faustus relies on his skill with a steel-tipped, hardwood quarterstaff that he acquired for free from a careless merchant. He also has a set of weighted throwing knives hidden about his person, just in case. Although it?s unreliable at times, Faustus also considers his extraordinary luck a weapon.

Powers: For as long as he can remember, Faustus has had the most extreme luck. Having encountered a number of mages specialising in the field of fortune and fate, Faustus has been confirmed to possess a great amount of luck within him, so much that it can affect events and people around him. Unfortunately the power is uncontrollable and unreliable, swinging both from good to bad luck within seconds. As a result, Faustus is constantly on edge, never knowing if a simple trip could break his neck or line his pockets with gold.

Strengths: Having lived on the dangerous streets of Esterley for over a decade, Faustus has an exceptional survival instinct; his stamina and reflexes have been honed by thousands of run-in?s with the city guard. This, when mixed with the times his luck is running exceptionally well, makes Faustus nigh impossible to catch.

Due to needing to protect himself instead of relying on his luck to hold out, Faustus has learnt to be a very talented quarterstaff fighter; he prefers quarterstaff over sword because during his life fighting and avoiding the guards, he has realised that one man who is merely competent with a quarterstaff can easily hold off three men who are talented with a blade. As it happens, Faustus can fight six swordsmen at a time, although he prefers not to.

As long as it?s good, Faustus also considers his luck to be a strength, quite often the biggest strength he has.

Weaknesses: Faustus? biggest weakness is the unreliability of his luck; unsure when his luck is going to turn sour, he can never plan his actions, instead preferring to improvise and hope for the best.
Another weakness would be Faustus? inherently moral attitudes to life despite being a thief and pickpocket; he dislikes killing unless it?s absolutely necessary and even then he?s loathe to do it. He would rather save a bad man?s life and give them a chance at redemption than punish them for - what he believes to be - their mislead actions. Alongside this, Faustus has a soft spot for women; he detests violence against women and will go out of his way to avoid hurting one, even if they're threatening to kill him.

Also, Faustus is completely mortal; he bleeds, hurts and dies as easily as any man?unless he?s feeling particularly lucky.

Fears: Faustus is terrified that one day he will break his vow of never hurting a woman. He is also also fearful that eventually his luck will completely run out, causing him to be privately cautious all the time despite his care-free exterior.

Personality: Optimistic and friendly, Faustus is the loveable rogue amongst the street urchins and pickpockets of Esterley, always forgoing the violent thievery of his peers for the much more subtle and polite approach of trickery, cons and stealthy pick pocketing. The persistent unreliability of his luck is a source of constant, private irritation for Faustus but he shrugs it off in public and carries on with life.

Suit: Clubs were the ones who found - and subsequently kidnapped him - but it is the Spades who have claimed him as one of their champions due to his extremely poor background.

Bio: Even before he was born, Michael was considered to be one of the luckiest citizens of Esterley. His parents were hugely successful owners of a very prestigious inn frequented by nobility and - on a number of surprising occasions - royalty. The prospect of being born into such a respectable family was the beginning of Michael?s luck, which continued throughout his mother?s pregnancy; a terrible fall down some stairs that left his mother with two broken ribs and a broken arm, but left the unborn child completely unharmed, only cemented Michael?s pre-emptive reputation as one of the most fortunate citizens of Esterley.

During the pregnancy, there were complications and Michael?s mother had to be operated on, the surgeons cutting her open to find an unmoving baby who refused to breathe. The healing-mage present managed to revive Micahel and keep him steady whilst the doctors dealt with his mother. The whole process was a success, with both mother and baby surviving; again the magical authorities praised Michael?s exceptional good fortune. A week later though, his mother had died of a sudden infection, leaving his distraught father to raise and care for this lucky baby alone.

When Michael was eight, a terrible fire struck Esterley, engulfing the whole city in flames. Trapped inside the inn, Michael and his father tried to escape their fate but were soon too weak from smoke inhalation to continue and eventually just lay in each others arms as the entire building collapsed on them.

A day later, after the mages had finally gotten control of the fire and the authorities had begun search and rescue attempts, Michael was found. From underneath the charred rubble and scorched corpse of his father, alive and miraculously unscathed, Michael was pulled out and sent to an orphanage.

Stunned and lonely, Michael spent three unhappy months following the orphanage?s strict rules; beatings and hard labour were frequent, food, rest and compassion were not. Sobbing at his own rotten luck, Michael vowed to run away; after countless unsuccessful attempts - foiled merely by his own misfortune than any lack of skill - Michael eventually managed to escape the restrictions of the orphanage and was quickly taken in by a group of young pickpockets. When asked his name, Michael uttered a word that had come to represent his whole life so far, a word that his father had taught him at a very early age; ?Faustus?.

For over a decade Faustus has learnt and worked the streets of the once prosperous city of Esterley; since the fire, it has struggled to regain it?s former glory, giving way to violent crimes, thievery, merchant warfare and street fights. Faustus lives on the very edge of this dangerous world now, earning a living by utilising his street-smarts and innate luck to con and steal enough to get by. He just wishes that his luck would hold long enough to earn real amounts of money.

I'll edit this post once I've got the ol' intro out of the way.

EDIT: Intro is done. I apologise for the length (kind of) but I hope it helps whoever I come up against...

The patrons of The Broken Horseshoe were a rowdy bunch. Men who weren't singing lewd songs or arguing were too drunk to keep their heads above the table, and the serving girls caroused with them even more raucously, kicking their skirts up in a tantalising dance between orders. It was a common worker's tavern, a place to drown the miseries of the day with cheap ale and even cheaper women, brawls and gambling optional. Basically, it was the perfect place for Faustus to make some money.

Sat at a table with a group of broad-shouldered, broken-nosed men, Faustus was in the process of gathering information and lining his pockets with the aid of a deck of cards and an exceptionally good run of luck. "Your move," he said to the man on his right as he placed the three of hearts on the table. The man grunted, swaying slightly as a result of the amount of beer he had drank so far. As he placed a card - the four of diamonds - over Faustus' own, Faustus once again pressed the man opposite him for information. "So...this talisman is said to be in the city?"

Hiccoughing, the large man opposite Faustus nodded irritably, lifting his cup to his lips only to curse at it's emptiness. "Yep, in the city," he growled absently, evidently losing patience with this young man's constant repeating of questions. Frowning down at the cards on the table, he tapped his own on the palm of his hand and avoided eye contact with the other players.

Faustus had been questioning the men all evening and the only thing he had managed to find out was that there was a very rare and powerful talisman somewhere within the city; apparently, it had arrived a few weeks ago and many of the merchants were hiring men to look for it. Rumours suggested that it had the power to grant unknown magic to the wearer, rumours that, if found to be untrue, wouldn't matter much because the talisman was also supposedly made of rubies and sapphires, a quality of which had never been seen in Esterley before. Faustus knew that the merchants' desperation for control over the city was enough to warrant chasing a rumour; Faustus also knew that he was willing to chase this rumour if it meant making enough money to finally get himself off the streets. That's why he was here, in
The Broken Horseshoe, gambling, drinking and conversing with some of the worst lowlifes that Esterley had to offer.

The man opposite had taken his go, laying down a six of hearts, followed by the six of diamonds from the next scarred player. Faustus stalled his go by pretending to count his numerable stacks of coins, then sighed and addressed the whole table. "And nobody has any idea where exactly this rumour is being held?" His question was answered with half-hearted mumblings. Sighing, Faustus lay down his last four cards and stood up. "I've got all four aces...there's no way you unlucky fellows can beat me. So I'll be taking my profits and not wasting any more of your time."

The three large men all cursed the young man, banging their fists on the table and trying to convince him to stay for another game. Picking up the steel-tipped quarterstaff that doubled up as a walking-staff, Faustus good-naturedly refused, assuring the men that he'd be back tomorrow to give them a chance to win back their losses. To his surprise, the three men accepted this ruse and passed Faustus the gold he had earned.
Wow, he thought, my luck is holding better than I expected tonight.

Despite his luck holding out during the gambling, Faustus was still annoyed by the lack of information he had gathered about the talisman. He'd been trying for four days but had found no leads and would have given anything for his luck to be the other way around; losing all his money at cards would be a small price to pay for knowledge of the talisman's location.

As Faustus departed the tavern and headed down the cobbled street towards the docks, the sounds of laughter and singing gave way to the silence of Esterley; a silence accentuated by the blowing of the wind, the swell of the river and the occasional muffled scream from the darkness. While his mind tried to figure out another way to gather the information he needed, Faustus' body walked through the streets of it's own accord, leading him towards his dockside hideaway.

Rounding a corner, Faustus was pulled from his thoughts as he walked straight into someone, sending them sprawling face first into the muddy cobbles. "Whoa, sorry! Are you alright?" The man was grey-haired and wiry, but muscular, wearing a loose-fitting coat and breeches of black linen. As Faustus crouched down, he rolled the man over and saw that his nose was bloodied, likely broken. He was also completely unconscious.

What held Faustus' attention, however, was the muddied and slightly crumpled piece of paper lying next to the man's hands. In the bright moonlight, Faustus could easily recognise the map of Esterley and the circle drawn around the Eagle's Temple, the oldest place of worship in the city. As Faustus cautiously picked up the map, he could have sworn that he felt his luck changing right there, because on the back of the paper, was a notation written in a hurried hand:


The Eagle's talon grips what everyone seeks.

Laughing softly to himself, Faustus jumped up and ran in the direction of the Eagle's temple, leaving the wiry man lying by the side of the road, with one very broken nose and minus one very important map.
Sorry old man, but your luck's ran out.

*******

"Keep moving, you damned beggar!" The shout and a heavy hand shaking his shoulder pulled Faustus from his memory. Everything had seemed so simple at the beginning of the night. Infiltrate the temple, steal the talisman, escape undetected; that was the plan. Instead, Faustus had infiltrated the temple, encountered this group of mercenaries and been captured.

When did my fortunes change? Faustus thought to himself as he was pushed deeper into the catacombs of the Eagle's Temple. He was being forced to lead the way through the dark, murky depths of the temple's underground so that any traps would be set off by him and not one of the five brutes following.

The five mercenaries had found Faustus climbing down one of the ancient passages that led to the catacombs and, despite fighting hard, he'd eventually been overpowered. Now he was leading them through the unpredictable darkness with a knife hovering at his ribs.

"There seems to be a light coming from round the next corner?" Faustus said confidently, attempting to ignore the tugging of the blade against his coat as the man behind him stopped. Clenching his fists slightly, Faustus felt the throwing knives up his sleeves. He wished they hadn't taken his quarterstaff; he would have preferred merely hurting the men to killing them. Faustus could hear the man at the back of the procession tapping the steel-tipped weapon against the dusty flagstones. If it comes down to it I'll have to kill them? He thought morosely. Faustus hated killing of any kind but was beginning to toy with the idea if it meant escaping the temple with the talisman.

Faustus' captors had been whispering amongst themselves, but now the one directly behind him shoved his back again, brandishing the knife over Faustus' shoulder. "Go on, then. Let's see what's there." Faustus sighed quietly and rounded the corner.

Stepping into a huge, brightly-lit chamber, Faustus and the mercenaries blinked at the sudden light and viewed the scene with awe. Shining marble walls with colourful murals on them caused the group to point and sigh in wonder. The chamber's columns were also marble, ornately carved with complex designs that were unknown to Faustus. Looking up, they could see that the chamber's ceiling was equally patterned with ancient murals and extravagant crystal chandeliers hanging down; the fires from their candles making the gems glitter as if alive.

All this was soon forgotten however, when their gazes was placed upon the centre of the chamber. Upon a shoulder-high pedestal sat a necklace decorated with exquisite rubies and sapphires, the talisman that the entirety of Esterley seemed to be hunting for.

Pointing his knife at Faustus' face, the man who'd been addressing the pickpocket so far pointed his free hand towards the talisman. "Go." He said, the threat on his face clear to Faustus.

"Don?t I get my weapon back?" Fautus hesitated, spreading his arms wide in pleading. The man simply took one step towards Faustus with his knife raised. "Ok, I?ll go?" He sighed, turning to the pedestal. It's only a few paces, he thought optimistically, besides, we've gotten past all the traps, right? He wasn't convincing himself. Faustus was certain that something this sought-after would have an impressive collection of traps guarding it; it stood to reason that it would.

As Faustus slowly stepped up to the pedestal, however, nothing happened. No pressure pads on the floor, no hidden trip wire. Nothing. Regaining some of his confidence, Faustus hovered his hand over the talisman and took a deep breath, glancing back towards the six mercenaries back at the entrance of the chamber. He grinned at them, mind racing to think of a way to escape. Turning back to the shining talisman, Faustus allowed his smile to fade. How was he goi-

"Look out!" Faustus yelled, his head snapping back to the men who held him captive. Before there had only been five of them, but now a sixth was standing directly behind the group. The mercenaries turned to where Faustus was pointing and saw a huge man, fully armoured standing before them with a pitch-black broadsword raised above his head. His armour bore the temple's symbol on it's shoulder-plates - the eagle's talons - and shone a deep purple and crimson colour. It was the sword that drew the attention though; it seemed to emit darkness, swallowing the immediate light surrounding it.

The mercenaries all screamed at this giant apparition, stumbling backwards to get away from his nightmarish sword. Lowering his weapon, the Talon Knight stepped forward, sweeping a hand to include the group of mercenaries and Faustus in what he was about to say. The voice that came was deep and loud, reverberating through the chamber like some unseen, powerful force. "I am the Talon Knight, and you are trespassing upon sacred land."

Faustus froze as he watched this living nightmare raise his weapon at the first man and cleave him in. What chilled Faustus more than the brutality of the killing was that there was no blood. There was not even a body. The murdered man had simply?imploded. And then disappeared.

The rest of the mercenary group had drawn their weapons but upon seeing their friend slain with such finality, all they could do was stand and tremble under the shadow of the Talon Knight. One by one, the armoured nightmare cleaved each man into oblivion as Faustus just stood there and watched, frozen from terror. The mens' weapons clattered to the floor, Faustus' quarterstaff amongst them.

Turning his gaze towards the pedestal, the Talon Knight pointed his palm at Faustus and slowly walked towards him. "I am the Talon Knight, and you will become nothing more than a shadow." With these words still echoing through the chamber, a fiery energy shot out of the knight?s palm; an energy resembling black fire, although Faustus imagined it to be far more destructive.

Catching himself just in time, Faustus tossed his body to the ground, rolled and came up running, leaving the dark fire to harmlessly melt the base of the pedestal. The Talon Knight did not expect Faustus to head directly towards him and was unprepared, swinging his heavy broadsword carelessly, missing the pickpocket's head by a few inches.

Grabbing his quarterstaff on the way, Faustus headed for the entrance to the chamber, hoping some sort of enchantment prevented the Talon Knight from following. A sudden explosion of fire threw Faustus to the floor, the heat of the black flames melting the marble frame of the entrance. Trapped, Faustus panicked, I?m trapped. My luck's finally run dry.

Lying on his back, Faustus watched helplessly as the Talon Knight, this nightmarish guardian, approached him for the killing blow. "I am the Talon Knight, and you will--"

Faustus retched as he was suddenly drenched in litres of blood. Unable to move from the shock that numbed his entire body and froze his very blood, Faustus saw the gory remains of the Talon Knight spread in a circle surrounding where he had originally been standing. Confused and drenched in foul-smelling gore, he attempted to work out the situation. Exploded...dead, luck...what?

Some sort of shining portal had replaced the Talon Knight. No, not replaced, Faustus thought through the haze, torn through... The impossible opening was about eight foot high and wide enough for three men to walk through, shoulder-to-shoulder. Suddenly, a group of tall, armoured soldiers strode through the portal, long halberds horizontal.

Stopping in front of Faustus, the soldiers kept their weapons levelled at him, but parted slightly to allow what appeared to be the leader of the group through. The soldier's armour gleamed white as newly fallen snow, but had familiar markings on the breast-and shoulder plates. The suit of clubs.

"You are to come with us." The leader spoke to Faustus firmly but with a slight hint of respect. His eyes had quickly taken in the bloody scene that surrounded the portal, and that covered Faustus. He wore similar armour to the rest of his soldiers, but it was adorned with a greater number of club symbols. His helmet was also extravagantly plumed.

Still trembling from the shock of his situation, Faustus was unable to respond; instead emitting a quiet gurgling sound from the back of his throat. Unconsciously, his hand tightened on the quarterstaff.

"I am the Nine of Clubs and have express orders to bring you back with me." The leader explained, loudly, wondering if perhaps this bloodstained individual was hard of hearing. Met with an uncomprehending stare from the pickpocket, Nine clicked his tongue in annoyance and gestured to his soldiers.

In one fluid motion, they surrounded Faustus and he dimly felt gauntleted hands grip and violently haul him to his feet. The situation was running away from him, and for once, Faustus couldn't move a muscle. Nine glared at Faustus as the soldiers marched him towards the portal, announcing to the new captive one last sentence. "You are to come with us, Talon Knight." At that point, Faustus lost consciousness.
He awoke long enough to see the outside of a dungeon cell before being hefted through the gate and hearing the ominous crash and click of his freedom being locked away. Through his numbing terror, Faustus realised he was naked. As he lay on his back in the cold, dark cell, staring up at the pristine ceiling tiles, one thought managed to break the cloudy surface of his mind. Just my luck.

*********

"But he is not the Talon Knight!" The Nine of Clubs roared, smashing his fist onto the table. He had repeated this exclamation numerous times over the course of the meeting, and the other Nines were beginning to tire of it. A day after the clubs had captured the young man, it was found that, in fact, he wasn?t the legendary nightmare that they so desperately sought as their champion.

Nine of Hearts gave Clubs a sultry look past her red-lacquered fingernails. "But he did kill the Talon Knight. That much is certain. If you don?t want him, the Hearts shall have him as a champion." Clubs grimaced at her, his large frame tensing under the struggle to control his temper again. The Nine of Hearts sighed. "He's pretty enough to warrant a place in our ranks..."

Since finding out that Faustus was merely a supremely lucky mortal, the Nines had been debating what to do with him. Clubs wanted the boy dead, but the other three suits saw his potential.

"We say again," Diamonds chimed in, the hive mind rightly using the pronoun 'we', "that he should be put under our care and supervision. The boy holds great power inside him; a power that could help our cause immensely if harnessed properly." The Nine of Diamonds nodded thoughtfully, as if agreeing to something in his mind. "Diamonds are clearly the best option for this...Faustus."

From the corner of the room, a small cough emanated, and the three Nines at the table turned to face Spades. He had said nothing, so far, to convince the others of the Spades' claim to the captive. Now though, he stepped forward, hands clasped at the base of his spine. "He is poor. Irrevocably so." The Nine of Spades spoke softly but with a commanding air, the other's held their attention to his humble words. "He is not a worker, but his economic status pushes him towards the Spades. You are right, Diamonds, he must be studied. I will allow you to do that, for the good of Chicane. This Faustus is destined for glory, but you must allow him to work his way up from the very bottom where he started." He paused, a smile flashing on his lips momentarily. "Much like a Spade, no?"

Unable to disagree with the Nine of Spades' logic, the other Nines agreed to his terms, leaving him to inform Faustus of his duty.

A slightly rushed end to Part 3 but I was bordering on 7 pages so I really wanted to finish it. That's it then...hopefully it's an interesting read. Criticism is welcome and appreciated. I'll take the next few days before we begin to check through it and make any edits I see fit.

EDIT (again): Had to change the Suit section of the sheet because it still said 'Diamonds' even though I changed it to 'Spades' in his intro.
 

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Alright I think I'll join, these threads always looked crazy fun, I'll start trying to brainstorm an interesting contestant and I'll try to have a sheet by the end of this week.
 

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@Yorgmiester I believe the deadline is two weeks after the threat started. That would make it October 20th.
 

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...And here is my entry. I decided to put the bio with the introductive passage as I thought they went well together, note that the 1st person in the bio is a one-off to introduce the character.

Name: Hui Li (pronounced "Hoy Lee")

Nickname: Hui

Age: 35

Appearance: Hui is slightly shorter than an average Chinese woman at around 5 foot, 2 and a half inches, relatively well-fed, a little wider round the stomach than she used to be before she became a mother. She has a somewhat pinched face and wears her almost black hair tightly in a bun.

Clothing: She is currently wearing a white office-style shirt and a grey skirt, well-worn but immaculately washed to match with her well-polished black shoes. She carries a cheap fabric hand-bag which she takes everywhere with her, containing a number of useful items such as a mobile phone and a pen, and also a small photograph of her young daughter Maya.

Weapons: She carries a small pen-knife in her hand-bag for protection and practical use but nothing else, in her native country possession of a weapon by a civilian is considered a very serious crime.

Powers: From a young age Hui has had the power to find hidden or lost things. These can be objects, beings or even hidden/suppressed memories. She used the power for many years with her lover and boss Chojun to find lost magical artefacts and spirits until one day she found something so terrible that it led to her fleeing him, going into hiding and swearing never to use her power again. For seven years she has stuck to this oath.

Strengths: Her power is her main asset in this tournament. She also speaks both Mandarin Chinese and English fluently due to her education and career. She is determined to do anything to get the chance to see her daughter again and wouldn't hesitate to injure or even kill someone to achieve that goal. In a fight she is more agile than you might expect for someone of her age and figure due to her past work.

Weaknesses: She is physically weak compared to most opponents and has very meagre experience with weapons or hand-to-hand combat. When she get's angry she's more likely to make mistakes.

Personality: Hui is quiet but likes to think she's strong-willed when it comes to her own interests; however in reality she often feels unconfident to oppose others except when she is angry, admittedly this does happen rather easily. She is generally untalkative and distrustful of strangers, particularly if they inquire after her family-life. She doesn't like to show emotion in front of others as it makes her feel weak. She is religious, believing mainly the traditional Chinese beliefs from the village she grew up in, though she is somewhat agnostic on whether it is fully accurate or not.

Fear: Her greatest fear is either harm befalling her daughter back at home, or herself never being able to return to her. Other than that, she still fears the memory of her own mother even after almost two decades, and the dead or unknown in general scare her.

Suit: Diamonds

Bio: See the section below.


35 years, 4 months, 26 days, 13 hours, 47 minutes and 9 seconds.

It's frightening how fast my life went by. I was born in nineteen seventy four in a small rural village in the Shandong region of China. I never knew my father, my mother always said he was dead and it was only when I grew up that I realised the gaps in her various explanations. My mother took the truth to her grave but I suspect he ran away with someone-else. I never had the heart to use my power to find out more, I didn't really want to meet the man who had abandoned my infant self. One of my first memories was myself finding a spoon that my mother had lost, she beat me since she thought there was no way I could have known where it was other than hiding it. Only I knew the truth though, somehow I could find anything if I tried hard enough, even if it was hidden in the most improbable location imaginable. As a child I used the power to find toys lost by other children to play with, later as a teen I found out many of the village secrets which the elders tried so desperately to hide. I instinctively knew my traditional parent would despise my magical ability however, so I kept it secret and studied hard as she wished. She made no secret of the fact that she would have preferred a son, so I worked as hard as I could to earn her love. Through this and my natural intellect I managed to gain a scholarship and at the age of seventeen moved to the nearest large city, Jinan, to study foreign languages.

It was there I met the biological sciences professor, Dr. Chojun Kimura. He was in his mid-thirties and Japanese, exactly the sort of partner my mother would have hated. I guess that's partly why I fell for him. As I got to know him I realised he was studying special people, people like me. He was the first person I ever divulged my abilities to, and he loved me all the more for it when I told him. The first time we made love was one of the greatest moments in my life. Our secret affair seemed doomed however by my mother's expectations of me, until luck stroke. Aged just 46, she was found dead in her bed one morning, the coroner said it was probably a heart-attack. As horrible as it sounds to say about my own mother, I was elated to finally be free of her.

For the first time in my life I had freedom. I dropped out of college with Chojun, who wanted to set up his own company to investigate and study people with special abilities. Any profits were a long-shot, but there were more than enough rich investors who had a personal interest in the subject to keep it running smoothly. I helped my partner create a front to pretend our laboratory was simply investigating disease to protect our work from prying outside eyes.

The next ten years were a high point; we travelled the world together finding out about magic, learning more than possibly anyone had before. We encountered all manner of magicians, friendly and hostile spirits, even the fabled Excalibur. Most of our trips were successes thanks to my ability to find what we wanted, though there were a few failures, mostly notably our search for the Holy Grail. Then however... I used my power where it should never have been used and too late I learned could not be unlearned. I was left distraught and with no choice but to start again, away from Chojun Kimura and his work. I wasn't alone this time though, for this time I had my newborn daughter Maya with me.

Life began to clear up again and things didn't seem so bad after-all. Using my previously abandoned language skills I became a translator for a legal business and began to teach my own child English so one day she'd have the chance to get a good job with a foreign company. I swore that I would be a better mother to her than my own had been to me, and I raised her with all the love and care I could. It wasn't easy doing that on my own, especially as from the moment I first saw her I could tell she was special like me, a skill I had picked up during my years with Chojun. If our secret was to stay safe then I had no choice but to educate her myself, away from the dangers of the real world. Luckily despite that she grew up to be what seemed to me at-least to be a happy child, our all too quick seven years together were the second high point in my life. It was a wet April evening when I left my work to return home to her, never to arrive. Somewhere along the way my past sins finally caught up with me and paradise once again came to an end.

Thus after 35 years, 4 months, 26 days, 13 hours, 47 minutes and 9 seconds, I died. This is the story of what happened afterwards.


~​

Hui groaned, her entire body ached as she lay on the hard stone floor. One thought repeated itself through her mind, again and again.

I'm dead, it's all over, I'll never see my daughter again...

Presently she heard a cough and the woman groggily opened her eyes, peering up at a dark figure standing in front of her. It appeared to be humanoid, but oddly more rectangular.

"Welcome. I am the Eight of Diamonds, one of the card people of this land." The voice was female, on closer inspection her angular shape seemed to be down to the playing-card shaped suit she was wearing.

"So there really is an after-life." Hui muttered under her breath, and then spoke louder to the card "So I suppose I'm going to judged now am I?"

"No no no!" Eight said with a laugh "I have already judged you from beyond this world and seen that beneath your ordinary appearance, there's something powerful, something we need. Our world is facing one of it's greatest threats and the only thing that can save us is a champion."

"Wait a minute... so you brought me here?" Hui was starting to feel angry "Just who the hell do you think you are? My child is waiting at home for me to return from my work, what on Earth does this threat have to do with me?"

"Nothing at-all." Eight replied curtly "But your early feelings weren't mistaken. You really did perish back in your world and only my intervention has saved you from being fast-tracked to whatever happens there after death. How it happened, I don?t know and honestly I don?t care. Your choice is simple."

"What do you want from me?" Hui said darkly, only her shock at her hunch being right keeping her from screaming out. What would Maya do without her? If she was lucky she would end up in an orphanage fighting over meagre scraps of food with countless other scrawny children, if she was unlucky she would end up on the street where heaven knows what kind of sick filth would approach a lost seven year old girl. Hui shuddered, the thought was too terrible to even consider.

Eight smiled, wringing her hands. "For the next twenty one days fight other warriors plucked out of neighbouring universes, be the last one standing and you might just get the chance to see your daughter again. Take it or leave it, it?s easy enough for me to send you back to the void."

The card turned to leave but before she could Hui was on her feet again.

"Hey, what will I fight the others with? I'm no warrior!"

"You know how. You always have. I'll be back later for your answer." With that Eight left the room, closing the heavy wooden door with a click behind her. Hui sunk to the floor in despair; she knew exactly what the card was talking about.

I swore never to use my powers again after what happened... but Maya, how can I risk leaving her alone unloved in such a cruel world?

Hui wracked her brains but the memory of how she died, assuming the card was telling the truth, seemed just out of her grasp. She remembered leaving the office to walk back home, buying some fruit from a street-vendor and then... nothing more. From her work with Chojun she knew that magical beings could be notoriously cunning and this could all be a trick, revenge for something she had taken in the past? Somehow that didn't seem right though and she felt tears welling up in her eyes as she acknowledged that there was a good chance she really had died back on the cold streets of Jinan city.

If there's anything you need me to expand on, confirm or change, don't hesitate to say so. On a unrelated note it's great to see so many experienced RPers on this thread, this will be an interesting competition indeed.
 

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Name: Izumi

Nickname: The Frost Demon of Makoto

Age: 24

Appearance: Izumi stands at about 5'7 and is what most people would consider to be fairly scrawny, being very thin and having little muscle. He has long black hair that goes down to around his shoulders and his eyes are a dark blue color.

Clothing: Izumi?s clothing is designed to give him maximum mobility. He wears long black pants that are somewhat baggy to obscure the location of his legs slightly. He also wears a blue long sleeve shirt made of wool to keep him warm during combat. Underneath his shirt he has a light layer of leather armor to grant some small amount of protection, but not restrict his movements.

Weapons: Izumi carries two swords tied to his left side. The first is a normal katana. The second is an enchanted katana called Suijin, translated to God of Water. It's sheath is a light blue with a drop of water, a shard of ice, and a cloud of mist engraved on it.

Powers: Izumi himself has no extraordinary powers. His sword Suijin wields the power to store water and unleash it whenever the wielder so chooses and in any form.

Strengths: Izumi is one of the most skilled and feared warriors in his land. He has an eye for spotting holes in his enemies defenses and the speed and skill required to exploit them. His mastery of Suijin gives him the power to unleash some devastating attacks.

Weaknesses: Though he is fast, he lacks any significant strength. Also, his frail body does not take blows very well. His world is still rather primitive in terms of technology so many of the more advanced weapons technologies will be foreign and confusing to him.

Personality: Izumi is a rather quiet and passive man. He is fiercely loyal to his lord and absolutely refuses to go against his lords wishes in any way. He respects warriors who recognize his strength and despises those who look down upon him due to his size. he has often been described as cold and unmoving like ice, a large part of what earned him his current title.

Fear: Izumi fears failing his lord more than anything. Also, his powers being heavily rooted in water and ice, he has an intense dislike of fire.

Suit: Clubs.

Bio: Izumi was born into a land of war, where minor warlords fought against each other in hopes of becoming major powers that could shape the political landscape. Warriors are the most valuable asset and to be a warrior during such times a man needed strength, endurance, and stamina. Izumi had none of these things. No matter how hard he trained his body stayed weak, and his peers ridiculed him for it constantly. But where others saw only a weak foolish boy, one man saw incredible potential.

That man was Yamada Makoto, an aspiring warlord who sought to take the world by storm with his inventive and brilliant strategies. His belief that battles were not always won with overwhelming strength, led him to take a liking to someone like Izumi and Makoto took the boy under his wing. He taught Izumi that to try and be stronger than his peers was foolhardy and that he should instead try to outwit them. After years of training and preparing the two were ready. They had gathered a formidable army and developed an unbeatable battle. Before heading into battle, Makoto gifted Izumi with his prized sword Suijin and sent him out to show the world what a scrawny warrior like him could do. That victory was the first of many and soon the world would respect and fear Yamada Makoto and his Frost Demon.


A light snow fell over the bloodstained battlefield, as Izumi stood atop the frozen hill overlooking it all. Around him were bodies impaled on icicles jutting from the ground, men floating face up in large pools of mud having been drowned after sinking into them in their heavy armor, and men who had simply been sliced into pieces. To some it would be a hellish sight, but for Izumi there was little more beautiful than seeing his enemies and the enemies of Lord Makoto lying dead before him. As he admired his work, he thought back to the battle and tried to ascertain just what about it had been bothering him. He turned to the rider behind him. ?Head back to camp. Inform Lord Makoto that this force was a diversion and the main body should still be nearby. I will scout out their location and return with a report as soon as I can.?

As the rider sped off back to their camp, Izumi turned to head out himself only to find himself face to face with a large heavily armored man. He was encased in white armor from head to toe with strange black symbols on it that looked like some sort of plant. As Izumi reached for Suijin, the man held up a hand and began to spoke. ?Stay your blade, Izumi. I have not come to fight. I have a request for you. You will listen.? The man stated in a matter-of-fact tone.

Images flooded Izumi?s mind. A pile of corpses. A demented but powerful monster. A battle, lost. It took him a moment to work through everything he had seen, but finally it made sense. ?You want me to fight that??

?Yes. You will obey. Now let us go. 21 days is barely enough time to prepare for such a fearsome foe.? The man replied, in the same tone as before implying that Izumi had no choice in the matter.

And Izumi didn?t like that. ?I will not. My service is already sworn to another. I am needed to seek out my lord?s enemies and destroy them. I have no time to deal with the foul beasts that plague your land.? Izumi said to the man before walking past him.

The man held out his hand, and suddenly Izumi found himself frozen in place. ?You. Will. Obey. Is your lord such a fragile man that he cannot win his own battles without your help? What conceit! Besides, should you succeed in defeating the Joker you shall gain his powers. Powers that would be very helpful to your lord I should imagine.?

Izumi paused and thought about it for a moment. The man had a point, Lord Makoto would know no defeat whether Izumi was there or not. And more strength for their cause was a worthy pursuit as well. But could he defeat such a foe? No, it was not a matter of can or cannot. If it was for Lord Makoto, he had to do it. Simple as that. ??.. I accept. Let?s go then. I don?t want to waste any more time on this than I need to.?

The man nodded. ?Very well. You are now in the service of the Clubs of Chicane. Do not fail us.? And with that the two vanished from that world, to be seen again only if they emerged victorious.

Looking forward to this. Let me know if you have any questions or if anything needs to be changed.
 

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Fragrance of Mtn Dew said:
Looking forward to this. Let me know if you have any questions or if anything needs to be changed.
As a fellow player, there's a couple of questions I have for you:

1) Given his name and the general theme in your sheet, I'm guessing your character is Japanese, despite the blue eyes, but a confirmation would be nice.

2) I suspect the "Frost Demon" is just a nickname but to check, he isn't actually a demon is he?

Also it's not a question but I'd recommend you join this group now as there's already been several pages of discussion on it.

http://www.escapistmagazine.com/groups/members/The-Ratings-War
 

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Wow, I just re-read the final 5 entries of RW V and...I was just as amazed as the first time I read them but I forgot how depressing they were. Either way, it will be really hard for future RWs to top that finally since it ended with literally the creation of the entire universe. I am so glad you two (Shanks and ZF)aren't fighting in this one because...damn.
 

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Crap, seeing as some people put in introductions in their sheet I guess I have to do so too huh?

I'll come up with something later on...
 

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Viking Incognito said:
Wow, I just re-read the final 5 entries of RW V and...I was just as amazed as the first time I read them but I forgot how depressing they were. Either way, it will be really hard for future RWs to top that finally since it ended with literally the creation of the entire universe. I am so glad you two (Shanks and ZF)aren't fighting in this one because...damn.
But they are competing...It says they're sheets are pending. Scroll up and you'll find a list of contestants... Most are pending but until their names disappear form the list then we should assume they're competing.