The Ratings War VI: Aces High - Round 1 (Closed - Judging)

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Hmm... Wonder if I'm too late to the party? Anyway, here's my application.

Name: Karl Granville Mandelbaum
Nickname: Doctor (Sc. D.)
Age: 33

Appearance: Karl stands at about 5'9" feet tall and weighs around 140 lbs with pale white skin and a rather skinny and sinewy frame. His short brown hair is slightly unruly and looks like little care has been taken to brush it or make it look more presentable, and his blue eyes have a mild murky quality to them making them appear a bit blue-grey. Since he has a tendency to not care too much about his appearance his chin almost constantly has a five a clock shadow on it which he only shaves when he's prodded by his superiors.

Clothing: Karl prefers to dress in comfortable and practical attire, loathing such things as formal attire. His usual attire consists of a pair of black jeans held up by a simple leather belt, a blue button-up shirt that has the top button undone and hangs outside his pants, and a pair of well-worn brown leather shoes. On top of this he will most likely be found wearing a white lab coat with several small chemical stains on the front and a few blotches of ink at the bottom of the breast pocket, and (when he's not forgotten it somewhere) his name tag stating his title, name and department. When he's preforming tests he's also required to wear a breathing mask covering his mouth and nose that protects against most chemical fumes and gases.

Weapons: Karl carries no items designed to be weapons, but his most notable piece of equipment has to be a prototype of what researchers in his world call a 'miniaturized atomic forge'. In it's usual inactive state it could simply be mistaken for an oddly shaped metallic backpack of sorts, with many rings and straps attached to two metal handles running the length of each side of the pack. But in it's active state all the metallic bands and straps are applied to the wearers arms and stretch a series of wires and jointed tubes over his shoulders and down his arms to the back of his hands, at the same time the numerous air intakes along the sides of the device become apparent, along with the many yellow danger stickers. The device allows for theoretically unlimited fission and fusion of atoms to construct any material needed at any time from the usual molecules and atoms found in air, the newly constructed atoms are then sent to the users hands and fused into larger chunks of material there, held in place by a strong localized magnetic field. Due to the limit of the devices intake mechanism it will not be able to construct vast amounts of materials, but as a piece of science equipment it was never intended to be used that way.

Powers: None besides what is granted to him by the atomic forge. Even though he has the knowledge to possibly utilize it in a variety of situations.

Strengths: Karl excels in using a 'mind-over-matter' approach, using his knowledge of chemistry and physics to adapt and gain the upper hand in a situation, this leads to a great deal of opportunism from his side, but he's not exactly worried about fighting dirty. The atomic forge supplements his knowledge well, and with it he has the potential to turn a disadvantageous battlefield into one where he's calling the shots. He's also been told that he's a good runner, something that will surely help his odds of survival.

Weaknesses: Karl is a coward, and will keep away from anything he deems to dangerous, be that opponents, terrain or anything else. However, he is also very reckless, and will sometimes disregard immediate safety if he personally deems it 'rather likely' that he won't die or be grievously harmed. The atomic forge also has it's limits when it comes to creating large amounts of materials, and it is also an item to be used with the utmost care, as evident by one of the yellow warning stickers reading 'WARNING! Unshielded reactor core. Please use adequate personal protection.'

Personality: Karl believes himself to be an educated and intellectual individual, but sometimes seems to be less in touch with what most people would call common sense. He doesn't believe in any real concept of honor, seeing that as a quick way to handicap oneself, and also doesn't care much for the opinions of others unless it is presented in an academic fashion. Being an atheist he denounces all forms of afterlife as lies by those who cannot come to grips with the fact that they will die one day, but is likewise very protective of his own life, not wanting his ideas and knowledge to be lost to the world, and the world be lost to him.

Fear: Bodily harm, wasting diseases, Alzheimer's disease, and very tight spaces (mild claustrophobia). He is also notorious for his arachnophobia, he can't stand being close to spiders and gets a very compelling urge to squash any who cross his path, unless their size is an issue, in which case he will avoid them like the plague. He is often bothered by intense crawling sensations upon his skin in the immediate aftermath of encountering an arachnid, as well as a mild form of paranoia.

Suit: Diamonds (Or Spades)

Bio: Karl grew up the only child of the headmaster of his nations most prestigious univeristy, and as such had many expectations placed upon his shoulders from a young age. His family wanted him to become an excellent academic, focusing on the fine arts and literature like his famous father, and hired private tutors to help groom him. As a result of this Karl grew distant from his own family, spending most of the time at school or being taught by the tutors back home. However, despite this (or perhaps because of this) Karl found himself being draw more towards the clear and defined subjects such as physics, chemistry, and biology, much to his family's annoyance. Soon he started becoming fixated on facts and scientific evidence, deciding to cast aside subjects he no longer saw important in the grand scheme of things, like theology, poetry, and literature.

When it became obvious that he wasn't going to become a 'true' academic of the arts like his father, Karl was sent away to the neighbouring country to study at the univeristy there at his father's 'request'. In reality Karl had at this point been given the choice to either shape up and follow his fathers directions, or leave with enough money to get him though university, but also be disowned. Having chosen the latter option, Karl wasn't surprised in the least when he found his family adopting a promising student from his fathers university to serve as his 'heir', but neither did he hold it against them, as they had hardly felt like a family at all to him.

Embracing this 'exile' he had been sent in, Karl fullfilled his dream of following the path of the sciences, and after many years at the university graduated as a Doctor of the sciences with flying colors. Shortly after he got hired as one of the lead researchers on a government founded project to miniaturize and test the groundbreaking 'atomic forge', as even though it was a truly awe inspiring achievement, it still didn't have any real practical applications.

"So this time we've managed to solve the input problem? Is that what this eye HUD thing is, Eric?" Dr. Karl asked as he fastened the straps of the new and presumably improved atomic forge around his right arm, having already strapped the rest of the machine in place moments earlier.

"Indeed, it helps with the element selection I'm told, and also helps immensely when it comes to constructing more complicated molecules. Like, you know when Henry had trouble making copper alloys and had to lump up atoms of each type into each of the fields and then combine them by bringing them together? Yeah, no longer. Now we can manage that straight off the bat." His colleague, Dr. Eric explained to him while he looked over the check list of the device, making sure it would operate as intended, or more or less as intended given that it was still very much a prototype.

"Sounds intriguing. By the way, speaking of Henry, why is he absent from this test?"

"Ah, well... He fainted due to inhaling toxic fumes while he was experimenting with the fields ability to contain certain molecules, he'll be alright I'm told. Just the legal department kicking up a fuzz about it all... Which reminds me." Eric checked off another point on the clipboard in his hands as he handed a breathing mask to Karl. "We have to wear these whenever conducting any testing from now on, otherwise we won't get any medical benefits, oh, and they'll probably mess with our funding if we don't."

Taking the breathing mask from Eric, Karl sighed as he pulled the straps over his head and fasted it in place. "Next they'll have us wearing hazard suits... Does everything check out?"

"Yes, it's ready. I need to head over to Geoffrey's to see how the numbers are adding up so I'll turn on the warning light and close the door on my way out. See you around lunch time, alright?"

"Right, see you then." Karl heard the clipboard being placed down on the table next to him and shortly thereafter Eric left the room and sealed the doors leading into the lab. 'Alright, time to get started here. What is first on the list for today?' Karl had only just picked up his notebook and started flipping through it when he heard the sound of footsteps behind him.

"Hey, Eric. You know I can't start the test with two people in here, didn't yo..." His words trailed off as he turned around to stand face to face with a researcher he hadn't seen before, he wore a standard lab coat but instead of the usual name tag he only had the sign of diamonds pinned on his chest.

Momentarily lost for words at this unknown and unexpected visitor Karl soon got to his senses again. "I don't know who you are, but this lab is currently off limits, hence the yellow light outside and the locked doors. So I'm afraid you'll have to exit the way you came."

"Afraid not, Karl Granville Mandelbaum. We have need of your services and as such we will not be leaving this room without you." The man spoke with no change in his expression, as if it was just normal for him to barge into a restricted area and make demands, truth be told it made Karl feel more than just a little uneasy.

"Uhm... Alright... What exactly could you need me specifically for?" Hopefully this would be some kind of misunderstanding or prank, but this person seemed a bit too serious for that. Anyway, getting him off his back and out of this room seemed like the best course of action. "Because, you know, you could just go speak to the department chief. He'll find someone to help you, I'm sure. Because I'm... Kinda busy, like."

"A reasonable response. At least, under normal circumstances." Karl started stepping backwards, he refused to believe in such things as the supernatural, and yet, it was a distinct supernatural sort of feeling this person was giving off right now. "But these are not normal circumstances, and I don't have the time to be leisurely explaining something you seem reluctant to believe. As such..." A pair of hands shot out from behind him and caught him under his arms, holding him firmly in a lock of some kind. Karl tried to struggle against it, his heart feeling like it was almost literally in his throat as panic flooded his brain. "... You will be coming with us whether you like it or not." The straps to his mask loosened as a piece of wet cloth was shoved between the mask and his face, his brain managing to vaguely identify the chemical it was laced with as his own panicked gasps became his undoing.

Any input is welcome, even though it might be too late to change anything.
 

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RBMidknight said:
JoJoDeathunter said:
Here's hoping another Club shows up, as I kind of prefer Diamonds. Wouldn't personally classify the ability my character has as magical. I haven't read many of the other sheets yet I'll probably go through 'em all tomorrow.
Precognition is magical by most definitions, unless you have a sci-fi style explanation for it. Not that's there's any shame in using magic, at a guess I'd say at-least half the contestants here use some sort of magical power :)

Baldrek said:
Karl Granville Mandelbaum
This isn't strictly input but I recommend you join this user-group:

http://www.escapistmagazine.com/groups/members/The-Ratings-War
 

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Tips_of_Fingers said:
Interesting character with a concept that allows for variety. Just one question though. Does she have unlimited magical coins?
No she doesn't; she usually get them from her friends the elves, or if they magical gold coins create more magical coins from random effects. (^_^)

Tips_of_Fingers said:
"She's an efficient tracker," but "Often gets too engrossed in thought and/or memory that she loses her bearings." I understand it, but the contradiction made me laugh.
Now that you mention it, it does seem contradictory... Figured I could do something that could make her more human and lighthearted.

Tips_of_Fingers said:
I like your character...seems light-hearted and fun. The random-item-spawning coins sound like a good laugh.
Oh, I certainly hope so. Also see a lot of interesting characters to play with. I'd certainly enjoy playing with 'em. :)
 

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Doc Gnosis said:
Tips_of_Fingers said:
Interesting character with a concept that allows for variety. Just one question though. Does she have unlimited magical coins?
No she doesn't; she usually get them from her friends the elves, or if they magical gold coins create more magical coins from random effects. (^_^)

Tips_of_Fingers said:
"She's an efficient tracker," but "Often gets too engrossed in thought and/or memory that she loses her bearings." I understand it, but the contradiction made me laugh.
Now that you mention it, it does seem contradictory... Figured I could do something that could make her more human and lighthearted.

Tips_of_Fingers said:
I like your character...seems light-hearted and fun. The random-item-spawning coins sound like a good laugh.
Oh, I certainly hope so. Also see a lot of interesting characters to play with. I'd certainly enjoy playing with 'em. :)
The random-generation effects of your character's coins and the immense luck that affects my character and everything around him could make for a very interesting battle if we end up against each other lol.
 

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We have 20 people now, so time to wrap this up. Submissions are now closed.

[HEADING=1]The Ratings War VI: Aces High - Cast[/HEADING]

[HEADING=2]Judges[/HEADING]
revolverwolf
sky14kemea
NeoAC

[HEADING=2]Contestants[/HEADING]
SPADES

staika - Troy
Nukey - Isaac
elementsoul - Wight
Tips_of_Fingers - Faustus
000Ronald - Soneyo

DIAMONDS

CounterAttack - Daman Ra
Armitage Shanks - Dimitry Shanks
JoJoDeathunter - Hui
Doc Gnosis - The Solver
Baldrek - Doctor

CLUBS

Segadroid - The Mantle
Fragrance of Mtn Dew - Izumi
Zombie_Fish - James
ThreeWords - William Darke
RBMidknight - Zayin

HEARTS

Hafrael - Smiles
Lost In The Void - Underwood
Khedive Rex - Baramiah
wesdabigman - Reject
Viking Incognito - Shift

I've reworked it so that there are 5 in each based on suggestion - I changed RBMidknight's character to Clubs and Viking Incognito's to Hearts. If either of you are against this change, please let me know and I will do by best to bridge an impasse here.

When I gather the time and patience, I will bring this list into the OP and edit in links to every character sheet so that we can all compare notes easily. I will provide links to round entries in the OP as they happen as well. In the mean time, could I please have everyone merge their character sheets and Intros into one post? If you can send a link to it to me via PM as well, I will be eternally grateful.

Round 1 will begin this Wednesday, but check back until then because I might have some other things to dish out before we delve into the streets of Chicane.
 

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All right! I am ready to be impressed here folks! Get ready to make these live up to the past winners of this thread!

I hope that was a suitably epic judges announcement.
 

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An updated sheet and intro. I've replaced the Ace of clubs with the Jack, and assumed he has a habit of appearing in the uniform relevant to wherever he arrives.

Name: William Darke
Nickname: The Evening Star (This is more a title than a nickname, but hey...)
Age: 21

Appearance: William Darke is, in truth, a slim man of moderate height, lean features, pale complexion and dark, messy hair. He looks slightly awkward, and a little shifty at the best of times. At least, that is how he would appear in a photograph, or seen form a great distance.. In person, however, he has a an air of power and nobility, a look in the eyes or a way of standing that suggests a man not only of greatness but but goodness. At his back there are the faint outlines of something apparently made of gossamer and distracted light.
When provoked, this air of nobility takes on a harsh nature, and the power of his gaze is hard to meet. The glimmer becomes full fleshed, and is revealed to be angelic wings. He appears to glow with light, as if a light is shining on him form nowhere.

Clothing: William's clothing was once fine, but has suffered significant wear and tear since his traveling began. He wears dark trousers, a once white shirt and a long, battered coat, and when expecting combat he will wear a coat of mail between shirt and coat. His leather boots are knee high, and his wide brimmed hat is of fine, heavy material, though more than a little battered

Weapons: William wields a study longsword of unremarkable steel; notched but sharp, simple yet robust. For protection, he has only his clothing and mailcoat

Powers: William is possessed by the Evening Star, an angel of moderate power and (technically) benevolent intentions. When it chooses, though this is not always when William wants, the angel will manifest itself, imbuing his body with it's aura and guiding his actions. He becomes stronger, faster and apparently, taller, and boasts feathered wings and a resistance to magic; the angel takes to disrupting or redirecting spells aimed at him. His sword glows with holy fire, and the angel guides his arm to make him more skilful (he is unnaturally skilled, but by no means insurmountable)

Strengths: When the Evening Star manifests, William is incredibly dangerous; a danger to mages and swordsmen alike. His endurance knows no bounds, and he can shrug off injury with reckless abandon. At this point, the best idea would be to flee.

Weaknesses: The Evening Star cannot manifest for too long, or it's power will begin to cause serious on the body it inhabits. Before it appears and after it is gone, William is just a man with a sword; clever, mean and unafraid to do what it takes to win, but a man none the less.

Personality: William would probably describe himself as somewhere between the Romantic and Byronic heroes, and he would have certainly approved of Nietzsche, had they ever met.
Very rarely does anyone exist in absolute terms; William indeed is one who is better suited to the grey areas. He believes less in morality than fairness; that he should tell only as much truth as he is told, that he can take what he wants as long as the fight for it is fair, and that he can do as he wills until someone else tries to stop him. As such, he is at best disagreeable to figures of authority, and actively fights against any form of established rule.
William is a man of fiery passion and feverish intellect. When fixed on a task, he will pursue it with all the might available to his body and sole, often to the extent of self harm.
Time spent in the company of the angel has made him disillusioned toward conventional moralities, though he was hardly a moral man to begin with. As such, he disproves both of both the moral and immoral, finding fault with those who cause harm and those who inflict their rules on others. He would have approved strongly on Nietzsche's amoral principles, where one accords to an instinctual sense of rightness, as opposed to laws set down to regulate correctness.

Among people, William can be very awkward; through the angel, he sees people in their worst light, and finds it hard to trust people or be friendly with them. The few friends he makes are very dear to him, and he finds it hard to leave them behind when the angel compels him to travel.

Fear: William fears the Evening Star above all; he lives in constant connection to it, and he has discovered that perfect goodness does not mean perfect kindness. The angel is judgement incarnate; it looks down on all mortals for their impurities, and what little of it's mind he glimpses in harsh and mathematical in it's function.
He furthermore is afraid of losing what he can only describe as his self; for he believes that as a poet, and as a vessel to an angel, he has been designated as some form of higher man, and that to descend to the level of common man would be a loss of indescribable fatality.


Suit: The Suit of clubs best matches the angel that resides in William Darke; it too is a being of violence bound by a strict code of morality to which all else is secondary.

Bio: It night be said that only poets and madmen walked the hills in winter, and William Darke would be the first to claim he fitted both categories. He was a writer of no small talent, considered by a moderate audience to be a visionary in his own lifetime. He had thrown off all conventional virtue is a search, he claimed, for a source of guidance. In practice, this meant a life of wine, women and song, of petty immoralities that made him as popular for his debauchery as for his writing. What he least expected was to have this deeper guidance thrust upon him.

It was all going to be explained in that one song; a love song and a exploration of the human sole, and furthermore an opening of his own soul tot he void to welcome in whatever being ruled the world. When he awoke after a night of feverish work, he found to his horror that he had indeed opened the doors to his soul, and that something had slipped in. In trying to prove that there were no spirits above, he had left himself open to an act of divine irony.


Possessed by the Evening Star, he could no longer bear the pleasures he had once enjoyed, and furthermore could write not a single stanza of verse. His muse had gone, and in it's p-lace he found only an undeniable urge to travel the land. Where he met evil, his sword was flame and he could do nothing but slay and slay, and then upon him again came the urge to roam.

He wandered for a time, killing all that was evil, and even learning a little about fighting as the angel wielded his body like a weapon. For a time he gloried in the power, but soon he became sick, both of the violence and of the lack of control, and further he was afraid of the effect that the angel's power might have on his body. He tried to have it exorcised once, but awoke the find the mystic dead, with a single cauterised wound though the heart.

Since then, he has continued his wandering, more afraid than ever of the angel. He hopes, more than anything else, for a way to escape the angel.

William wept. As the tears rolled down his face, his blade licked out and severed a man's throat before revering to slice across the eyes. The poor man made no sound as he fell, and William hoped he had died instantly. But it was too late to check; he spread his wings and leapt to the air.

The thieves had closed in with the night; as the shadows grew long they emerged from the trees, and demanded a purse from his before he died. Among them were men who looked scared and unhappy, and William knew that it was due to the wars that these men had turned to crime. But the angel would not care.

He had warned them, pleaded with them, begged even, but they did not care and thought only that he was afraid for himself. Then the Evening Star rose, and the slaughter began.

Propelled by the wings, he leapt forwards and his blade clove a man in two. A twang and a whistle and a bolt whistled harmlessly past; William swung to face a terrified young man clutching a crossbow. He is no more than a child! he screamed, but the voice only sounded in his head. The angels reply was harsh and direct, without words and felt only as a feeling. He fought with all his might, but all he achieved was an ache in his arm that would be a terrible pain tomorrow. The boy died, just the same.

There was one left, the leader. This man wore fine clothes, and was armed with no mere farm instrument; his was a rapier, and he fenced admirably. The first boat lasted three seconds, and the bandit was left with a cut to the arm and a singed beard. But suddenly William felt a lightening of his load, and realised that the angel was leaving. Remorse turned rapidly to fear as he realised that he stood no chance against this gentleman thief.

As his attackers wings faded, the bandit leader blinked and stepped forwards. The man's guard seemed less sure now, and he had lost that terrible aura. Why, he was just some man who knew how to cast illusions. Well, they wouldn't help him now...

The thief sized him up and was about to attack; William knew he would die without the angel. Searching for it, he tried to communicate; but the angel seemed not lazy but afraid of something. His surprise and confusion increased as the bandit cried out awkwardly and fell to the ground.

Before him, William could see a bizarre figure. A tall man, dressed in black military garb, and carrying a three headed flail. The man strode forward, and as he bowed the angel quailed. William felt some fear, but somehow a being that the angel feared gave him some little reassurance.

"William Darke?" asked the stranger, "Host to the Evening Star? I am the Jack of Clubs, and I believe you can help us with a matter of great urgency. In return, we may be able to help you with an inconvenience you suffer. I do hope we can come to an agreement..."
 

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Name: William Darke
Nickname: The Evening Star (This is more a title than a nickname, but hey...)
Age: 21

Appearance: William Darke is, in truth, a slim man of moderate height, lean features, pale complexion and dark, messy hair. He looks slightly awkward, and a little shifty at the best of times. At least, that is how he would appear in a photograph, or seen form a great distance.. In person, however, he has a an air of power and nobility, a look in the eyes or a way of standing that suggests a man not only of greatness but but goodness. At his back there are the faint outlines of something apparently made of gossamer and distracted light.
When provoked, this air of nobility takes on a harsh nature, and the power of his gaze is hard to meet. The glimmer becomes full fleshed, and is revealed to be angelic wings. He appears to glow with light, as if a light is shining on him form nowhere.

Clothing: William's clothing was once fine, but has suffered significant wear and tear since his traveling began. He wears dark trousers, a once white shirt and a long, battered coat, and when expecting combat he will wear a coat of mail between shirt and coat. His leather boots are knee high, and his wide brimmed hat is of fine, heavy material, though more than a little battered

Weapons: William wields a study longsword of unremarkable steel; notched but sharp, simple yet robust. For protection, he has only his clothing and mailcoat

Powers: William is possessed by the Evening Star, an angel of moderate power and (technically) benevolent intentions. When it chooses, though this is not always when William wants, the angel will manifest itself, imbuing his body with it's aura and guiding his actions. He becomes stronger, faster and apparently, taller, and boasts feathered wings and a resistance to magic; the angel takes to disrupting or redirecting spells aimed at him. His sword glows with holy fire, and the angel guides his arm to make him more skilful (he is unnaturally skilled, but by no means insurmountable)

Strengths: When the Evening Star manifests, William is incredibly dangerous; a danger to mages and swordsmen alike. His endurance knows no bounds, and he can shrug off injury with reckless abandon. At this point, the best idea would be to flee.

Weaknesses: The Evening Star cannot manifest for too long, or it's power will begin to cause serious on the body it inhabits. Before it appears and after it is gone, William is just a man with a sword; clever, mean and unafraid to do what it takes to win, but a man none the less.

Personality: William would probably describe himself as somewhere between the Romantic and Byronic heroes, and he would have certainly approved of Nietzsche, had they ever met.
Very rarely does anyone exist in absolute terms; William indeed is one who is better suited to the grey areas. He believes less in morality than fairness; that he should tell only as much truth as he is told, that he can take what he wants as long as the fight for it is fair, and that he can do as he wills until someone else tries to stop him. As such, he is at best disagreeable to figures of authority, and actively fights against any form of established rule.
William is a man of fiery passion and feverish intellect. When fixed on a task, he will pursue it with all the might available to his body and sole, often to the extent of self harm.
Time spent in the company of the angel has made him disillusioned toward conventional moralities, though he was hardly a moral man to begin with. As such, he disproves both of both the moral and immoral, finding fault with those who cause harm and those who inflict their rules on others. He would have approved strongly on Nietzsche's amoral principles, where one accords to an instinctual sense of rightness, as opposed to laws set down to regulate correctness.

Among people, William can be very awkward; through the angel, he sees people in their worst light, and finds it hard to trust people or be friendly with them. The few friends he makes are very dear to him, and he finds it hard to leave them behind when the angel compels him to travel.

Fear: William fears the Evening Star above all; he lives in constant connection to it, and he has discovered that perfect goodness does not mean perfect kindness. The angel is judgement incarnate; it looks down on all mortals for their impurities, and what little of it's mind he glimpses in harsh and mathematical in it's function.
He furthermore is afraid of losing what he can only describe as his self; for he believes that as a poet, and as a vessel to an angel, he has been designated as some form of higher man, and that to descend to the level of common man would be a loss of indescribable fatality.


Suit: The Suit of clubs best matches the angel that resides in William Darke; it too is a being of violence bound by a strict code of morality to which all else is secondary.

Bio: It night be said that only poets and madmen walked the hills in winter, and William Darke would be the first to claim he fitted both categories. He was a writer of no small talent, considered by a moderate audience to be a visionary in his own lifetime. He had thrown off all conventional virtue is a search, he claimed, for a source of guidance. In practice, this meant a life of wine, women and song, of petty immoralities that made him as popular for his debauchery as for his writing. What he least expected was to have this deeper guidance thrust upon him.

It was all going to be explained in that one song; a love song and a exploration of the human sole, and furthermore an opening of his own soul tot he void to welcome in whatever being ruled the world. When he awoke after a night of feverish work, he found to his horror that he had indeed opened the doors to his soul, and that something had slipped in. In trying to prove that there were no spirits above, he had left himself open to an act of divine irony.


Possessed by the Evening Star, he could no longer bear the pleasures he had once enjoyed, and furthermore could write not a single stanza of verse. His muse had gone, and in it's p-lace he found only an undeniable urge to travel the land. Where he met evil, his sword was flame and he could do nothing but slay and slay, and then upon him again came the urge to roam.

He wandered for a time, killing all that was evil, and even learning a little about fighting as the angel wielded his body like a weapon. For a time he gloried in the power, but soon he became sick, both of the violence and of the lack of control, and further he was afraid of the effect that the angel's power might have on his body. He tried to have it exorcised once, but awoke the find the mystic dead, with a single cauterised wound though the heart.

Since then, he has continued his wandering, more afraid than ever of the angel. He hopes, more than anything else, for a way to escape the angel.



William wept. As the tears rolled down his face, his blade licked out and severed a man's throat before revering to slice across the eyes. The poor man made no sound as he fell, and William hoped he had died instantly. But it was too late to check; he spread his wings and leapt to the air.

The thieves had closed in with the night; as the shadows grew long they emerged from the trees, and demanded a purse from his before he died. Among them were men who looked scared and unhappy, and William knew that it was due to the wars that these men had turned to crime. But the angel would not care.

He had warned them, pleaded with them, begged even, but they did not care and thought only that he was afraid for himself. Then the Evening Star rose, and the slaughter began.

Propelled by the wings, he leapt forwards and his blade clove a man in two. A twang and a whistle and a bolt whistled harmlessly past; William swung to face a terrified young man clutching a crossbow. He is no more than a child! he screamed, but the voice only sounded in his head. The angels reply was harsh and direct, without words and felt only as a feeling. He fought with all his might, but all he achieved was an ache in his arm that would be a terrible pain tomorrow. The boy died, just the same.

There was one left, the leader. This man wore fine clothes, and was armed with no mere farm instrument; his was a rapier, and he fenced admirably. The first boat lasted three seconds, and the bandit was left with a cut to the arm and a singed beard. But suddenly William felt a lightening of his load, and realised that the angel was leaving. Remorse turned rapidly to fear as he realised that he stood no chance against this gentleman thief.

As his attackers wings faded, the bandit leader blinked and stepped forwards. The man's guard seemed less sure now, and he had lost that terrible aura. Why, he was just some man who knew how to cast illusions. Well, they wouldn't help him now...

The thief sized him up and was about to attack; William knew he would die without the angel. Searching for it, he tried to communicate; but the angel seemed not lazy but afraid of something. His surprise and confusion increased as the bandit cried out awkwardly and fell to the ground.

Before him, William could see a bizarre figure. A tall man, dressed in black military garb, and carrying a three headed flail. The man strode forward, and as he bowed the angel quailed.

"William Darke?" asked the stranger, "Host to the Evening Star? I am the Jack of Clubs, and I believe you can help us with a matter of great urgency. In return, we may be able to help you with an inconvenience you suffer. I do hope we can come to an agreement..."
 

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Hafrael said:
How long will we have from being given our match and having to submit it?
Cool your jets. We'll get the limits for the rounds(time and word limit if there is a word limit), some other important details and the matchings sometime tomorrow.
 

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elementsoul said:
Hafrael said:
How long will we have from being given our match and having to submit it?
Cool your jets. We'll get the limits for the rounds(time and word limit if there is a word limit), some other important details and the matchings sometime tomorrow.
Hafrael said:
How long will we have from being given our match and having to submit it?
Typically you get between one and two weeks depending on the round, plus you can ask for extensions if you are falling behind/ busy/ whatever.

As for word limits, they have only been set once to my knowledge for round one in RW5, to make it easier on the judges with the number of entries they had to read (and even then, most people found getting their works down to 1000 words or less easy). They will probably be set again for the first round at least with so many contestants. Despite earlier discussions in the thread, judges forming suicide pacts is bad mmmmkay?
 

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Just posting to say that Round 1 may begin a day or two late - I yesterday found out that my girlfriend of 6 months has been cheating on me, and writing/organizing a piece like this has been nigh impossible with my head banging the way it is.

I'm sorry if this has caused any inconvenience or disappointment for anyone, and I'm working on it as hard as I can. Thanks for waiting in advance, and I'll be back soon with a clear head and a Round 1 that'll kick your teeth in.

(DISCLAIMER: May not literally kick your teeth in. Who do you think I am? A dentist?)
 

Viking Incognito

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Lord Krunk said:
Just posting to say that Round 1 may begin a day or two late - I yesterday found out that my girlfriend of 6 months has been cheating on me, and writing/organizing a piece like this has been nigh impossible with my head banging the way it is.

I'm sorry if this has caused any inconvenience or disappointment for anyone, and I'm working on it as hard as I can. Thanks for waiting in advance, and I'll be back soon with a clear head and a Round 1 that'll kick your teeth in (DISCLAIMER: May not literally kick your teeth in. Who do you think I am? A dentist?).
My heart goes out to you. Thank you so much for staying dedicated to this when most guys would just give up to focus on the relationship stuff.
 

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Lord Krunk said:
Just posting to say that Round 1 may begin a day or two late - I yesterday found out that my girlfriend of 6 months has been cheating on me, and writing/organizing a piece like this has been nigh impossible with my head banging the way it is.

I'm sorry if this has caused any inconvenience or disappointment for anyone, and I'm working on it as hard as I can. Thanks for waiting in advance, and I'll be back soon with a clear head and a Round 1 that'll kick your teeth in.

(DISCLAIMER: May not literally kick your teeth in. Who do you think I am? A dentist?)
Ouch, I feel sorry for you man.

It's better to sort your life out first then starting this with such a burden, we can wait.
 

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Lord Krunk said:
Just posting to say that Round 1 may begin a day or two late - I yesterday found out that my girlfriend of 6 months has been cheating on me, and writing/organizing a piece like this has been nigh impossible with my head banging the way it is.

I'm sorry if this has caused any inconvenience or disappointment for anyone, and I'm working on it as hard as I can. Thanks for waiting in advance, and I'll be back soon with a clear head and a Round 1 that'll kick your teeth in.

(DISCLAIMER: May not literally kick your teeth in. Who do you think I am? A dentist?)
Wow, that can't have been easy. Don't worry about us, we'll be fine to wait a day or two more, I've got some studying I'm meant to be working on anyway >.>
 

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Lord Krunk said:
Just posting to say that Round 1 may begin a day or two late - I yesterday found out that my girlfriend of 6 months has been cheating on me, and writing/organizing a piece like this has been nigh impossible with my head banging the way it is.

I'm sorry if this has caused any inconvenience or disappointment for anyone, and I'm working on it as hard as I can. Thanks for waiting in advance, and I'll be back soon with a clear head and a Round 1 that'll kick your teeth in.

(DISCLAIMER: May not literally kick your teeth in. Who do you think I am? A dentist?)
Take as long as you need. I've waited this long, what's a few more days? Or even a week? Waiting is nothing when your personal life is at stake.

Just try and stay positive. If you're having trouble with that, then remember that there's a host of sympathetic people here in the RP that you can talk to if need be. Talking helps. Often, talking to strangers can help the most - objective viewpoint and all that shit.
 

000Ronald

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Lord Krunk said:
Just posting to say that Round 1 may begin a day or two late - I yesterday found out that my girlfriend of 6 months has been cheating on me, and writing/organizing a piece like this has been nigh impossible with my head banging the way it is.

I'm sorry if this has caused any inconvenience or disappointment for anyone, and I'm working on it as hard as I can. Thanks for waiting in advance, and I'll be back soon with a clear head and a Round 1 that'll kick your teeth in.
Your personal life and decisions are infinitely more important than my entertainment. To reiterate what the others have said, take your time.
 

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Lord Krunk said:
Just posting to say that Round 1 may begin a day or two late - I yesterday found out that my girlfriend of 6 months has been cheating on me, and writing/organizing a piece like this has been nigh impossible with my head banging the way it is.

I'm sorry if this has caused any inconvenience or disappointment for anyone, and I'm working on it as hard as I can. Thanks for waiting in advance, and I'll be back soon with a clear head and a Round 1 that'll kick your teeth in.

(DISCLAIMER: May not literally kick your teeth in. Who do you think I am? A dentist?)
Don't worry, as impatient as I am, I can wait for however long you need.

You should always put yourself first. Before our entertainment.

Also. That really sucks dude.