I love how the Spy insults his enemies after he backstabs them. Sometimes they seem like they've gone a little too far.
"Dear, who will replace the Soldier? Oh right, ANYONE! HAW HAW HAW!"
Gordon actually has his own story. Sort of an everyman, but it's still a story.
http://planethalflife.gamespy.com/View.php?view=HLGameInfo.Detail&id=5&game=4
It has quite a bit of potential. I'd spare the first chapter from back stories, and maybe improve upon the structure of the plot.
It's interesting, though. A few more revisions and you'd have a good book.
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