I don't expect the writer to keep too close to the original story. Especially one like this which requires a great deal of time and exposition to allow for the complicated cat-and-mouse set up. But what they've changed the film to seems crap as well. I've managed to find a copy of the script (I won't link it for the sake of legality, though you should be able to find it easily via google).
Even early on, the script is bad. I've only read the first couple of pages, and it is already cliché laiden and filled with inconsistensies. Yagami (Or Murray as he is known from now on) sleeps through his alarm. He's late for school. The subway driver shuts the doors in his face and drives away cackling, meaning he is going to be even more late. Then a mugger shows up, steals a woman's hand bag, and pushes her onto the tracks infront of an incoming train. Hell, if the trains were that frequent, I don't see why Murray was so determined to get on that other one. Since when the hell do trains run only 30 secnds apart from one another?
Alright, it is an early first draft, and possibly just one of many proposed for the film. So For that reason I'll reserve judgement. So far though, it is looking bad.
Even early on, the script is bad. I've only read the first couple of pages, and it is already cliché laiden and filled with inconsistensies. Yagami (Or Murray as he is known from now on) sleeps through his alarm. He's late for school. The subway driver shuts the doors in his face and drives away cackling, meaning he is going to be even more late. Then a mugger shows up, steals a woman's hand bag, and pushes her onto the tracks infront of an incoming train. Hell, if the trains were that frequent, I don't see why Murray was so determined to get on that other one. Since when the hell do trains run only 30 secnds apart from one another?
Alright, it is an early first draft, and possibly just one of many proposed for the film. So For that reason I'll reserve judgement. So far though, it is looking bad.