I feel so simple and retarded i laughed over the slapstick, but that was pretty entertaining, i especially liked where...what's his face, the one with the glasses and looks like a yale collage professor explained the dice and what they're made of after claiming their not dangerous.
But one thing, cut back on the dog jokes, man's tail of all things gets impaled? Dungeons and Dogs? A story about jumping out a 3 story window over a bone? That material isn't the best you could work with and could get hard to swallow if you try to tread a line btween "they're dogs!" and they apparently have a fully functioning society.