The Ratings War VI: Aces High - Round 1 (Closed - Judging)

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Nukey has said that he can't meet the deadline. Unfortunately the show must go on - 000Ronold advances by forfeit.

RB has been forced to rewrite her piece after a crucial (but forgivable) mistake. She has the next day to get her piece finished, provided that Tips is okay with the extension. RB, if you can't finish it in time I'd recommend you post your original entry - something is always better than nothing.

Other than that, the round is now closed. Judges, you know what to do.
 

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Lord Krunk said:
Nukey has said that he can't meet the deadline. Unfortunately the show must go on - 000Ronold advances by forfeit.

RB has been forced to rewrite his piece after a crucial (but forgivable) mistake. He has the next day to get his piece finished, provided that Tips is okay with the extension. RB, if you can't finish it in time I'd recommend you post your original entry - something is always better than nothing.

Other than that, the round is now closed. Judges, you know what to do.
RBMidknight is a woman just so you know.
 

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Furthermore, the Escapist doesn't seem to agree with my word processor as to what certain punctuation means. I've gone through the piece replacing all the offending bits and pieces, but I apologize for any confusions caused by strange grammars...
As far as I know, the punctuation only comes across as being unrecognised in the preview box, and in the actual post it is fine. There are a few exceptions such as the pound sterling symbol (£), but pretty much the rest of them are recognised in the made post.
 

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Zombie_Fish said:
ThreeWords said:
Furthermore, the Escapist doesn't seem to agree with my word processor as to what certain punctuation means. I've gone through the piece replacing all the offending bits and pieces, but I apologize for any confusions caused by strange grammars...
As far as I know, the punctuation only comes across as being unrecognised in the preview box, and in the actual post it is fine. There are a few exceptions such as the pound sterling symbol (£), but pretty much the rest of them are recognised in the made post.
I find if you write something in Microsoft Word (at-least the 2007 version I use) then some of the punctuation including " and ' come out as ? symbols when you copy and paste them onto the Escapist, and you have to replace them manually one by one with Escapist style "/' as they stay like that even in the final post.
 

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JoJoDeathunter said:
Zombie_Fish said:
ThreeWords said:
Furthermore, the Escapist doesn't seem to agree with my word processor as to what certain punctuation means. I've gone through the piece replacing all the offending bits and pieces, but I apologize for any confusions caused by strange grammars...
As far as I know, the punctuation only comes across as being unrecognised in the preview box, and in the actual post it is fine. There are a few exceptions such as the pound sterling symbol (£), but pretty much the rest of them are recognised in the made post.
I find if you write something in Microsoft Word (at-least the 2007 version I use) then some of the punctuation including " and ' come out as ? symbols when you copy and paste them onto the Escapist, and you have to replace them manually one by one with Escapist style "/' as they stay like that even in the final post.
I also use Microsoft 2007. In making my entry [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/540.316635-The-Ratings-War-VI-Aces-High-Round-1-1-Entries-Due-Nov-30-1-2-Entries-Due-Dec-3?page=6#13366381], I copied the whole lot from a Word 2007 document over, changed none of the apostrophes or speech marks once it was pasted into the text box here and from at least my view of the post there are no bits where the symbols weren't read properly. For me at least it only happens in the preview post function.
 

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Zombie_Fish said:
JoJoDeathunter said:
Zombie_Fish said:
ThreeWords said:
Furthermore, the Escapist doesn't seem to agree with my word processor as to what certain punctuation means. I've gone through the piece replacing all the offending bits and pieces, but I apologize for any confusions caused by strange grammars...
As far as I know, the punctuation only comes across as being unrecognised in the preview box, and in the actual post it is fine. There are a few exceptions such as the pound sterling symbol (£), but pretty much the rest of them are recognised in the made post.
I find if you write something in Microsoft Word (at-least the 2007 version I use) then some of the punctuation including " and ' come out as ? symbols when you copy and paste them onto the Escapist, and you have to replace them manually one by one with Escapist style "/' as they stay like that even in the final post.
I also use Microsoft 2007. In making my entry [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/540.316635-The-Ratings-War-VI-Aces-High-Round-1-1-Entries-Due-Nov-30-1-2-Entries-Due-Dec-3?page=6#13366381], I copied the whole lot from a Word 2007 document over, changed none of the apostrophes or speech marks once it was pasted into the text box here and from at least my view of the post there are no bits where the symbols weren't read properly. For me at least it only happens in the preview post function.
Strange, I know it's not just me as it's happened to at-least two other people I know on this site, I have no idea what causes it. Oh well, it's not like it's that time-consuming to edit out, especially if it's only 1000 words this time.
 

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JoJoDeathunter said:
Strange, I know it's not just me as it's happened to at-least two other people I know on this site, I have no idea what causes it. Oh well, it's not like it's that time-consuming to edit out, especially if it's only 1000 words this time.
I personally use word 2010 and it shows up messed up in the preview but, it shows up as what I intended it to when I post it. It used to be messed up when I'd copy and past it but about four months ago it stopped.
 

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JoJoDeathunter said:
Zombie_Fish said:
JoJoDeathunter said:
Zombie_Fish said:
ThreeWords said:
Furthermore, the Escapist doesn't seem to agree with my word processor as to what certain punctuation means. I've gone through the piece replacing all the offending bits and pieces, but I apologize for any confusions caused by strange grammars...
As far as I know, the punctuation only comes across as being unrecognised in the preview box, and in the actual post it is fine. There are a few exceptions such as the pound sterling symbol (£), but pretty much the rest of them are recognised in the made post.
I find if you write something in Microsoft Word (at-least the 2007 version I use) then some of the punctuation including " and ' come out as ? symbols when you copy and paste them onto the Escapist, and you have to replace them manually one by one with Escapist style "/' as they stay like that even in the final post.
I also use Microsoft 2007. In making my entry [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/540.316635-The-Ratings-War-VI-Aces-High-Round-1-1-Entries-Due-Nov-30-1-2-Entries-Due-Dec-3?page=6#13366381], I copied the whole lot from a Word 2007 document over, changed none of the apostrophes or speech marks once it was pasted into the text box here and from at least my view of the post there are no bits where the symbols weren't read properly. For me at least it only happens in the preview post function.
Strange, I know it's not just me as it's happened to at-least two other people I know on this site, I have no idea what causes it. Oh well, it's not like it's that time-consuming to edit out, especially if it's only 1000 words this time.
That can be fixed by turning off Smart Quotes in MS Word 2007
 

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elementsoul said:
I personally use word 2010 and it shows up messed up in the preview but, it shows up as what I intended it to when I post it. It used to be messed up when I'd copy and past it but about four months ago it stopped.
Sadly mine doesn't work in the real post either as well as the preview, as I've learned from a number of times when I've had to edit a copied post several times on here as I keep noticing missed "?" marks which have surreptiously changed.

Lost In The Void said:
That can be fixed by turning off Smart Quotes in MS Word 2007
Really?!

*checks using Google how to do that*

Wow, it actually works, that'll save me time in future. Thanks =D
 

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Lord Krunk said:
Nukey has said that he can't meet the deadline. Unfortunately the show must go on - 000Ronold advances by forfeit.

RB has been forced to rewrite his piece after a crucial (but forgivable) mistake. He has the next day to get his piece finished, provided that Tips is okay with the extension. RB, if you can't finish it in time I'd recommend you post your original entry - something is always better than nothing.

Other than that, the round is now closed. Judges, you know what to do.
RBMidknight is a woman just so you know.
Oh. Whoops.

Sorry about that RB! I'll edit my last post now.
 

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Double-checking the word count... Just made it, *whew*.

"I believe you." She spoke quietly, uncertain that she was being heard.

A few seconds passed before a whispered response came.
"About the knight?"

Lauren frowned, shaking her head."About the luck." She clarified. She adjusted a makeshift bandage wrapped around the man's chest. Each breath he took darkened the material. "It's Michael, right? Your name?" Lauren brushed her hand against the man's forehead. He was cold. "Michael!" Lauren said the name sharply. The man's eyes opened but his gaze remained unfocused. "Did you know that things glow when your luck changes?"

No words, only the slightest head shake.

"They do." He was too pale, had lost too much blood. He was dying and all she could do was watch. This wasn't part of her plan. Her plan had been simple. Lauren used her dagger to cut another strip of shirt. 'I'd planned.'

"The Decimator transported me outside..." she began.

[hr]Thirty Minutes Ago[hr]

'I don't know where I am. Or who I'm against.' Lauren noted as she ducked under the front gate. It looked like a factory. Conveyer belts carried metal in various stages. Vats of bright liquid metal traveled on a fixed route. There was smoke drifting towards a high ceiling. Narrow walkways met metal stairs all along the interior of the building to provide access to every machine. A large forge sat in the very center. A foundry.

Using the machines as cover Lauren stepped into the building. With each collision the machines made, the ground shook. Workers clothed in heavy gloves and aprons labored at the machines or hauled buckets of ore around. They were uniformly dressed with protective helmets. But they were not her opponent.

'There!' A lone man stepped out onto the lower walkway. Softly lit by the perpetual orange glow the man's outfit, from the coat to the quarterstaff, gave him away. Everything indicated he was out of place. Out of his own time. Just like Lauren. The quarterstaff was a problem. But if she could sneak around to his side, she could disarm and disable her opponent quickly. 'It'll be simple.' It was a plan.

"I've never had an disabling strike fail so completely.
But I was too busy making up for the miss to look for a cause."

[hr]Twenty Minutes Ago[hr]

They were surprisingly well matched. Him with his staff and she with her dagger and baton. The baton was able to block while the blade could follow up with a quick jab or slash. Lauren was favoring her left side and what felt like a bruised rib. Faustus had several slashes on his arms and puncture wounds on his leg. Unfortunately for them both, the workers were larger, had heavier weapons, and were very very angry.

The Champion's private duel had migrated from the walkway to the main floor where a misstep and thrown elbow had disengaged the lock of a single hook. The hook released a vat of molten metal. Which crashed to the floor, spewing the metal across a conveyer belt, the walkway, and several workers. The hot metal ran in rivets across the floor and was carried by the smoking conveyer belt into the next area. Where it caused more mayhem and finally triggered an alarm. It was a series of unfortunate events so Lauren didn't understand why her opponent yelled something about 'bad luck' just before the workers attacked.

"I'm open to suggestions." Lauren called out. The Champions were trapped between the angry citizens and the machinery they'd damaged. Liquid metal was still dripping from the vat and spreading across the floor.

"Do you see that large cauldron?" Faustus replied as he hit one worker in the head with his staff, dropping the dazed man instantly. Another worker stepped forward holding a long metal pole in gloved hands. He swung before Faustus could elaborate.

"The vat. Yes." Lauren's opponent was large but slow. She sidestepped to avoid a fist then pushed off against the halted conveyer.

"We could-"

"Terrible idea!"

"We could-"

"Better. On three. One, two, three!" Lauren vaulted over the conveyer belt. A half-second behind her was Faustus. They ran.

"After the domino disaster I started to wonder."

[hr]Ten Minutes Ago[hr]

"Sometimes the luck is good, sometimes it is bad. I had better luck defending myself against you." Faustus was explaining.

They were hiding on a lower walkway. Waiting for the next path to be clear. "You can't control it?" Lauren asked. She didn't understand this 'luck'. Nor did she like it. Everyone had what they called 'good' and 'bad' luck. What made this man's so different?

"They're here!" The yell came from above as a man jumped down to their level. The walkway shook at the impact.

Faustus raised his weapon. The worker held up his own, a pipe with two jagged ends as though it'd been ripped away from something. The two men faced each other. Lauren drew her dagger, ready to fend off any other workers who have heard the yell.

The worker struck first, thrusting the jagged edge of the pipe toward Faustus' chest. Faustus raised his weapon to block.

And time fragmented.

Lauren saw Faustus block the attack. She saw him over-balance but still manage to deflect the blow. In another instance he simply ducked. But then everything shifted, like a watercolor smeared by clumsy hands. A new future slid into place. Faustus misjudged the angle of block. The metal tip collided with the railing of the walkway. Leaving Faustus completely unguarded.

"Every object has a number of influences on its surroundings.
But you have this...extra factor. This force.
That changes -everything- in an instant."

[hr]Present[hr]

In the bottom of a foundry a stranger died. There were no bright lights. No choir or time freeze. He just...died.

Standing in front of the bodies was a new man. In a suit.

"Congratulations." The man said. A tiny black design was embroidered on the man's lapel. A Club. A hand was extended toward Lauren. "You've won. Follow me."
 

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Looking back on the first days of submitting, I'm not sure how to take the fact I was the only one making a drawing of my character xD
 

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Shift walked through the portal while silently wondering if it would make his perceptions change. When he came out on the other side and found himself in some kind of brothel, with people going about in various states of undress, he couldn?t help but think that he was definitely in a shift phase.

Okay, as far as I can tell I am still conscious, so this must be a less invasive one, just sensory. It could definitely be worse. Since I am still aware, at least I won?t have to worry about the battlefield while I figure out how to deal with that other guy.

Shift began to search around the brothel for his opponent, and he was completely ignored by the people there. He figured as long as he kept in mind that this was all illusion than he would fall deeper into it, plus, the setting would no-doubt convince his opponent to let his guard down.

While he was deep in thought Shift heard screaming coming from the end of the hallway to his left. He walked hurriedly to the scene and found a man who dressed like a medieval adventurer running a woman through with a sword. There were people fleeing from the scene, one of which ran straight into Shift, knocking him to the ground. He scrambled back onto his feet and went with the flow of whores and clients away from the man who had to be his opponent. And he took this window of time to think.

Why did that person run into me? He should have avoided me completely unless...is this place real? Maybe that portal was actually a passageway, but if that is true then?

His train of thought became a mess as he tried to decide what to do. Shift could feel the threat of another change approaching, and as he fought to remain in his own mind he became more and more lost within it. There was no way he could have known how long the hallway actually was, but by the time he became aware of his surroundings again he saw the brothel?s occupants were nowhere to be found and the hallway extended as far as he could see.

No no no no, snap out of it, don?t lose yourself, not now?.

Shift felt the hallway fading away from him, he felt his consciousness slipping, he was becoming someone or something else. He had no idea what was happing with his opponent or the other people in the brothel, but Shift felt like he was dying. He felt like he was being swallowed by some kind of great nothingness. He was falling apart like sand scattered by wind. Then he felt salvation through a splash on his face. He opened his eyes and saw that he was lying on the floor, facing the ceiling. As his hearing returned, so did the screams and panic, and with his smell, came the odor of blood, then finally he felt it running down his face. Awareness crashed down on him and he sat bolt upright. He saw his adversary attempting to dislodge his sword from the guts of the unlucky man that had stepped between the two, which was where the blood came from. Shift jumped to his feet and with all his strength, shoved the still upright body of the man towards the killer. This threw the oddly dressed murderer off balance, but didn?t knock him off of his feet. He swung his arm out, catching Shift in the neck with a hard fist. Shift brought a hand to his throat as he coughed violently. He distracted the swordsman with an image of bright light and sprinted towards the brothel entrance.
?You won?t scurry away so simply!? yelled the killer from behind, his words complimented by a sickening squelch that must have been the slicing of guts caused by the removal of his sword.

Shift rounded a corner as fast as he could, knocking people out of the way and trying to breathe through his bruised throat. In his panic, he looked over his shoulder without stopping, leading him directly into a locked door. His body bounced off of the door like two billiard balls ricocheting off of each other, and pain shot up the left side of his body where his lowest rib had collided with the door handle, no doubt cracking it. Shift dragged himself painfully to his feet by grabbing the handle of the door and pulling upwards, since he seemed to have lost strength in his legs. He heard his opponent approaching fast, the madman?s loud swearing just barely audible over the new round of screaming as he cut his way through the crowd yet again. Shift made himself invisible with his powers and picked up a very ornate flower pot that was resting on the ground next to the door. He stood to the right side of the hallway waiting for his attacker to round the corner. When he did, Shift allowed him to rush to the locked door and try to force it open, assuming Shift had gone inside. As the man pulled mightily at the handle, Shift raised the pot over his head, and in one movement, brought it down heavily onto the swordsman?s skull. The killer lurched forward on impact, slamming his face into the door. There was blood streaming from the back of his head, and even more from his nose. He crumpled to the ground, clutching his face in both hands, screaming incoherently while thrashing around like a fish out of water. Shift was about to deliver the final blow, but paused as the world around him began to shift. Then as fast as he could, he struck the struggling, bleeding swordsman with the pot. His skull gave way with a gut-wrenching crack, and he stopped moving. Shift collapsed with pain and exhaustion, sitting against the wall with his eyes closed. Then, he was on the beach, relaxing in the sun.

Okay, that should be exactly 1000 words.
 

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I've been driving for hours lately, and I've had very little time to write out my post. In the event that I don't make the deadline, would it be possible to have two more days so I can focus on my story?
 

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Exactly 1000 words, had to do a beast of an edit down from around 1260, though overall I think it was actually beneficial since everything remotely irrelevant had to chopped right out. Without further ado I present:

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Time On The Inside​
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Hui Li vs. Kim Avery (a.k.a The Solver)​
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Hui breathed heavily and tried to ignore the gash across her cheek as she pinned down the pale young women with auburn hair who she had been fighting for the last ten minutes. The old prison office that they had ended up in was now far from tidy; its faded wooden desk was tipped on its side and yellowing papers were strewed across the floor, though the dented filing cabinets stacked on the other side for now remained in their original position. When Hui had first seen Kim she had been surprised by her opponent's youth; she barely looked out of her teens and the older woman had briefly pitied her, however the thought of the smiling face of her own much younger daughter had quickly hardened her resolve again.

Kim spat at Hui but she ignored the goad as she tried to think of a way out of the stalemate they were in. If she let go of either of the girl's arms then she would be able to reach her nightstick again and that wasn't good, but she couldn't do anything either whilst both her hands were pinning her opponent down. As she considered this conundrum and Kim struggled fruitlessly, neither heard the approaching footsteps from behind.

"Well well, what 'ave we 'ere?"

Having momentarily forgotten their fight, Hui and Kim looked up from their tangle on the ground to see two men standing before them. One was large and the other was small, however they were both dressed in card-shaped orange overalls and had shaved heads. The larger of the two rubbed his hands together and grinned at the pair.

"A bit of pussy eh, it's been a long time. I'll take the barely legal; you can 'ave the chinky."

He reached down for Kim but without hesitation she punched him straight in the crotch, he fell forwards with a look of surprised agony on his face. Seeing that his partner in crime looked stunned at this resistance, Hui used the opportunity to shove the other inmate into the open door, the man yelped and stumbled out into the corridor. She turned back to the fallen inmate who despite his injury seemed to be laughing.

"What is it?" Hui snarled and she gripped him menacingly by his shirt but his expression didn't change.

"Nines will bring the others 'ere now," he said in a choked voice, before adding with a pained grin "You two really are fucked."

The two women looked at each other in horror, Hui leapt for the door and slammed it shut, holding herself against it to keep it firmly closed.

"Come and help, I won't be heavy enough to hold them all back!" she cried to Kim.

"Both of us together still won't be enough though." the girl replied in a panicked voice "Wait, I've got a better idea!" She took a bag of coins out of her coat and threw several onto the ground. To Hui's astonishment each turned into a different object, one of which was a sturdy plank of wood.

"Yes!" Kim exclaimed in a relieved tone and wedged the plank under the door handle to hold it in place. Hui put her weight on it and not a moment too soon for just as she did a furious banging din erupted on the other side. Their relief was short-lived however as the wood began to bend beneath the weight of the inmates pushing against the battered door.

"What do we do now?" Kim cried desperately.

Hui frantically looked around at her surroundings and spotted a ventilation shaft grill embedded in the ceiling.

"Hold this." she instructed the girl, then rushed over to the heavy wooden desk and pushed it so it was beneath the shaft. She groaned when she saw the grill was locked and after a moment's thought she took hold of the injured inmate again.

"Okay spill the beans, where's the key?"

"How would I know?" the criminal protested "It's probably in one of those drawers there!"

"Huh?" Hui looked over her shoulder and knew instantly that it would be impossible to check every filing cabinet before the wave of criminals broke through the door. She realised with a sinking feeling that she only had one real choice.

I'll have to use my power... but after what happened with Chojun all those years ago... will it work?

"What are you doing?" Kim shrieked but Hui shot her a glance and she fell silent. The woman then closed her eyes and let herself feel the contours of the room's energy, a familiar feeling surging through her. She felt a little snag behind her and suddenly knew where the key was.

"You sneaky bastard!" she exclaimed as she snatched the key out of the inmate's front shirt pocket, then leapt up onto the desk and was joined by Kim as they both scrambled up into the vent beside each other, kicking the desk out of the way so no-one could follow them. Once the pair was safely up they sat stunned for a few seconds before remembering where they were. Kim aimed a kick at Hui but she dodged and managed to take hold of the leg instead. Kim tried to pull away but Hui's renewed strength overwhelmed her and she couldn't prevent herself falling backwards out of the vent, suspended only by the limb which Hui still held onto. The girl looked down in fright at the sea of inmates below her who stared up at her with a gaze reminiscent of hungry wolves.

"Let me up!" Kim pleaded.

"Surrender and I will." Hui said coldly. Deep down she pitied the girl but she knew if she was to see her daughter again she couldn't afford to be soft-hearted.

"Okay, I surrender, just fucking let me up already!"

For the first time since she had arrived in Chicane, Hui let herself smile as she lifted the sulky but relieved girl back up to the safety of the vent.

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Might as well add that I'm game for exchanging reviews with anyone who wants one :)
 

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Doc Gnosis said:
I've been driving for hours lately, and I've had very little time to write out my post. In the event that I don't make the deadline, would it be possible to have two more days so I can focus on my story?
So long as JoJo is okay with it. Please try and make the deadline regardless though!
 

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Lord Krunk said:
So long as JoJo is okay with it. Please try and make the deadline regardless though!
@JoJoDeathunter: On that note, would you mind dearly?
 

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Sorry, the story part is all done. But, it currently clocks in at 1230 words so it might take a while to whittle this down to a healthier leangth. A one-day extension would be thoroughly appreciated but if its not possible, I'll try to get it wrapped up before 10:30.
 

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I'd like to request an eight hour extention. I can have it done tonight so long as I don't need to have it done by midnight.
 

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The portal growled hungrily, swirling violently. Reject was? terrified. The politician at his back grimaced at his lack of comprehension. The tap of his foot accelerated to a rapping of his finger.

While Reject stared into the void, lost, his opponent glanced around the room at other pairs speeding into their battles, ready to begin. The rapping of his cane elevated into a series of sighs and coughs.

What was on the other side?? Reject wondered. What kind of dangers would it present? this portal...no certainty to it? He unconsciously edged back?

Into the politician?s foot. In response, it propelled him forward into the portal. ?Stop wasting my time, trash.?

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He stumbled through the vortex and could not stop until he reached the safety of a solid gold security railing? Reject peered over it? several hundred stories at least?

Unfortunately, his light weight meant weakness against direct assault. He would have to side-step such attacks in the future. The fact he could consider such strategy obviously meant the portal hadn?t eviscerated him as previously feared. A victory in itself.

He noted a sign in front of the railing. ?Floor 137.? Below it, ?Arcane? and an arrow to the right. ?Transformative?? and an arrow right. ?Restricted: Avoid? and a green arrow to the right. A large green door at the end of the hall seemed to be the ?restricted section.? Upon closer examination of the shelves, he suddenly realized their contents.
?Books?.? He couldn?t breathe.

Shelves, shelves upon shelves of books, hundreds on this floor. For hundreds of floors. Wondrous shelf patterns below, art in itself, ovals, branching out into larger circles of shelves. So many books?.

How long had it been since he had?seen a book at all? Seven years at least. He enjoyed visits to the library regularly before? no?. A merchant visiting the slums. He remembered the scent, the texture, the joy he hadn?t experienced in years? He spent all he had on it? And one night, a group of children stole it to prove themselves to a local mobster. His throat stung as tears ran down his cheeks?

His mind was a blur? He couldn?t think?The books were calling to him?. It had been so long? he needed one? He glided forward to the nearest bookshelf. The population of books vibrant, colorful, yet ancient?.intoxicating. He allowed his finger to run along the length of the spine of a cerulean tome and shivered. He cooed as his hand reached the top of the cover to edge the book out of its cruel confining. His heart swooned?

From around the shelf, he heard the clicking of a cane against the floor. ?Garbage, I?m tired of your kind,? echoed around the library. Reject peered around the corner. The politician from before brandished his cane like a weapon, riling himself up for battle with this speech. ?Tired of shit like you, complaining, begging, wasting my time, wasting my air. I am Barry Underwood! I am going to be a god! And you can?t th-?

?Um?? Reject held a finger out. ?J-Just a moment,? disappearing back behind the shelf. ?Just a moment! Need?time?? It couldn?t?fate couldn?t be this cruel? just moments from-

?You? you what?? Reject retreated back behind the bookshelf. He reached again for that deep blue nirvana. ?What did I just say, you goddamned urchin rat!? Just a word, a letter?. He yanked the book out of the shelf, dispensing with romance. ?STOP WASTING MY TIME!? The cover flew open in desperation. Underwood came around the corner, ripping the blade from his cane and charged sword pointed forward to tear through the ?urchin.?

Reflex. Turn. Side-step. A flash. Suddenly, Reject?s mind became clear. In his hands, an open book, a sword pressed through the spine of his treasured tome. In front of him, a slimy fool trying to regain his weapon. And?rage?

?You PHILISTINE!? Surprised, Underwood?s grip loosened. Bad move. Reject?s hands closed the book shut on the blade and swung the book. The sword within the novel accelerated with the swing and its handle slammed against the back of the politician?s skull. Underwood?s head rebounded off the ground, body crumpled in a heap.

Reject?s arm reached down and pulled the man up by his hair. He unsheathed his dagger, letting it rest on Underwood?s throat as the politician came to his senses. Reject felt?pain?hatred ?. Death was too merciful. He needed-

Suddenly, he saw his answer. A large green door? He turned back to Underwood and hissed, ?Run??

?Wuh?What??

Reject wrenched him to his feet and kicked him down the passage. ?RUN!? Barry Underwood ran. He ran straight, hearing the clicking of heels behind him, knowing he was being pursued. No escape to the left or right, the shelves were closing in. At the end of the hall, a room! He slipped inside and slammed the door behind him, panting and shaking from his brush with death. The fool spared him, he would reg-

?Hello Mr. Underwood?? He turned?and saw no one. ?Welcome to the Restricted Section?? Sudden pain and hysteria ripped through Underwood?s psyche as books flew off the shelves, creatures emerged from various books each more terrifying than the last. Oozing shrieking horrors surrounded him. A crash behind him. The blade from the cane lay broken in Reject?s hands, snapped in half, a makeshift lever to tip a shelf over in front of the door.

?NO! NO! PLEASE!? Underwood blubbered, hammering against the door, his décor and class disappearing behind a stream of tears and snot, drifting into madness.

Reject smiled, putting a finger to his mouth. ?No talking in the library??

With that, Reject walked back to his shelf, passing multiple openings and paths of escape, marveling at the effect fear and intimidation has on a weak mind. He would have to return soon but he had a moment, he thought as he picked up his treasure off the floor and pulled up a chair. He licked his thumb and opened the cover?

998 words. Some notes...

1) I use a lot of sentence fragments. Going for a stream of consciousness thing. Not saying its higher quality, just saying my grammar isn't terrible for that reason; it's terrible because of many other reasons :p

2) I appreciate reviews. And if you want a review back, cool! I will oblige. :)