The Ratings War VI: Aces High - Round 1 (Closed - Judging)

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000Ronald said:
Before anyone starts bitching about this, my father has amber-colored eyes, and this character is largely based on him.
Your Dad is a six-foot long-lived intelligent and noble warrior skilled in combat, blacksmithing, diplomacy and magic, having earned a unique title from nine different races? Cool, mine works in insurance :p
Mine works at Lowes.

Entry should be up tonight as I had to cram 3 projects to finish last night. They were worth 50% in one class, 20% in another, and 18% in another because my teachers are indecisive dicks.
 

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elementsoul said:
JoJoDeathunter said:
000Ronald said:
Before anyone starts bitching about this, my father has amber-colored eyes, and this character is largely based on him.
Your Dad is a six-foot long-lived intelligent and noble warrior skilled in combat, blacksmithing, diplomacy and magic, having earned a unique title from nine different races? Cool, mine works in insurance :p
Mine works at Lowes.

Entry should be up tonight as I had to cram 3 projects to finish last night. They were worth 50% in one class, 20% in another, and 18% in another because my teachers are indecisive dicks.
Amen brother.
 

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JoJoDeathunter said:
000Ronald said:
Before anyone starts bitching about this, my father has amber-colored eyes, and this character is largely based on him.
Your Dad is a six-foot long-lived intelligent and noble warrior skilled in combat, blacksmithing, diplomacy and magic, having earned a unique title from nine different races? Cool, mine works in insurance :p
Yes. What of it?
 

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000Ronald said:
JoJoDeathunter said:
000Ronald said:
Before anyone starts bitching about this, my father has amber-colored eyes, and this character is largely based on him.
Your Dad is a six-foot long-lived intelligent and noble warrior skilled in combat, blacksmithing, diplomacy and magic, having earned a unique title from nine different races? Cool, mine works in insurance :p
Yes. What of it?
You must have some mighty high expectations to live up to. Also he believes that no-one is wholly evil, what about Lord Voldemort?
 

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JoJoDeathunter said:
000Ronald said:
JoJoDeathunter said:
000Ronald said:
Before anyone starts bitching about this, my father has amber-colored eyes, and this character is largely based on him.
Your Dad is a six-foot long-lived intelligent and noble warrior skilled in combat, blacksmithing, diplomacy and magic, having earned a unique title from nine different races? Cool, mine works in insurance :p
Yes. What of it?
You must have some mighty high expectations to live up to. Also he believes that no-one is wholly evil, what about Lord Voldemort?
Wasn't Lord Voldemort a fictional character?
 

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Name: William Darke
Nickname: The Evening Star (This is more a title than a nickname, but hey...)
Age: 21

Appearance: William Darke is, in truth, a scrawny man of medium height, lean features, pale complexion and dark, messy hair. At least, that is how he would appear in a photograph. In person, however, he has a an air of power and nobility, a look in the eyes or a way of standing that suggests a man not only of greatness but but goodness. At his back there are the faint outlines of something apparently made of gossamer and distracted light.
When provoked, this air of nobility takes on a harsh nature, and the power of his gaze is hard to meet. The glimmer becomes full fleshed, and is revealed to be angelic wings.

Clothing: William wears practical clothing, a balance between being resistant to wear and tear, and being replaceable when they do become worn and torn. Dark trousers, a once white shirt and a long, battered coat are his preferred clothing, though when expecting combat he will wear a coat of mail between shirt and coat. His leather boots are knee high, and his wide brimmed hat is of fine, heavy material.

Weapons: William wields a study longsword of unremarkable steel; notched yet robust, simple yet reliable. H. For protection, he has only his clothing, and mailcoat

Powers: William is possessed by the Evening Star, an angel of moderate power and barely benevolent intentions. When it chooses, though this is not always when William wants, the angel will manifest itself, imbuing his body with it's aura and guiding his actions. He becomes stronger, faster and apparently, taller, and boasts feathered wings and a resistance to magic; the angel takes to disrupting or redirecting spells aimed at him. His sword glows with holy fire, and the angel guides his arm to make him more skilful (he is unnaturally skilled, but by no means insurmountable)

Strengths: When the Evening Star manifests, William is incredibly dangerous; a danger to mages and swordsmen alike. His endurance knows no bounds, and he can shrug of injury with reckless abandon. At this point, the best idea would be to flee.

Weaknesses: The Evening Star cannot manifest too long, or it;s power will have serious effects on the body it inhabits. Before it appears and after it is gone, William is just a man with a sword; clever, mean and unafraid to do what it takes to win, but a man none the less.

Personality: Very rarely does anyone exist in absolute terms; William indeed is one who is better suited to the grey areas. He believes less in morality than fairness; that he should tell only as much truth as he is told, that he can take what he wants as long as the fight for it is fair, that he can do as one wills until someone else tries to stop you and inflict his will as far as is fair on an equal.
Time spent in the company of the angel has made him disillusioned toward conventional moralities, and indeed he actively tries to avoid judging people, and often commits minor sins in order to spite the angel. Sometimes he worries that he is doing evil only out of spite, and that this is making him into a bad person, but these worries are rare and often when drunk. William drinks often; is lessens his worries and helps him hide from the angel.
Among people, William can be very awkward; through the angel, he sees people in their worst light, and finds it hard to trust people or be friendly with them. The few friends he makes are very dear to him, and he finds it hard to leave them behind when the angel compels him to travel.

Fear: William fears the Evening Star above all; he lives in constant connection to it, and he has discovered that perfect goodness does not mean perfect kindness. The angel is judgement incarnate; it looks down on all mortals for their impurities, and what little of it's mind he glimpses in harsh and mathematical in it's function.
After his encounter with the vampires, he also has a morbid fear of constriction, and of dark, claustrophobic places.

Suit: The Suit of clubs best matches the angel that resides in William Darke; it too is a being of violence bound by a strict code of morality to which all else is secondary.

Bio: William didn't want to be an angelic vessel, but while it was technically his choice, he didn't really have much of a say. But lets start a little further back.

William didn't want to be a vampire hunter, but while he could have said no, it wasn't really his choice. The blood suckers had been growing in number, and had become more daring as they did so. There weren't many of them left, and all the older men were too old, and all the younger men no more than boys, William had to go out into the night and try to fight the monsters.

A vampire on it's own isn't much; the disease seems to drain the strength of it's host, and even more so when the creature needs to feed. The first few confrontation were won simply by shouting and brandishing a flaming torch. But each time they come back in number, and eventually there were too many. They wore him down and dragged him to the ground, and as they bared his neck he screamed to the heavens for help to slay the beasts.

One should always be careful what one wishes for. When he awoke, he found himself surrounded by the butchered corpses of an entire nests of vampires. He was hailed as hero at the village, but he could not stay to enjoy the fame; the he was filled with a compulsion to move, and when he resisted, the angel simply overrode his volition.

He wandered for a time, slaying all that was evil, and even learning a little about fighting as the angel wielded his body like a weapon. For a time he gloried in the power, but soon he became sick, both of the violence and of the lack of control, and further he was afraid of the effect that the angel's power might have on his body. He tried to have it exorcised once, but awoke the find the mystic dead, with a single cauterised wound though the heart.

Since then, he has continued his wandering, more afraid than ever of the angel. He hopes, more than anything else, for a way to escape the angel.



William wept. As the tears rolled down his face, his blade licked out and severed a man's throat before revering to slice across the eyes. The poor man made no sound as he fell, and William hoped he had died instantly. But it was too late to check; he spread his wings and leapt to the air.

The thieves had closed in with the night; as the shadows grew long they emerged from the trees, and demanded a purse from his before he died. Among them were men who looked scared and unhappy, and William knew that it was due to the wars that these men had turned to crime. But the angel would not care.

He had warned them, pleaded with them, begged even, but they did not care and thought only that he was afraid for himself. Then the Evening Star rose, and the slaughter began.

Propelled by the wings, he leapt forwards and his blade clove a man in two. A twang and a whistle and a bolt whistled harmlessly past; William swung to face a terrified young man clutching a crossbow. He is no more than a child! he screamed, but the voice only sounded in his head. The angels reply was harsh and direct, without words and felt only as a feeling. He fought with all his might, but all he achieved was an ache in his arm that would be a terrible pain tomorrow. The boy died, just the same.

There was one left, the leader. This man wore fine clothes, and was armed with no mere farm instrument; his was a rapier, and he fenced admirably. The first boat lasted three seconds, and the bandit was left with a cut to the arm and a singed beard. But suddenly William felt a lightening of his load, and realised that the angel was leaving. Remorse turned rapidly to fear as he realised that he stood no chance against this gentleman thief.

As his attackers wings faded, the bandit leader blinked and stepped forwards. The man's guard seemed less sure now, and he had lost that terrible aura. Why, he was just some man who knew how to cast illusions. Well, they wouldn't help him now...

The thief sized him up and was about to attack; William knew he would die without the angel. Searching for it, he tried to communicate; but the angel seemed not lazy but afraid of something. His surprise and confusion increased as the bandit cried out awkwardly and fell to the ground.

Before him, William could see a bizarre figure. A tall man, dressed in black military garb, and carrying a three headed flail. The man strode forward, and as he bowed the angel quailed.

"William Darke?" asked the stranger, "Host to the Evening Star? I am the Ace of Clubs, and I believe you can help us with a matter of great urgency. In return, we may be able to help you with an inconvenience you suffer. I do hope we can come to an agreement..."
 

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000Ronald said:
JoJoDeathunter said:
000Ronald said:
JoJoDeathunter said:
000Ronald said:
Before anyone starts bitching about this, my father has amber-colored eyes, and this character is largely based on him.
Your Dad is a six-foot long-lived intelligent and noble warrior skilled in combat, blacksmithing, diplomacy and magic, having earned a unique title from nine different races? Cool, mine works in insurance :p
Yes. What of it?
You must have some mighty high expectations to live up to. Also he believes that no-one is wholly evil, what about Lord Voldemort?
Wasn't Lord Voldemort a fictional character?
I hope not, otherwise I've spent the last decade saying "You Know Who" aloud for nothing.


ThreeWords said:
William Darke
Firstly interesting sheet, especially the angel part. Just one issue though, according to Krunk our characters aren't meant to meet the Aces (and the tens) until later:

Lord Krunk (quoted from the user-group) said:
Everyone looks human, even the Kings, Queens and Jacks.
The appearance of the Decimators (10) and Aces will be revealed later - we won't see them for a while yet.
 

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Name: Dimitry Shanks
Height: 5'10'' ish
Hair: Purple spiked mohawk (actually quite conservative on Praxus)
Species: Pretty much human
Powers: Psychic. Also, knows his way round an upper cut, a knife and/or a firearm if necessary.
Home: Mining world Praxus VII.
Occupation: Former bartender. After his tenure in the Ratings War II, now it's as a vagabond and occasional drunk.
Suite: Diamonds. Influencer and charmer-er
Weakness: Only human, sudden or very unpredictable conditions can leave him disoriented and vulnerable.
Power Description: good old fashioned ability to predict and react to the future, couple with the ability to gain an impression of peoples minds. That doesn't mean straight out read them, just get an idea of who they are, personality, what buttons to push etc.

Working in a busy bar on a busy planet has meant that Dimitry has gained an awful lot of insight into people and how they think, what makes them tick and how they react. Its not a power, its just an advatadge that his power gives him, but it means that he knows a lot about people of all types.

The precognition part of the power is not an exact science. It comes in flashes and visions, if he concentrates very hard and focuses he can usually get a clear picture, but often its just a roadmap of all the possibilities available in the near future.

In combat he is an excellent hand to hand fighter. He hasn't had formal training and doesn't use a martial art per se, he is just very good at knowing what he wants to do, A, understanding his bodies position, B, and then moving from one to the other.

Oh and while he may be one of those slightly 'mind-battle' characters, he is by no means a pacifist.
Intro coming later.
 

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William Darke Snip
Interesting sheet. One question: does the angel have any fears? In your intro, you state that it's afraid of the guy that comes to meet William, but I'm just curious to know if the angel fears anything else...
 

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The cast thus far:

[HEADING=2]Judges[/HEADING]
revolverwolf
sky14kemea
NeoAC

[HEADING=2]Contestants[/HEADING]
staika - Spades
Nukey - Spades (Diamonds if necessary)
elementsoul - Wight - Spades
Tips_of_Fingers - Faustus - Spades (Clubs if necessary)
000Ronald - Soneyo - Spades (Clubs if necessary)

CounterAttack - Diamonds
Viking Incognito - Diamonds (Hearts if necessary)
Armitage Shanks - Dimitry Shanks - Diamonds (Hearts if necessary)
JoJoDeathunter - Hui - Diamonds
Doc Gnosis - The Solver - Diamonds (Spades if necessary)

Segadroid - Clubs
Fragrance of Mtn Dew - Izumi - Clubs
Zombie_Fish - James - Clubs
ThreeWords - William Darke - Clubs

Hafrael - Hearts
Lost In The Void - Underwood - Hearts
Khedive Rex - Baramiah - Hearts
wesdabigman - Reject - Hearts


RBMidknight - Pending
Sam G - Pending
darthobri - Pending

Everything's looking pretty even, and 18 (confirmed) is a good number to work with. That said, I will PM the three unconfirmed to make sure if they are still competing. If I've made any mistakes, let me know, and those of you that have not submitted your intros please get it in soon.

RW6 will not close just yet, as work and other preoccupations will be consuming the majority of my free time for the next day or two. I won't have any time to work on getting this train running, so consider this a bit of extra time to submit or fix anything you want before the door closes.

After the thread is closed, the game begins. Expect the first round to begin not long afterwards.
 

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@Lord Krunk Okay good. I finally finished off the mountain of work professors like to pile on the week before courses end. I fucking hate half semester courses.
 

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So is there a time limit for people's intro's to be in today? :0 I feel I should warn the 3 pendings.
 

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@Krunk: That's good since I'm currently without a computer for the time being (Thanks for that great battery Staples. Didn't even last a bloody year!), but I should have a loaner come Monday so that I can properly judge these entries from a (sigh) netbook.
 

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Armitage Shanks said:
Name: Dimitry Shanks
Height: 5'10'' ish
Hair: Purple spiked mohawk (actually quite conservative on Praxus)
Species: Pretty much human
Powers: Psychic. Also, knows his way round an upper cut, a knife and/or a firearm if necessary.
Home: Mining world Praxus VII.
Occupation: Former bartender. After his tenure in the Ratings War II, now it's as a vagabond and occasional drunk.
Suite: Diamonds. Influencer and charmer-er
Weakness: Only human, sudden or very unpredictable conditions can leave him disoriented and vulnerable.
Power Description: good old fashioned ability to predict and react to the future, couple with the ability to gain an impression of peoples minds. That doesn't mean straight out read them, just get an idea of who they are, personality, what buttons to push etc.

Working in a busy bar on a busy planet has meant that Dimitry has gained an awful lot of insight into people and how they think, what makes them tick and how they react. Its not a power, its just an advatadge that his power gives him, but it means that he knows a lot about people of all types.

The precognition part of the power is not an exact science. It comes in flashes and visions, if he concentrates very hard and focuses he can usually get a clear picture, but often its just a roadmap of all the possibilities available in the near future.

In combat he is an excellent hand to hand fighter. He hasn't had formal training and doesn't use a martial art per se, he is just very good at knowing what he wants to do, A, understanding his bodies position, B, and then moving from one to the other.

Oh and while he may be one of those slightly 'mind-battle' characters, he is by no means a pacifist.
Intro coming later.
How did things end for this guy in RW2? I would go back and look but there are too many pages to search through.
 

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Lord Krunk said:
I note that only some of the listings cover both player name and character name. Just putting that out there in case you feel like editing it in the future.
 

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No longer Pending! Here's my sheet and the Entry's being finished. Entry/Intro's below.

Name: Lauren Ward
Nickname: Was given the codename 'Zayin' by a former employer.
Age: 32

Appearance: Standing at 5 feet and 5 inches even Lauren has green eyes and medium length, light brown hair she normally keeps tied back into a short ponytail. She has fair skin, that isn't so light that she burns easily but it's light enough for wandering anthropologists (at her first job) to give her a curious glance. Regular exercise, and a good metabolism, keeps Lauren in shape physically.

Clothing: When she's at work she dresses in 'business casual' attire. Dress shoes with no heel, charcoal grey slacks with a white blouse and a pair of glasses that she doesn't need but her boss insisted it 'completes the image'. When she's at home she wears jeans and button up shirts or even sweatpants. Her current chosen gear is a Kevlar vest underneath her former security officer uniform of a single pocket polo shirt, pressed black slacks with a belt to which her weapons are strapped, and high-grade military boots.

Weapons: A dagger that almost qualifies as a short-sword made of an indeterminate metal. The pommel, grip, and part of the cross-guard appear painted in blue free-flowing designs. Closer inspection reveals the color to be etched in and sealed over. The blade itself is double-edged, plain, and undecorated. A company-issued baton is kept strapped to Lauren's side. Despite being certified to carry a gun she does not normal do so.

Powers: Precognition. Lauren is prescient. She can see the future up to a few seconds ahead of actual occurrences. This ability manifests as seemingly inhuman reflexes.

Strengths: She is smart, a quick thinker and a strategist. Lauren began learning Aikido at age six and added Judo, taught by a different instructor at the same location, when she became a security officer. Additional close quarter combat and planning skills were learned during her required Bodyguard Certification and CCW courses.

Weaknesses: It has been two years since she was released from her bodyguard employment and the circumstances that caused her to leave the job were traumatic. Working out at the gym and local dojo has kept Lauren's body in shape but both mind and body are not as accustomed to 'true' fighting and rigid attention required before. While Lauren can see the future, a very slim percentage of the time the future she acts on is not the 'true' future.

Personality: In public Lauren tends to appear very serious as she strives to be very professional and is dedicated to her job. She is careful in her actions and words, often pausing to be sure she will be saying what she really means. The pauses also allow Lauren to keep track of the appropriate timeline. Lauren believes she is friendly but has found that acquaintances become uncomfortable, even insulted at times, by her tendency to scan her surroundings during a conversation. She's been told she appears 'distracted' even when looking directly at a person. Since the description is partially accurate Lauren's never countered the observation. It's much easier for Lauren to converse, and relax, when she's at home or in the very least away from her place of work. Lauren likes things to be scheduled and structured, preferring plans to spontaneous decisions. The only time she is 'okay' with spontaneity is during her sparring matches.

Fear: Lauren fears above all things losing her son. Whether that be her son taken from her, or her from him. To a lesser degree she remains concerned for Fitzroy's safety, despite having never been assigned to guard him. As someone who excelled in their education and extracurricular activities Lauren also fears failing, both the idea of failure and specifically failing to do her job.

Suit: Diamonds [Clubs if necessary]

Bio (summary): The adopted daughter of Thomas and Emily Ward, Lauren is an intelligent woman who grew up under the watchful eye of her parents and various instructors. She excelled in school, enjoying history and physical education courses the most. Her 'favorite' subjects were a source of pride for her archeologist father and librarian mother. Lauren graduated from a private college with a degree in History. For economic purposes she became certified as a security officer and worked night shifts while continuing her education online. An unexpected transfer found Lauren employed by a private security company owned by a wealthy collector by the name of Fitzroy Reinhart. Lauren's initial assignment was guarding a particular display, part of a much larger private collection, of antique weaponry. She was promoted to personal bodyguard of Oliver, her employer's son, after successfully stopping three attempted robberies the last of which was discovered to be part of an attempt on Fitzroy's life. Over the years Lauren's professionalism wavered as her designated charge attempted to court her in an earnest yet honest fashion. Oliver's charm and sincerity eventually succeeded.

Before their relationship could be publicly announced Oliver's apartment was set on fire by an unidentified group of protestors. Police reports determined that several tenants including Oliver had been locked inside their own homes, heavily sedated, left to die by smoke inhalation. Distraught with grief, Lauren sent a letter to her employer asking to be forgiven, and to be fired. To be released from her contracted duty. But rather than fire her, Fitzroy gave her one last assignment. She was to continue to guard three items from his collection in her own private display he was going to provide for her. Lauren would then be relieved of her duty with full benefits for a year. The offer was made in person. She was given a week to decide. During that time the two had many long visits and conversations about Oliver and each others history. Lauren learned that Fitzroy was going to move out of the city, back to his homeland, and was donating most of his collection to a museum. But there were just a few pieces he couldn't part with as they were his 'favorites'. Fitzroy learned on the final day of the week that he would be a grandfather. Lauren accepted the deal that was offered.

As an additional parting gift from Fitzroy Lauren was moved to a brand new two bedroom house that contained a basement large enough for the small weapons collection. Using her history degree for credentials Lauren applied for a museum technician position at a small but expanding institution in the middle of the city. Her son, Kevan, was born the same day she received her acceptance letter. Two years later Lauren successfully balances her job and her family life with relative ease. She goes to the gym three times a week, pays her bills on time, and recently offered to child-sit for a co-worker who's in the middle of a complicated divorce trial. Lauren's son Kevan is almost preschool age. She has been looking into school options.

'Unauthorized Entry'

[small]{/// Words ///} - Flashback[/small]
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There were two blonde children sitting at Lauren's kitchen table. Ages seven and ten respectively, they were both waiting patiently for her to begin speaking. They had already finished one TV show and instead of a movie Simon, the boy, had requested a story instead of more visual entertainment. "But with fightin! Enna wolf!" With those quick rules established the story began.

"Once upon a time there lived a man. A king. And he ruled over many villages and towns. Now he wasn't the bravest king, or the strongest. But he was the kindest king the people had ever had."

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"Mr. Reinhart, this is Lauren, she's from the Ranston Security Center, and comes highly recommended. We sent you the transcripts yester-"
"Hello there, Lauren. How would you like a tour?" The grey-haired gentleman smoothly interrupted his head of security and held out a hand.
Lauren's eyes widened slightly. This was her new employer? She'd been expecting a portly old man with a bad attitude. This gentleman was tall, normal-looking, and despite the grey/white hair seemed quite amused to have interrupted what was supposed to be a serious affair. He reminded her of her second-year college professor. The man tilted his hand slightly and Lauren rushed to reply.
"Yes, sir. I'd like that." Carefully stepping past the now-stoic security officer Lauren took the man's hand. Swiftly she was lead, almost dragged, forward.
Speaking loudly the man began describing each display. "Now this section is purely pre-790 A.D. My son, you'll meet him later, rather likes this one but I prefer..."
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"He ruled his land fairly with his queen. The crops grew big and strong. The people owned their own land, and had jobs. No one was unhappy. Not even the king. In fact the king's greatest treasure was his garden. The royal gardens were filled with every flower imaginable, every fruit, and even some trees."

"What about vegetables? Tomato's a vegetable!" Susan, the girl, spoke up for the first time that evening.

Lauren laughed softly. "There were vegetables", she confirmed, "Lots and lots of vegetables." Simon made a face. He didn't like vegetables, it seemed. Lauren continued her story.

"The biggest and most beautiful tree in the gardens had white leaves and white bark. And the leaves never changed color, no matter what the season. Because of this it became known simple as The White Tree. Many villagers would travel for days just to take a tour of the gardens and see the tree."

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"It's called Fraxinus" Lauren turned as an unknown male approached. Sensing her unease the man quickly put his hands up in a placating gesture.
"I'm sorry I didn't meant to bother you." Though his tone was gentle the man continued approaching.
"It's alright" Lauren replied carefully. Mr. Reinhart had left her standing at his 'best items' display, citing some paperwork he needed to get for her to sign.
"My father's favorite piece." As the man came within striking distance Lauren noted that his features were very similar to her new employer's. "I'm Oliver." As his father had done before him, Oliver held out his hand.
Lauren shook the offered hand carefully before turning back to the blade she'd been admiring.
"How old is it?" she asked.
"No one knows." the man replied.
"It's beautiful." Delicately made and polished so that it shone bright, Lauren could see how it was a prized item.
"Would you like to hear its story?" Oliver asked.
"Sure." She still had time until Mr. Reinhart, the elder, returned.
Oliver nodded briefly.
"Well first off, it's not truly -named- Fraxinus, that's just what's on the paperwork. Father thought it was funny. You see when they first started researching..."
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"The king had many attendants guarding his property. And he had a two special guards just for the tree. One was a brave young warrior and the other wasn't a man at all, but a wolf."

"Ah woof?" Simon's mouth was half-filled with granola. Walking quickly to the kitchen counter Lauren retrieved a napkin and handed it to the boy before returning to her own seat.

"Yes, a wolf. But it wasn't a mean wolf. And it wasn't the Big Bad Wolf." Susan grinned and lowered the arm she'd raised. Lauren nodded slightly at the girl. "Together the warrior and the wolf guarded the tree. The warrior guarded by day, and the wolf by night."

Lowering her voice, Lauren put both hands on the table and leaned forward.

"But one day, a group of villagers became angry. They looked at the king's garden and they decided that they wanted it for themselves. Even though they weren't hungry. They weren't in pain. But they wanted the White Tree. They thought that the king should be more focused on them. And so the group came up with a plan. Late one night, they requested an audience with the king. And the king, they knew, would take a while to wake up. So while half of them waited in the main hall, the other half took torches and broke into the Gardens. They set the plants on fire, and the fences, and the trees."

The storyteller paused to observe the curious gazes of the children. Simon's half-eaten granola bar was laying flat on the table. Susan had her head resting on her arms.

Lauren raised her voice slightly and sped up her words. "Just as the people were about to leave, the warrior appeared! Quickly she ran to the gardens and grabbed the nearest water bucket. She threw it on the flames!"

The story halted abruptly. Simon rocked back and forth before blurting out his question. "Did it work?"

The boy's enthusiasm allowed Lauren to smile. But she shook her head sadly.

"No, there wasn't enough water to put out the flames. The warrior was forced to leave. She raised the alarm and tried to get others to help. But it was too little, too late..."

"What about the wolf?" Susan asked. Her head was raised and she poked at the table as she recalled, "The wolf had the night." The girl pointed at Lauren, as though the adult has messed up the story.

Again Lauren shook her head. "When the fire cleared...", she moved her chair and it scraped noisily against the floor, "...the warrior found the wolf curled around the tree. The tree was untouched. But the wolf..."

"Woof died?" The granola-impaired words were innocent. Lauren reached across the table and opened up Simon's napkin to make a small 'plate' just as some crumbs fell.

"Wolf died." she repeated.

{////}
"I. Failed. He. I.Why?" Broken and incoherent words tumbled from her mouth as she struggled to breathe. A warm hand, weathered with age, came to rest gently on her shoulder.
"You didn't fail, lass. You didn't fail me and you certainly didn't fail him. No one could have known this would would happen." Fitzroy Reinhart was just as deep in grief as Lauren but he carried it with grace.
{////}


"What happened next?" Susan asked.

"Next?" Lauren tapped her fingers gently on the table "Next...the king honored the wolf with a burial. The garden was replanted. But the warrior left. No one knows where she went. She just...left."

{////}
"You did not fail me, understand?"
"Yes, sir...."
Two weeks after the funeral service Fitzroy had shown up at Lauren's front door. Alone, without any security. Her resignation request was crumpled up in his hand. Lauren watched as he tossed the papers in the direction of the trash can and stepped inside of her home like he'd been there before. Which, he hadn't.
Lauren let Mr. Reinhart walk around her apartment. It wasn't very big, there was a single bedroom, a kitchen, and a small living area with sparse furnishing.
"You were trained to be a solider but you weren't born to be one." Fitzroy wasn't looking at her when he said it, so Lauren thought perhaps she'd misheard.
"I'm sorry?"
"This is not you." he declared. He turned and made a sweeping gesture to encompass the room. Or perhaps the bare walls. Or perhaps both.
"You need some pictures. Or some paintings. I know you have a degree in History. I've read your file."
Lauren frowned. She'd been told that before. By Oliver...the room suddenly became blurry.
Seeing Lauren starting to become upset, Fitzroy moved closer and took both of her hands in her own.
"I'm sorry." he apologized. But it did little to ease the hurt and pain.
Mr. Reinhart back up a step and made another declaration. This one was quieter. "I have one final task for you. But first, let's sit down, shall we? Come on...it's alright."
{////}


"That's sad." Simon pouted. "I wanted a good story."

Lauren smiled at the boy's protest. "I'm sorry, Simon. How about next time you pick the story, okay?"


"'Kay" With a grin that revealed two missing teeth, Simon jumped off of his chair. Bits of granola and shredded napkin remain at his place on the table. Lauren knew he was heading for the bathroom but the loudly exclaimed, "Momma!" interrupted his path.

Simon launched himself at his mother, who had to drop her purse to keep from falling. Lauren bent to retrieve the item as Susan began packing her homework back into her book-bag.

"I hope they weren't any trouble." Samantha, who liked to go by Sam, was Lauren's age but other than that they were nothing alike. Tall, petite, with nails perfectly manicured Samantha never cared for exerting herself anymore than strictly necessary. But though somewhat shallow she was still one of the few co-workers Lauren could actually talk to.

"They were just fine." Lauren assured her.

"Bye Mis'ward."

"Goodbye Simon."

Susan waved and ducked her head shyly before disappearing after her brother.

Lauren waved also to Sam as the three left the sidewalk and piled into a brand new sedan. She locked the door firmly, waiting for the near-silent hiss of the additional locks before sighing quietly.

The kitchen table mess was cleared quickly. Then the lights were shut off. Six steps took Lauren down the hall and into a softly lit room. She approached the crib quietly. There, half sheltered in shadow, her son lay sleeping peacefully. One hand was lightly clenched into his fleece blanket. After making certain the blanket was secure Lauren left. There was one more stop to make.

Further down the hall was the doorway to the mini-Museum. Her own private, slightly borrowed, collection of weaponry. The room's security was greater than that of the rest of the house combined. For that reason it took a good ten seconds to unlock the door. After doing so, Lauren paused. She had an odd feeling...

The automatic lights activated with a slight flicker. Soft blue fluorescence illuminated six display cases lining the walls. And three men in pressed suits standing in the middle of the room. Clothed from head to toe in black, the only thing unique about the men was the color of their eyes. The man on the left had green eyes. The middle man had blue eyes. And the man on the right had eyes that almost looked black, but certainly had to be some sort of dark brown. All of this information was cataloged as Lauren's hand went to the her side, brushing past her shirt to reach the baton strapped there.

"Who are you?" she asked as she slid the weapon free of its holster. The men certainly didn't look like normal burglars.


The man standing in the middle answered in a surprisingly low voice. "Who we are is not important. We have a job for you." The man's companions were standing at attention.

"My answer is no." There was only one kind of job that men in suits wanted. And she was content with her current job. "Get out of my house." Keeping her gaze on the middle man Lauren leaned back against the door. It wasn't a casual gesture. The concealed panic button hovered an inch from her fingertips.

"Ah, we thought you might say that." In a smooth, almost choreographed the men on the left and right stepped forward. One lifted something up into the air while the other put his hands out to help display the item. Light glinted off a familiar weapon.

Lauren sucked in a harsh breath. There were only two people in the world who could access that case. "How did you get-" She hadn't even seen them!

"We have no intention of depraving your family of its heritage." The middle man raised his hands and made a strange gesture over the dagger but he did not speak.

'What?' Lauren's anger diminished slight in confusion. Her family. Her oh no they weren't. Her voice rose, "You leave my son out of this!" Whatever this was.

"He will be unharmed. All we ask is that you come with us." The weapons was spun so that its hilt faced Lauren. The left-side man actually knelt before offering the weapon.

"Why?" She had to know.

"We told you. You are being hired."

"As a bodyguard?"

"As a soldier."

"I'm not a soldier."

There was a pause. "You will be." And for the first time there was a hint of emotion in the man's voice. It was hard to pinpoint what emotion, though.

Lauren remained silent for a moment. "I need to make a phone call." she said at last. The closest suit nodded. Turning just far enough to hide the phone's screen Lauren dialed a direct number. A bored, tired sounding voice answered.

"Reinhart Security Services, how may I help you?"

"It's Zayin." Lauren's reply was clipped and precise, "I need someone to watch my son for a few days. And I need someone here immediately."

"Ma'am I'm sorry we don't provide..." There was a pause and some very loud keyboard clicks. The voice woke up a bit and there was the sound of a throat being cleared. "-I mean yes ma'am we'll send someone over right away. Is five minutes okay?"

Lauren looked up at the suits. But there was no expression in any of the faces. "Make it four, please. Thank you." Without waiting for another textbook response she flipped the phone shut. She took the dagger in her free hand. As always the metal was cool, the weight solid. Lauren leaned back to open the door. With the dagger she pointed down the hallway towards the foyer.

"I will meet you...gentlemen...outside. After I see my son."
 

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Lauren Ward
Huh, another mid-30's single mother character with magical powers, if our two character's fight each other then it's going to be a impassioned match for sure :p Just a head's up, as there's already 5 Diamonds and only 4 Clubs unless another Club is entered in the next few hours that's what she'll probably end up as, not that that's a bad thing as from her career I'd say Clubs suits her better anyway.
 

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Here's hoping another Club shows up, as I kind of prefer Diamonds. Wouldn't personally classify the ability my character has as magical. I haven't read many of the other sheets yet I'll probably go through 'em all tomorrow.
 

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Here's an intro. I don't like it that much but it seems to be a necessity around here.
Sand kicked through the street. The walls of the cityscape, decaying and ruined, stood as the only thing keeping sight of any kind possible outside of the imperial city. A huddle of young men in rags sat near to the city well, an oasis amidst the desert of over-bearing walls, present for their protection. They lay waiting. For what is uncertain, but they lay waiting.
A strong young man, sitting against the well, takes a bite of his fruit before casting it off, frustrated at its hidden age and lack of taste. The others collected watched the fruit sail away and as it fell to the sands, they each wandered to pick off what was left. Desperate times. His head leaned back against the heat of the well and he began to ponder his lot in life: The leader of a bunch of misfits in the slums. What good is controlling the streets if you can?t even get food?
A second robed figure, smaller and slimmer than the first, took an adjacent spot by the well and sat in silence. He quietly and invisible adjusted his robe so that his eyes would remain hidden. Archetype of wisdom for one. So that he wouldn?t be stabbed to death upon eye contact for two. ?You seem in need of some assistance.? The first looked at the newcomer with frustration, which was all that he needed to do for his men to move in. A blade to his throat, a gun to his temple, his arms pinned behind him.
He refused to flinch. The first key to winning a hand here is to never admit that you don?t have cards.
?No offense, but it seems like future business transactions might be difficult to conduct if you develop a reputation of killing whoever comes your way.? The first?s face relaxed and he itched his nose for a brief moment. Suddenly, the guns were gone, the blade was gone. It was just two young men at the well watching a group fight over fruit.
?What do you want??
?Looking to offer my services to someone in need of them.?
The first flashed a grin briefly. It disappeared before he answered, ?I?m the top. I don?t need services of anyone. I?m more looking for? business opportunities than whatever you?re selling.?
?I?m not selling a thing. I?m offering you the opportunity to feel true power.?
?True Pow-?
?True power?? Edge a quarter step closer to accentuate the point. Not too close or it will seem overbearing. Not too far away or it will seem like a nervous shuffle. ?Not what you have now. Strongest rat still starving for cheese set-up. I mean, real power. The kind they have in the city. The kind where lower people can?t fight you so they fight with each other. Roll over and give up. True. Power.?
??Keep talking.?
What I do best, he thinks, turn 73 degrees to face wall. Gives impression of worldliness, not needing to talk face to face. ?In order to get to real power, you have to do something to unite the people you?ve pushed under you. You have to do something.?
?I?ve dominated everyone I?ve warred with, what they can do isn?t my concern.?
Careful. Disagree outright and the discussion becomes a debate. But he must be re-led. ?Alone, yes. Opposing you, yes. But, under one banner, united. The people of the slums will consider you not a warlord, but a hero. A sign of the changing times, a means of improving life. This is impossible if you wrap yourself up in which group controls the molehill while the mountain stares down at us.?
His eyes grow brighter and larger. He may be sold on this idea. His tell is quickly forced back into his gut as he instead shows a mask of apathy. ?What must I do for these events to come??
?Return the lands you have taken from your beaten nemeses.? Deep breath. He has come to respect your opinion somewhat and may mirror this action, calming his mind and his response.
Unfortunately, for the first time, the plan does not pan out. ?How?dare you. I will not return what I have spent years taking and building. This city is mine.?
Relax. ?You?ve fought over nothing that wasn?t already yours. Returning the land now to your former foes, guarantees that the land, and by extension those who own it, would be under your control.?
?No. Surrendering what I?ve worked, bled, suffered for... I will do no such thing. You have wasted my time.?
Shit. Shit. Breathe. Shit. ?Sir, the land is worthless without the loyalty of the peo-?
?You have wasted my time.?
Two men are at the sides of the newcomer. ?Sir, if you would reconsider-?
?You have wasted my time.?
Two men reach down and pick up the newcomer by the arms. They wrench him upright quickly. The hood of the robe slips but his arm wrenches forward to keep it over his eyes. Unfortunately, the thug on his right considers this an attempt to escape and backhands him across the jaw. His hood flies over his head and lies limp behind his throat.
The blackness of his eyes is now clear. Realization runs over the face of the first, ?A silvertongue! A trap! Kill him, another ploy by the imperialists to keep us running.?
Press arms above neck to emphasize innocence. ?I am no silvertongue! Listen to me? Thug takes two steps forward. Quick fist slams across the jaw and he lays limp on the ground. Eight years out of civilization and he still hasn?t learned how to take a punch. After years of planning and preparing, failure. His life had meant nothing from beginning to end. It was over now. He took a breath on the ground as his skull was wrenched upright and a blade was placed at his throat.
Suddenly, a scream, a blade slammed into the leg of the thug. Reject ripped the knife out of the hands of his adversary and he turned to fight for his freedom. His vision was enveloped in white and time seemed to slow around him. As the dimensions turned, he pondered if this was death?