The Society of Justice: A Super Hero Roleplay
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Tommy could see the building in sight, he decided to turn away before he got too close and stopped.
"Guys, I'm almost there, I think I'm going to hang back and watch the perimeter while you guys go in, what with me not being any good at stealth. Call me if you need me."
Tommy then went inside one of the buildings nearby, it was a simple matter of his costume and the badge Garrus had given him, and they let him go to the roof. There he waited, watching the building, wishing he had some binoculars.
"Guys, I'm almost there, I think I'm going to hang back and watch the perimeter while you guys go in, what with me not being any good at stealth. Call me if you need me."
Tommy then went inside one of the buildings nearby, it was a simple matter of his costume and the badge Garrus had given him, and they let him go to the roof. There he waited, watching the building, wishing he had some binoculars.
"Okay, okay. I'll see about the cameras. Tommy if you want you can help Richard with the distractions," Garrus said into his comm, yanking out the wire to the camera above him before making his way down the hallway. He heard voices up ahead, peaking in from a glass panel into something like a lounge with two mercs in it. He ducked underneath the panel and walked over to the door, sneaking in and knocking both mercs out.
He took their keycards and put them in his pocket before looking around for a map. He grabbed a soda from the soda machine as he looked up at a very basic map on the wall.
"Okay guys, I have a map. There are two ways to get into the underground part: the way I went and one further along behind the receptionist's desk. There should be a room behind it that would lead you down."
He took their keycards and put them in his pocket before looking around for a map. He grabbed a soda from the soda machine as he looked up at a very basic map on the wall.
"Okay guys, I have a map. There are two ways to get into the underground part: the way I went and one further along behind the receptionist's desk. There should be a room behind it that would lead you down."
"Right, I'll try the other route. Thanks, Garrus," Katie answered as she peered out from the hallway back into the entrance hall. The camera was covering the door behind the receptionist's desk, so she slipped the door closed and waited a few seconds. When she took another look, the camera was looking at the other door.
Katie immediately hurried out from the hallway and made straight for the door. It slid open easily, revealing a mercenary sitting with his back to the door. How careless. Katie extended vines towards the merc, taking him by surprise. She gagged him with one and lashed his legs together with another. A few seconds later he was on the ground, and she punched him once to shut him up. To prevent her opponent escaping, Katie quickly encased him in a layer of heavy bark, leaving his eyes and nose free to allow him to see and breathe. The rest of the merc was trapped in the bark, unable to move.
Once that was dealt with, she got up and examined the room around her. Another door led to a staircase down, and she approached it with caution.
Katie immediately hurried out from the hallway and made straight for the door. It slid open easily, revealing a mercenary sitting with his back to the door. How careless. Katie extended vines towards the merc, taking him by surprise. She gagged him with one and lashed his legs together with another. A few seconds later he was on the ground, and she punched him once to shut him up. To prevent her opponent escaping, Katie quickly encased him in a layer of heavy bark, leaving his eyes and nose free to allow him to see and breathe. The rest of the merc was trapped in the bark, unable to move.
Once that was dealt with, she got up and examined the room around her. Another door led to a staircase down, and she approached it with caution.
"Hi Dona, and her friend," Garrus said, finishing up his drink as he figured out the next area he'd go to. He left the room, making sure there were no cameras as he turned a corner. Whenever there was a camera he either snuck by or destroyed it, finally coming to a door label 'Surveillance'.
He busted right in, taking out one of the members who was calling in about a few cameras blacking out. The other member was going to draw his gun but had a laptop thrown at him before a kick sent him down.
"Okay everyone. Consider that camera rule done," Garrus said as he took a seat at the center of the screen.
He busted right in, taking out one of the members who was calling in about a few cameras blacking out. The other member was going to draw his gun but had a laptop thrown at him before a kick sent him down.
"Okay everyone. Consider that camera rule done," Garrus said as he took a seat at the center of the screen.
Another hallway presented itself to Katie at the bottom of the stairs. She crept along it, taking care to make as little noise as possible. About halfway down the hall, she found an open door labeled "Armoury". The sounds of multiple people gearing up and talking could be heard from within; Katie picked out about four or five distinct voices. Too many for her to beat on her own, especially if they had guns.
Slowly but carefully, Katie retreated back to the stairs and closed the door behind her. She began to whisper into her comm, "Guys, I've found where they're keeping all their weapons and such. I'd stop anyone getting in, but there are about five of them in there. I'd be shot to pieces if I tried anything. Can anyone help me out?"
Slowly but carefully, Katie retreated back to the stairs and closed the door behind her. She began to whisper into her comm, "Guys, I've found where they're keeping all their weapons and such. I'd stop anyone getting in, but there are about five of them in there. I'd be shot to pieces if I tried anything. Can anyone help me out?"
"So the cameras are under our control then?" Alister asked. "Good. I'll find a way up to the second floor from outside here. What's everyone's position?"
As he spoke Alister walked up to the side of the building and spotted a window he could reach. He readied his legs and jumped as high as he could, augmented by Excalibur. He was just short of the windowsill, and instead jammed his sword into the brick. It was strong, and steady, so he he used it as a perch to reach the top. As he climbed up to the window he slid it open and crawled in, turning back to retrieve his sword.
He pulled back open his communicator. "I'm at the southeastern corner of the second floor. Room's dark, though, can't see a thing."
He then heard Katie requesting help. He decided to respond. "I can help, where is the Armoury?"
As he spoke Alister walked up to the side of the building and spotted a window he could reach. He readied his legs and jumped as high as he could, augmented by Excalibur. He was just short of the windowsill, and instead jammed his sword into the brick. It was strong, and steady, so he he used it as a perch to reach the top. As he climbed up to the window he slid it open and crawled in, turning back to retrieve his sword.
He pulled back open his communicator. "I'm at the southeastern corner of the second floor. Room's dark, though, can't see a thing."
He then heard Katie requesting help. He decided to respond. "I can help, where is the Armoury?"
"It's in the basement; go back down to the ground floor," Katie answered. "In the room behind the receptionist desk, there's a door leading to a staircase. I'm at the bottom of the stairs, hoping the guys in the armoury don't come my way."
Strangely, Jason kept himself silent throuought all of fighting, and continued to do so as he drove to Kent. He had nothing to contribute and just figured it was best to keep his mouth shut. As he arrived at the cleaning building, he strolled into the front entrance, quickly looking up to spot the rotating security camera. Before he was spotted, several small spike elongated from his arms. They shot out as he pointed towards the camera, and destroyed the camera in a matter of seconds. He kept his face straight and stolid as he trudged on. Eventually he mde it past the receptionist's desk (destroying the camera there as well) before reaching a door, finding a unconcious body wrapped in heavy bark. He scoffed before continuing towards a door that led down stairs. Travelling down the stairs, he found a familar face and a door with "Armoury" painted on it. Reaching the familar face, his vow of silence ended, and he finally opened his mouth.
"Need some help?" He asked Katie quietly and somewhat sadly.
"Need some help?" He asked Katie quietly and somewhat sadly.
"There are six guys," Garrus told them from the surveillance room, looking at the screen that showed the inside of the armory. "I'll say one thing guys, get ready for an array of grenades and some heavy machine guns. Kinda afraid to see what they'd have in their normal armory," he said, his eye catching something on the screen.
A man in a dark turtle-neck was seemingly barking orders at some other people before heading into an area that had no cameras. "Think we found our guy, and I think they know that we've broken in," Garrus said to everyone.
A man in a dark turtle-neck was seemingly barking orders at some other people before heading into an area that had no cameras. "Think we found our guy, and I think they know that we've broken in," Garrus said to everyone.
I would post, but I have absolutely no idea if Avouleance's post affected what I would write.
Avouleance, you have six hours as of now to provide a logical explanation of your post. There will be no whining and no excuses. If you fail to meet this deadline, the consequences won't be pretty.
The actions I will take have been GM-approved.
The actions I will take have been GM-approved.
Sorry, Avouleance, but you ran out of time. I gave you six hours, and I stick to my deadlines. Half an hour late is as good as a day late to me. Anyway...
I have had doubts about the quality of your posting since the day I met you. These reasons should give you an idea why:
1) First and foremost. It's obvious that either English isn't your first language or you misuse words in place of others that can easily be confused. tsatoma, blaze and I were all completely confused when you wrote that one of your characters "talked the man to the floor". We've come to the assumption you meant "tackled" instead of "talked". Another example is back when Souldemon's character lost control. You mentioned something about a doctor shitting. I think you'll find there's a big difference between what you wrote and your intention.
You have made countless mistakes of simple spelling and grammar in your posts, and I'm thoroughly sick of it.
2) Your constant godmodding. You are always writing yourself into the scene, an example of which is below:
3) The sudden introduction of Leon and his apparent joining of the team. I see no purpose for this other than because you want to have more than one character under your control. As a side note, I never understood the purpose of that Queen person in Dona's head, nor the purpose of the existence of Jess. You could have simply had Dona on her own and some of us would be perfectly happy with it.
Also, it is my belief that the majority of your characters' development and depth is written on-the-spot, rather than planned out ahead of time.
4) Your manipulation of other characters. I know this is what Dona does as a result of her mental abilities, but you've done it in other RPs as well as this one. If you remember, Sam G said something on this subject in Epic Realms. You can't control other characters, so stop doing it. It's an ethical thing as much as an in-character thing.
If I were the GM, I would dismiss you from this RP. Luckily for you, tsatoma is more merciful than I. And on a personal note, I am disappointed in you for reasons other than those I have provided.
So, in a nutshell, get it the fuck together, Avouleance. Get your posting up to our standards or don't post at all. If this means you post less often, then so be it.
I have had doubts about the quality of your posting since the day I met you. These reasons should give you an idea why:
1) First and foremost. It's obvious that either English isn't your first language or you misuse words in place of others that can easily be confused. tsatoma, blaze and I were all completely confused when you wrote that one of your characters "talked the man to the floor". We've come to the assumption you meant "tackled" instead of "talked". Another example is back when Souldemon's character lost control. You mentioned something about a doctor shitting. I think you'll find there's a big difference between what you wrote and your intention.
You have made countless mistakes of simple spelling and grammar in your posts, and I'm thoroughly sick of it.
2) Your constant godmodding. You are always writing yourself into the scene, an example of which is below:
If you're late to arrive to a place, simply say so and take a slower route to your destination. You don't have to be everywhere all the time, influencing every scenario. No-one can do that. Besides, if you hadn't interfered, life would be easier for all of us and I wouldn't be writing this. But I digress.avouleance2nd said:
3) The sudden introduction of Leon and his apparent joining of the team. I see no purpose for this other than because you want to have more than one character under your control. As a side note, I never understood the purpose of that Queen person in Dona's head, nor the purpose of the existence of Jess. You could have simply had Dona on her own and some of us would be perfectly happy with it.
Also, it is my belief that the majority of your characters' development and depth is written on-the-spot, rather than planned out ahead of time.
4) Your manipulation of other characters. I know this is what Dona does as a result of her mental abilities, but you've done it in other RPs as well as this one. If you remember, Sam G said something on this subject in Epic Realms. You can't control other characters, so stop doing it. It's an ethical thing as much as an in-character thing.
If I were the GM, I would dismiss you from this RP. Luckily for you, tsatoma is more merciful than I. And on a personal note, I am disappointed in you for reasons other than those I have provided.
So, in a nutshell, get it the fuck together, Avouleance. Get your posting up to our standards or don't post at all. If this means you post less often, then so be it.
"Alright, I'm going in, I'll try to draw them my way." Tommy said, as he fumbled in his jacket pocket for his mask. It was true he didn't need to protect his identity anymore, the Union knew who he was, and so did the Archmages, but still he slipped it on. As he did so, careful Tommy who was terrified by his own strength faded away, replaced by Golem, the silent bringer of justice.
Golem looked over the side of the building, Tommy would have gone back inside and taken the stairs to not bring attention to himself and minimize damage, but as Golem he didn't care. He lept off building and hit the ground with a pavement cracking thump, feet first. Looking at the mercenary base he began running, strong legs quickly building up speed.
"Richard, You got a suggestion on how to hit these guys?" He asked as he began weighing options in his head.
Golem looked over the side of the building, Tommy would have gone back inside and taken the stairs to not bring attention to himself and minimize damage, but as Golem he didn't care. He lept off building and hit the ground with a pavement cracking thump, feet first. Looking at the mercenary base he began running, strong legs quickly building up speed.
"Richard, You got a suggestion on how to hit these guys?" He asked as he began weighing options in his head.