The crystal flew out of bobs hands and into Malestorm's. "HEY! I need that crystal for.... Something apparently!" Sho said lunging at Malestrom the rest of the villains quickly followed and ram said "Is it just me or are we seeing these guys more and more?" The crystal was dropped and Splazor picked it up "Hey guys I-" But grimm jumped at him before he could finish, while everyone was creating a mosh-pit of sorts Ghanson snuck in and took the crystal.
Guy's Maelstrom isn't there Bob was delivering the crystal to his castle so you jst lost your chance in confotnting him
The crystal flew out of bobs hands and into Malestorm's. "HEY! I need that crystal for.... Something apparently!" Sho said lunging at Malestrom the rest of the villains quickly followed and ram said "Is it just me or are we seeing these guys more and more?" The crystal was dropped and Splazor picked it up "Hey guys I-" But grimm jumped at him before he could finish, while everyone was creating a mosh-pit of sorts Ghanson snuck in and took the crystal.
Petey two things
1) All out of character posts must be in spoilers so it won't cause confusion. I can't stress that enough. There have been way to many posts like this not just from you but from other posters as well.
2)Last time I checked Ghanson surronded you with Zombie Werewolves. AND THEN PUT THE GEM BACK INTO IT'S POWER SOURCE! Come on man make sure you read the posts fully before posting.
when Ghanson looked at the Crystal he saw it was a Fake Bob had used magic to send maelstrom the real one Ghanson realized the only way to get the Crystal now would be to confront Maelstrom but he had no Idea where his castle is
I was thinking of adding a good guy character to the group one some one who can heal the other characters
when Ghanson looked at the Crystal he saw it was a Fake Bob had used magic to send maelstrom the real one Ghanson realized the only way to get the Crystal now would be to confront Maelstrom but he had no Idea where his castle is
Also you can't do that kind of stuff.Either you include it in your post or it's not part of the story. You can't have readers trying to fill in the blanks. Also where did this fake come from? Did it just appear out of thin air like Bob? Also how is a fake capable of powering the oblivion gate which requires a massive amount of energy? Also how did you escape the Zombie werewolves? Your leaving to many plot holes.
I guess I want my character to have the crytals so maybe we should delete the posts where bob stole the crystal seeing as up to there it just got to crazy
Edit ok now I know what Maddawg was talking about,P.S. that a a Dick move Maelstrom needs that gem, ok I think we can edit out Maelstrom seeing as now you know where he is
I guess I want my character to have the crytals so maybe we should delete the posts where bob stole the crystal seeing as up to there it just got to crazy
Edit ok now I know what Maddawg was talking about,P.S. that a a Dick move Maelstrom needs that gem, ok I think we can edit out Maelstrom seeing as now you know where he is
It is too late for apolgies. Now that you changed the story none of the posts match. Now we have you taking the gems and have everyone fighting over nothing. By changing your post you create a paradox in the Rp. We can't have that. I ask you change you're posts back and be fair with the story. If something does not go your way you can't just take it over.
Maelstrom decided to cast a rare spell that sent the adventurers back in an alternate timeline so there wouldn't be any confusion about what was happening the heroes and villains were in the gate while maelstrom was in his castle planning another wicked scam
Basically what Happened is now up to where ragnorok or something posted that's pretty much where every one is seeing as every thing after that is just stupid I swear I am not going to do anything like that again that was a headache
Maelstrom decided to cast a rare spell that sent the adventurers back in an alternate timeline so there wouldn't be any confusion about what was happening the heroes and villains were in the gate while maelstrom was in his castle planning another wicked scam
Basically what Happened is now up to where ragnorok or something posted that's pretty much where every one is seeing as every thing after that is just stupid I swear I am not going to do anything like that again that was a headache
Okay, what the hell? This is the third time you've caused trouble here in because of poor story telling, lack of consideration for other posters, or god-moding. Honestly, I've never had this much trouble from any other poster. I'm not saying we all started perfectly, but we eventually learned and fit into the AA Rp.
Heck, the 2 brand new players that literally just showed up 10 posts ago are doing a better job then you. And even though I've been confused plenty of times during the AA, this is the first time I'm actually frustrated about it. Between your posts and re-postings, i'm thoroughly confused.
As far as I can see, it seems like your trying to make Maelstrom the Big Baddy of this adventure, but guess what? We already have one. And he worked at being the Big Baddy from Post Number One, and he earned it. Why? Because he grew with the adventure and rode with it's ideas, instead of trying to force his own ideas on it.
Now, I'm not sure whether your doing this because you're inexperienced with the whole RP thing or if your doing it on purpose. But I'm a fair man, so I'm giving you ONE last chance.
You will read, understand, and work with previous posts to continue the story in a fluid manner and you will not try to take control of the story or change it so your character is on top, got it? If you don't, I'll ask you too leave. Go do some other RPs first, make some of your own, just get some practice before you come here.
Please, thank you, and have a nice day.
Ram looked in confusion at the crowd of daemons, villains, and heroes battling over the crystal. Suddenly, Ghanson appeared a little way off, holding the crystal of power over his head.
"MUAHAHAH! Now with the combined awesome forces of us and this crystal, nothing may stop us!" the spliced spirits cried. Power surged through them and the crystal, crackling the air.
"Hmmm..." Ram thought, and unscrewed one of his horns. He then blew into it, letting out one long, deep, and sad note.
"HA! What are you doing, little goat? Calling for reinforcements?" Ghanson yelled.
"Sort of." Ram stated, watching dark clouds form over Ghanson. Suddenly, a huge lightning bolt struck the crystal, over-charging it with power.
"NOOOO!" cried the King of Peace/Pop, eyes wide with fury.
The crystal then exploded, sending Ghanson off into the horizon with a small twinkle.
"Alright, that takes care of that for now. Now I would like you daemons to quit."
"And why would we listen to a little maggot like you?" one of the daemons asked, a few of his brethren shouting their agreements.
"Because if you do, I'll be sure to have my Grandma Ram bake her special Double Chocolate Chip Brownie Cookie batter if you do."
The crowd of daemons cheered, retreating back to their towers.
Several miles away in the Ramtop Mountains.
"Dododod do do, oh, what's this? A letter from my dear Grandson Ram. My heavens, it's been ages since i've last heard from him. I'm so glad to know he still remembers his dear old grandma. Now let's see what he has to say...Uh-hu....Oh, a Ninja Monkey? How nice...Daemons, oh, how terrible....?...THREE THOUSAND PANS OF MY SPECIAL BROWNIE COOKIES?....Well, better get started!
Now, I'm not 100% sure of what Ragnorak was hinting at in his last post, so i'm going to leave the plot development to him for now. But the villains and heroes can say how they left the Oblivion gate and such. And I know I kind-of went against what I said in my previous spoiler, but A)I'm the OP and B) I wanted this fixed good and quick. Sorry if this inconvenienced some people.
Ok i have taken the time to read since my family incident and all this and then my computer broke down not to long ago currently i am on a labtop and i have no idea of what is going on Sorry ill be back.... i think Petey has broken my brain.
Ok i have taken the time to read since my family incident and all this and then my computer broke down not to long ago currently i am on a labtop and i have no idea of what is going on Sorry ill be back.... i think Petey has broken my brain.
Ok i have taken the time to read since my family incident and all this and then my computer broke down not to long ago currently i am on a labtop and i have no idea of what is going on Sorry ill be back.... i think Petey has broken my brain.
Ok i have taken the time to read since my family incident and all this and then my computer broke down not to long ago currently i am on a labtop and i have no idea of what is going on Sorry ill be back.... i think Petey has broken my brain.
Just means you haven't been posting so we've been inflicting pain on your charecter, not like your dead or even seriosly injured, hell, i had the front half of my charecters body cut off and im still here, oh and we don't want a ton of OOC only posts so message me if you wish to continue the conversation =P
Plot development, huh? Ram, I gotta tell you, I had as little clue about what was going on as anyone else, I just kind of moved Rag a little ways away and developed his character a bit. Whatevs. I'll deal. Let's see...crystal gone, but Daedra warrior on way to replace it...villains and all...OK, I have a plan. Kind of.
The Daedra Warrior with the crystal arrived at the top of the Sigil tower and slotted it in. The Oblivion Gate flickered to life as the Scamp detachment Ragnorak had asked for arrived. The heroes all kind of set themselves, until Ragnorak explained what he was doing. "Torogrect, the Daedra Lord of this particular little corner of Oblivion, is an old friend of mine. He's helping us out with some research into...a matter of the Bureaucrats. These Scamps'll report to me with their findings. Right?"
<color=crimson>"Dat's de plan, guv'nor. Just tell us where to go and we'll tell you what we fink we've found. Any partic'lar areas you want us lookin' at?"
"The East Coast of the United States. Try to keep from being found. I don't want to panic the populace."
<color=crimson>"Aww, but dat's harf de fun, guv'nor! Alright, alright..."
"Weekly reports are fine. Go." The Scamps left. "Now, what do we do, besides leave?" He asked.
"Ah, lets go back to the inn. All of us, villains included. We'll have a party!" said Ram.
the party was a truly awesome one, filled with women,and men, and cat nip, and Ale. in the morning everyone woke up naked in a lake.
"ahhhhh, what a beautiful WHAT THE FUCK AM I DOING NAKED!?!?" splazor shouted, waking up everyone. Everyone woke up and were naked. when all of the sudden alot of creepy creepy old men in robes came out of the woods. they just stood there an oogled the heros and villians. it was a very awkward. when all of the sudden the old men DID A FACE RAPE ATTACK! the heros scrambled to avoid it, but couldn't they were overcomed before breaking there old pelvis's and walking off toward the CLIFFS OF SHOPPING!
"Ahh, there there, Roberts," Ram soothingly said, tapping Roberts on his tiny back, nearly crushing him.
"We'll get you you're blankie back, post haste! Now, do you know where it wen-Oh! Sorry little guy."
A small blue hand waved frantically, the rest of the body being buried in dirt.
"Let me just pull you out..."
"AHH! QUIT BITING ME!"
"Ah sowy. I don haff hands!" Ram mumbled, his mouth gripping Roberts.
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Sorry ill be back.... i think Petey has broken my brain.
